| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: October 23, 2007 01:22 EDT
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"Damnit, put me down!" sounds like a great chapter. I'm amazed that you have the time to write what you've written so far. Are you a stay at home mom? I'd much rather wait for something great than read something poor, so I'll gladly wait for your posts. You write very well, so if you ever decide to write a book, please make a note at the end of this story - I'd buy it. I enjoy a well written story, even if it's outside of my normal genres. (>'.')> Kirby wants to go trick or treating with you. :P
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that Kirara is going to be able to speak with Sango now. I was hopping this chapter would include the conversation and bonding... but now I have something to look forward to along with the whatever your ext chapter's name meant. I am really curious about that! I loved the kiss so much! It was perfect! Now the pups know what a perfect kiss should look like! Wow! Sesshoumaru has never been kissed until now? lol that's sweet! I didn't think he would have kissed those unfeeling bitches anyway. Kind of an old guy to be getting his first kiss. I certainly hope he enjoys whatever will come of the subjugation beads. I know I am looking forward to seeing what happens. I felt so bad for Inuyasha sitting in his cave... I bet that whatever is in Izayoi's box has some significance to the prophecy. I'm also glad that Kohaku has entered the picture even though it can bring a lot of angst into the picture. I have seen him occasionally cut out just to get around that, but he is an important character. He has an enormous strength of will and is willing to sacrifice himself to put an and to the evil of Naraku. This, allong with his intelligence and determination combined with his gentle nature make him a character that I feel is often mistreated by fanfiction writers when they want to milk or avoid his tragic presence. I have the feeling that whatever you do with him will surprise me in some ways and maybe not in others, but which ways remains to be seen... Well I am sure i am forgetting somethign that I wanted to comment on, but I think I will have to save trying to use up the 4000 character limit for these comments for some other day. I'm sure you have some chapters to come that will call for it! See you next time!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 22, 2007 15:18 EDT
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Finally sango is going to have a connection as well! so excited for that. brilliant chapter once again.
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Reviewed By: starfury On: October 22, 2007 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* love your fic :) keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: soo goood
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 21, 2007 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh I just read the chapters that you written today and I must say that they were great. I was surprised that you written 2 chapters in 1 day and made both of them long. That must have taken alot of work but it turned out great in the end. I was surprised that Jaken didn't get killed in the end when he told all that to Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru is starting to be open with his feelings, which is good in his case. At least Sango told Kagome what she thought and she and Miroku are very perceptive of the situation. At least Kagome got it in the end and told Sesshoumaru about it. It just keeps getting better and better. Sesshoumaru finally told Kagome and I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next. I was surprised that Inuyasha finally figured out his feelings for Kagome. At least now he won't be in the way of those two. Then the kiss was just like wow. I liked the part where you made them kiss to transfer energy but then you made them kiss again just for the heck of it. Ohhh this story is just getting to good to stop reading. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter. I wonder when they will find Kagome's dad and is she still mad about the whole not telling the truth thing. But you probably won't tell me cause that would defeat the purpose of seeing what happens next chapter if you tell me. That's ok cause I would still read it even if you told me. That's how good its getting. Well hope you continue to write cause this is getting to good to stop. You did a great job on these chapters as well. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: l,adydot On: October 21, 2007 20:51 EDT
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adorable! what a cute mental picture of that last ending scene.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 19:52 EDT
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All I have to say about this last part of the chapter is: FINALLY! Great job, I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Thanks for the double chapters! I really, really liked the last one.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: October 21, 2007 17:44 EDT
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Two chapters in one day! :) (>'o')> 2
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 16:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this just gets better and better each time.....and 2 updates in one day ohh hoow you spoil us.....how long do you thinkk your going to make it?......keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad that your day at least started out better! I am also glad that you liked my comment. I wrote that sentence down right after I read that paragraph. There was only one way to describe it, so I wanted to get it down. I throughly enjoyed this chapter! Kagura was on her way... so she had to show up sometime right? ...And what really old guy (who happens to have the body of a god and I don't mean Buddha) not react in such a way to a young and very healthy woman in a string bikini when he has never seen or heard of such a thing? Add that to the fact that she is undoubtedly "pure" and she is in no way looking embarrassed by her attire. Frankly I'm surprised he didn't fall over in a dead faint, but nearly drowning was close enough. That would have been an amusing cause of death for the great Sesshoumaru!... Oh yeah, this chapter... Once my mind goes off on a tangent there really is no graceful way of pulling it back. I really found that eating my burrito was made difficult when my jaw would go slack in reaction to Sesshoumaru's comments. He's such a dirty old dog. Those pups have got to be the best kids in the world... but I am fully aware that they are there are no such children anywhere... so sad... If they were like that I wouldn't mind having seven of them... I am looking forward to seeing Inuyasha as a beta male. He really kind of sucks as an alpha because he's so damned moody. He can't help it though... I can't wait until the night of the new mood.... hehehehe... ok 'nuff of that. Your chapter has my brain dancing all around trying to avoid hentai land... can't wait till tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 20, 2007 16:24 EDT
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Oh cranky woman syndrome! I get a lot accomplished during that stage of moods. Surprisingly i haven't killed anyone to get things done..yet. And this chapter was wonderful! i had tears of mirth falling down my face with kagome telling sesh to drop his pants!. Oh and i think you'd like this song. Check it out its got a good beat and maybe will help your mood ^^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R9ZQuEd3Q6c
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 19, 2007 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope everything goes ok with you. Hope you get through everything that you are going through. I see that didn't hinder you in the least about the chapter. I loved it. That scene with Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru, and Kagome was so cute. I should have known that they would have dirty thoughts about Kagome. The scene where Sesshoumaru and Kagome was just so sweet. You got me by surprise when both of them started to talk about Sesshoumaru's arm.I would have never thought of that. I liked it though. At least Sesshoumaru knows that Kagome is not disgusted by him. I do wonder though if he will ever get his arm back. Ohh I just can't wait to see what happens when Kagome has to clean the wound on Sesshoumaru's leg. I know that you will make that real good. Hope to see another chapter soon cause this was just so good. I hope that everything goes good for you.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: October 19, 2007 18:58 EDT
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"Thank Kami for Jaken naked. Wait, no, I didn't just think that." Holy FN Hell! That's the funniest quote ever.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 19, 2007 18:29 EDT
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I hope your night is better then your day. Its never to good to be in a pouty sad or off rocker mood. I know i was today as well and i kinda ate basically everything in the house. So essentially i feel like a fat hippo but what can i do? Abosuletly nothing now. I know it wasn't good to eat all that food but i did...But i do say this chapter was incredibly lovey dovie. And it made my day! So thank you for posting. And the next chapters title sounds hilarious! i can't wait to see what will happen in it.
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