| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 16:26 EDT
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Sigh, I saw your note at the bottom. I haven't been reading the past reviews. I'm of your opinion. If a person doesn't care for a chapter just because they would 'prefer' that you wrote something else, then the reader needs to keep the 'preference' close to his/her chest. Preferences are the author's prerogative. I have preferences, too. Just about the only times I whine like a baby is if I know the author and enjoy poking. Almost every story I've ever read had at least two or three chapters that I would have preferred to skip. I realize that it is simply because of 'my' preference, 'my' addiction to action and had absolutely nothing to do with the author.....On another note, if you have a lot of fans and write frequent notes to them in your chapters, they will come to feel as though you are their friend. In such surroundings, they may feel as though it is okay to push you. They might not see it so much as demanding as being playful while letting you know that they are anxious and love the story. There is a fine line that is hard to see when exhausted....Anywho, please don't jump ship. I'm really enjoying the story--even if I am a very bad reviewer. BTW, shivers on the whole Sesshoumaru vampire deal. I sure hope that we get to see that side of him again. You sure made him romantic. sigh *starry eyes* Man, those guys are starting to get on my nerves. They really did come between those two. Part of the mess was their fault. He might have actually been able to reach out to her if he didn't have to deal with them. He could have 'wooed' her. Garrrh! Now you've made me crave'Rromantic Sesshoumaru'! Gah! I am not going to ask you to update quickly because you are fantastic with updates. I do appreciate that, very much. Thank you for the effort. I know about the late nights--work, college, kids, homework, then writing at one a.m. in the morning. I feel ya. Kudos to you! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 19:41 EDT
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Finish soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this chapter. It's so nice to have Sesshoumaru so kind. I pray that you will update very soon. I cry every moment there isn't another chapter to reaad.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 15:47 EDT
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this is good update soon
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Title: Awww
Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, I want to pet Sessho too! But I bet he'd probably rip my arm off cuz I'm not Kagome ^_^ and I hope Inu Papa can help even more! Thanks for the update (i get them from this site) bye
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 04:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoops wrong story.... ok... why doesn't InuYasha understand what his dad is saying in Inu????
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 04:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!!!!!!!111 ***spelling/wording*** Walking over to the bed, she removed the dress from the ***bad*** (bag) and removed the tags. Lucky he *had to time for* (had time for/had time to have) another shower, before getting dressed and heading to the restaurant.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanna hug him too!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 01:28 EDT
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I loved it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 20:44 EDT
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Oh! I was hoping that she would get to pet him in his doggie form! It would be too wonderful to have him in his dog form for awhile, following her around like a lost puppy. I hope dear old dad can cage Inuyasha. He would ruin things for sure. Oh! And I was hoping to hear barking dog talk. LOL Thanks for not disappointing me in this chapter! I loved it and am tickled pink. Can't wait to see what you do next! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first i thought i wouldn't like the flashback chapters, but it so so much less annoying than random flashbacks, and you do such a great job. And i just wish there were more people who can wright as well as you that wright fanfiction. And i love the story. Please update
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. I'm not really big on the Kagome/Sess pairing, only if they're AU and only if they're well written, which yours is. And I AM SO THANKFUL!! I like the between chapters explaining why things are the way they are. But a quick question, where's Sango and Rin? Not that they're presence will make no nevermind. Just curious and awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ceira aka n8tivegurl On: March 24, 2008 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What?! Inuyasha was going to...I'm glad he didn't. I'm also glad that Kagome finally got to Inuyasha before he did something dumb. Oh so Manten was the demon who pissed himself in the very beginning! Oh thats great! Anyways thanks for the update^^
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 14:59 EDT
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This chapter is great! Actually the whole story is great! Early on I always kinda preferred the present day chapters, but as it goes on I find that I look forward to the past chapters just as much. I can't wait to see how Shippo joins the group.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 14:22 EDT
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this is so good. i've been wondering will sess dying affect kagome in any way (other than being sad). i mean if sess has the syndrome and is linked to kags emotions then couldnt he affect her as well?
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