| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 18, 2004 16:07 CST
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that was squee tastic...my friend said angst ment fear in german....hmmm...*think,think*...any way... that was a good chappy, ryou is soooo trusting, thats a good thing for bakura... do you already know how the story ends? if not i suggest you trap aku in the ultimat place of torture from which he may never escape... anzu's mind...*shivers*
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 18, 2004 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*slowly plots Aku's demise while trying to get the bread crumbs out my keybaord* Nooo! Bakura!!! remember man come on you can do it! (or else i will make you sit naked around in my computer..muwhahaha) lol anywho poor ryou..the lines have yet to be torn...good stuffing nayway! *praying for happyful updates soon!*
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Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
long time no review sorry. been doing a lot of thing only having time to quickly read. me bad. But the story great so far. Someone need to cut Aku pride and joy off and watch him run around screaming. grins evilly. oh I did come up with some new stories if you every feel like reading some. well see ya around.
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 09:58 CST
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Damn Aku... Oh yeah..um, Great chappie! lol I'll be checking my mail for the next one! Continue soon! Chau! Emily
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 18, 2004 08:42 CST
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And now, only Seto and Joey have are perfectly happy! * looks horrified and slaps a hand on her mouth* I didn't cay that! * runs over to Seto and clings to his leg, completely ignoring a bewildered Joey*
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 08:41 CST
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Hmm... interesting chapters eh? Yay to happiness and darkness and evil little squirells who tap on your windows at night and feed off of your decaying body... wait that's vultures. Same thing! ^_^ Happiness!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 18, 2004 08:37 CST
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Ow..... I don't care if Aku's the bringer of hot, egyptian, yami's... he's just.... wrong....:( When are you updating?!?!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 16, 2004 23:36 CST
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Now that I've gotten over the shock of the best chapter... ever.... in the history of fanfics... I Want My Baki Back! *Whacks him over the head and drags him back to her wall.* Ahh.... that's MUCH better... :)
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gahhhhhh *drools* CHOCOLATE! Chocolate+Ryou=Annnnggg! (sexy word) I was loving it, bloodlusty insane, it was soo great! i really want chocolate now though...but yeah, man, gootta watch out for that blood dont we? *runs the image of the chocolate covered couple again and again and AGAIN in my mind* Sweeeet...literally!poor Malik...and the kids...what will they do? after seeing their daddy all evil-a-fied?! nooooo!! *whimper* but then i feel specail because im cute! *feels specail* MUWHAHAHAAH! *tackles* squeEEEE!!!!!Is that all I wanted to say? I wish I could have read this before schoolso then i would have been the first to review! Power to the people!!!!!!!Power to the bloodlust*does happy dance*
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 15, 2004 18:25 CST
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yum...Ryou's chocolate erection(aka ryou's chocolate cover nuts)...sounds good... lol... that was such a good chappy, my heart was racing at the end..sex,blood,angst,violence,fear a good chappy does make...so sad for malik though...poor thing....*hugs malik*...awww poor hikari... i hope aku leaves poor malik alone... if any one is going to be in malik's sould room...its going to be marik...
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 15:37 CST
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Oh my lord I have NOT reveiwed in a while...-__- but OMG good chappie!! I REALLY enjoyed this chapter...lol great work,your a wonderfull writer, I'll be waiting for the next chappie! Chau! Emily
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 15, 2004 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Shivering with a bar of chocolate in her hands* .........EEP! * jumps under her desk* 5 minuets later: That was so good! Creepy, and making it so you now have Bakura... not me... * runs into her room and unchains him from her wall* It seemed so innocent.... chocolate and Yaoi... then.... Baka Aku....* darts under desk again* 10 minuets later: YEAH Aku! Bringer of the hot, Egyptian, Yami's! :)
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 13, 2004 19:55 CST
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*squeezes the yami plushie* *yami plushie "SQUEEK"* *raises eyebrow* hmmmmm.... *gives the_great_bakurasgirl_best_bakura/ryou_ autheress_in_the_world a bakura plushie*... fair trade ne? cant wait till the next chappy great_autheress_bakurasgirl, sounds good...
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 13, 2004 09:58 CST
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WHAT!?! That was sooooo short...:( Incredibly good... but short....
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 13, 2004 08:55 CST
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Does happy dance, if you liek lemon coming up scream!*ahh!* if you love bloodlust scmream!*ahh!* yeah thought i had to do my own little cheer. man..people and their gardens...but roses are pretty! ^-^ *cheers* go Malik fight fight fight for youyr rights! Yeahhh!!!! Make Tea come and kill AKu! Yeahhh!!!!! lol...that would be the day...O.o
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