| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 27, 2004 18:38 CST
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ooohh....so sad...i think bakura-kun is the only one that hasn't been raped yet...i hope it stays that way, T.T poor marik...i cant wait to find out what happens next.. maybe its just me but i think the whole malik maril thing could have been more violent... i dunno... ur ryou one was a little more... but hey, you did a great job!! although the_wonderfully_talented_bakurasgirl is always great
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 27, 2004 08:56 CST
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* Starts bawling like Hayden* so sad! Poor Aten....... at least part of Steven's dead... kind of.... I don't want to strangle you since you updated other things too.... but if this keeps up..... I'm sending Bakura! * pulls him by a leashe*...mmmm..... Baku....:)
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: January 26, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I suggest Marik run, REALLY fast. That is, if can walk first. Poor Yami, payback's a bitch, ne? I won't be able to review till Friday, sorry! Till then, ja! Good chapter! You write the GREATEST things!!And you draw EXCELLENETLY!!
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 26, 2004 19:08 CST
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SQUEE!SQUEEEE!SQUEEEE! Totaly SQUEE tastic!... good, good, chappy!!! bakurasgirl_kicks_ass_as_a_writer! good job bakurasgirl...more chapters like that i hope....
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 18:41 CST
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aww poor Marikcries don't do that to my favotior Yami. good chapter.
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 16:31 CST
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EEEKKK!!! DAMN IT! I just read all the chappies I have not reveiwed on yet- superb! Poor Marik...Why does he have to be baaackkk? And why Malik? ::cries:: Well, getting normal, Superb chappie, and I'll be waiting, skiping my class's and watching for your update. Chau!!! Emily
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 26, 2004 08:27 CST
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....If I didn't like Yami Dragon's lemons too... I'd strangle you both........Poor Marik!!!! *slumps to the ground with a sad, dazed look*........
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: January 25, 2004 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm now officially hooked. It took me 2 days straight to finish everything in this series. 2 DAYS STRAIGHT!! Can't wait till Monday!! Just can't!!
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 25, 2004 21:51 CST
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oooh...spooky, spooky malik!....SQUEE! silly aria, books like that are for adults....dum, de, dum, de , dum...i think the_great_bakurasgirl keeps getting better... Hey! if any one would like to talk about bakurasgirl's fic, mail me! bakura_itemri@yahoo.com! hehehemwahahaha! squeezy cheese goes good with crackers and bakura/marik....! hope we get some marik or bakura action, marik can keep his sticky book... as long as he works for it...we need a threesome...hm.....?
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 25, 2004 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eww.... sticky book...* runs into the bathroom* OHHHH!!! Naked chibi in the tub! * runs over to him until Marik grabs her from Aten* OHHHH!!! Owner of the 'Prey upon the innocent' thingy! * hugs him really, really hard. OHHHHH!!!!!!! Updates, TOMORROW!!! * hugs you, then, again, sees Seto!*
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: January 24, 2004 17:50 CST
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Teeheehee! That teachers a freakin' jerk, so he got what he deserved!! bwuahahaha! toture/blood/gore sex! woot!
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Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 23:26 CST
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Haven't had a chance to read or review in a while. Thought I'd make an appearance again. Lol. Impressive work. I thought it was interesting and cute that Bakura taught Aria how to hide a body >giggles
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 23, 2004 23:06 CST
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the next chappy sounds absolutly wonerful, you do a great job of making people want to read some more bakurasgirl...or maybe blood, gore, and sex justs attracks me....*think, think*... any way...i cant wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 23, 2004 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Daddy's blood lust! * hugs you tightly, then sees Seto and Bakura and hugs them* Thanks! This was a GREAT chapter! I was starting to get worried that he'd let her grow up without being able to hide a body! :) really wish the Enjoyment Factor:10 thhingy would go up to 1,000,000,000! That's what my rating would be!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 22, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read 20 chapters!!! YEAH!!! Have you noticed that your ratings keep going up? First PG13... now.... A GLORIOUS N17!!! * hugs Bakura till he turns blue, then does the same with Seto.... then both at the same time!* I'm so like Anzu.... sometimes....:) I was wondering.... could you have a scene where Aku sees a Garden Gnome? Those things scare the heck out of me.... *shivers and whacks one really, really hard*
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