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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 18:13 EDT
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OMG. I love this story. You definitely have to upload some pictures of the pumpkins. Mine was really cute. It was a bat, but I can't get any pictures now because it's all... yucky...lol. Guess what? My birthday is in 8 days!! Woohoo!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry to have neglected you, my favorite author with my favorite story. I have been suffering from a communication blockage like Mercury in retrograde times ten. I recently had a change in my life and it took some getting used to. Anyway, about the story. I'm not sad about Inu no Taishou being an abusive parent. Judging from the memories, he was probably abused himself and though he was doing the right thing or some other messed up thing that causes psychologists to go crazy. I also liked the bath scene in chapter 39... I feel like maybe I should make a list and draw and color the boys so I can keep them straight in my mind. I I had time and skill I probably would. I am pretty sure that I was giggling my was through chapter 40. I think that guy had all of the combined stupidity of all of the guys that had ever liked Kagome. I think Sesshoumaru has a think for Kagome's ass... I also think that even if he didn't already want his arm back he would quickly find the ability to grasp one cheek in each hand reason enough to want that arm. ... now I am thinking about sexy stripes in sexy places for some reason... I wonder if he has them on his ankles... anyway... It seems that someone is going to have to come to Inuyasha's rescue... and I be that Kagome will be quite worried... didn't I already say this? I think it is wonderful that Sesshy likes to show off. Such a beautiful and perfect creature should not withhold his grace power from those lucky enough to wittiness it. I'm so so so so so happy that everyone gets to call Kagome "Mama". I was smiling through the whole part of that chapter. It looks like the kitty, doggie and dragon like to gossip. Cool. Well... I'm done rambling for now. Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewed By: MertMidnightAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally read stuff over 30 chapters, but this is awesome!!! I especially love Sesshou-kun's line at the end of the latest chappie. Update soon, onegai!!!! My friends and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 19:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love this story!!! please up date as son as you can!! ja ne!
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Title: sooo goood
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 27, 2007 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, this is getting so good. I just read the chapter from yesterday and I must say, WOW. Those were some good chapters. I liked the message thing about Sesshoumaru's mother. I wonder what she is trying to tell him. I wonder what is in that scroll. It must be something important for her to contact Sesshoumaru after death and through Kagome. Then Sesshoumaru's son tells him about the aura and them mixing. I would have thought that he would have kept it a secret from his father, but you surprised me on that one. Sesshoumaru seems so shocked about it. Then he gets all happy. Never would have thought to see Sesshoumaru happy. He's in his own little world until Kagome brings him out of it. His beast tried to tell him all along. Then that villager came, he must not be to smart. I thought that was funny how you made that villager. Ohh I also liked the part where Sesshoumaru grabs Kagome's butt. Never would have seen that coming. You really surprised me though when you made Kagome start to hear things at a demons level. I would have never thought of that. I wonder what that could be about though. I think it probably has more to it then just Sesshoumaru's youki. I know that you would probably bring up something about that later. Though even I am getting worried about Inuyasha. I wonder what you are going to do about him. He should know that Kagome will always be there for him. I hope that next chapters are as good as the rest of the chapters you have written. Hope to see one soon.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Two chapters today! I actually went into withdrawl yesterday.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 26, 2007 17:48 EDT
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haha Brilliant! The last part had me in a fit of giggles. To perfect!!
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Reviewed By: gratefulreader On: October 26, 2007 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 24, 2007 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for the late update have more exams. BLUH. Anyways I just read chapters 37 and 38 and I must say that you out done yourself on these also. I did wonder why Kagome could not sense the jewel shard. I wonder if it has anything to do with bonding with demons. It was cute how Sesshoumaru would not let Kagome down after she was attacked. Slept in a tree and everything with her. I jus thought it was very kawaii because he would not let her go for nothing. I wonder when Inuyasha would come back so he can really see what Sesshoumaru is really about. I thought that Sesshoumaru's father was very mean. He didn't treat him very good. No wonder he turned out the way he did. I bet that you have this memory has significance in sometime later in the story because you probably would not have written it if it did. I just think it so cool that they can share memories with each other. That can give them a better understanding of each other. I wonder what Sesshoumaru will get Kagome for her birthday since she is spending it in the feudal era. Ohh it just can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I also read your note about not being able to get chapters update during Halloween. That's ok cause you want to spend time with your daughter and that's a good enough reason not to write chapters as fast. Well hope you get those treats done and have a good Halloween.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I have missed a lot of chapters!! while gone , the story is unfolding wonderfully btw !!! why has yasha stayed gone for so long , he isnt going to stay gone is he?
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 24, 2007 17:10 EDT
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I was so close to crying at the memories of chibi fluffy. Wow poor thing and yet he still remained semi normal ^^ love it
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 05:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**sigh** I had my review all written up and ready to go and I lost it in a cut and paste accident. I am sorry as this will deprive you of my first impressions and has worn on my patience, which I am beginning to wonder may not be as near-limitless as I once knew it to be. I really loved this chapter. I wish I could have had the privilege to see the procession that Kaede, Sango, and Miroku were treated to. I wouldn't be surprised if the whole village had erupted into a fit of laughter once the demons were a safe distance away. I could see them coming to be known as the city of giggles after this. I was also wondering if Kirara will have a visible mark from Sango from the bonding or if is is just a miko thing... Sango does seem to have some sort of spiritual power seeing as she can detect demonic auras whereas some people cannot (the exorcist with the salt) lol.... one thing I thought during the slaying of the stupid demon with the shard is: "Hey, Sessh, you've got something stuck in your hair... let me get it for you." Who wouldn't want to fondle Sesshoumaru's hair. A good 30 seconds could be worth the possibility of it ending in death... I would never allow him to take a shower unless I had a hair trap on the drain... I had hair to the bottom of my ass at one time, and I can only imagine what knee length, youkai hair could do to plumbing... um... I think I went off on a tangent again... Well as always, I will look forward to the next chapter. I may be late in my reviews most of the time now, but I will still try to review each chapter. A great writer such as yourself deserves no less... especially as much as you spoil us, your faithful fans. See you next time!
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Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im really hooked on to this fanfic, sessho and kagome really make me laugh.Its just so funny how they flirt with each other, really makes me feel like im right there observing whats happening,very rare to get that from a fanfic. I still cant believe i read all the chapters up until this one in 2 days ahhh my eyes, but its worth it. I cant wait for the lemons and i do agree with you, that its better to get the plot first before rushing in.Really love this fanfic it makes me laugh alot.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cute the way Sess treed Kagome because he had been so worried.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 23, 2007 18:43 EDT
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Incredibly kawaii. And man i wish i had a fluffy dog demon to sleep and cuddle with! If only i did...i guess its just me and my golden for the time being though. Or well until i have giant fluffy dog demon...oh yes maybe i will hehe
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