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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: July 27, 2004 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait !! Hold it right there!!! U can't split Inu & Kag up !! Where's the happy ending the love the happiness (wail wail not fair get them back together again PLEASE !!!!!!) Anyway thanks for the update. Scream bloody murder !!!Come on pretty please get Inu and Kag back together !!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 01:45 PDT
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Awesome chapter. I hope Kagome is going to be alright and will refuse the transfer :( Anyway, update soon and good luck! :D
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: July 26, 2004 23:52 PDT
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hey this is a really great chapter can't wait until you update again which i hope is soon keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: July 26, 2004 23:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o my that was a very sad chapter! i feel really bad for kag and inu since both sides are kind of... well anyways... it was an awsome chapter an it's no big deal that you took a little longer to update. you still have your good quality writing which i wouldn't mind to wait to read. besides.. it quicker then most of my favorite stories's updates, so i'm happy. you've written yet another awsome chapter with good details to show the expressions of how the characters feel and act. especialy making the readers have some type of emotion to the writing. well keep up the good work, i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Trillian42 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:42 PDT
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Honey, your fans didn't complain~ some jerk is on a witch-hunt over there. Busstop Fairytale is gone, too. Sorry you had to lose all your reviews, not to mention your account. I agree, they should e-mail you before they yank you. Anyway, I love this story, except for this last chapter, of course. I do hope you will fix this! There will be a happy ending, right?
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Reviewed By: Trillian42 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:41 PDT
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Honey, your fans didn't complain~ some jerk is on a witch-hunt over there. Busstop Fairytale is gone, too. Sorry you had to lose all your reviews, not to mention your account. I agree, they should e-mail you before they yank you. Anyway, I love this story, except for this last chapter, of course. I do hope you will fix this! There will be a happy ending, right?
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Reviewed By: ?_? On: July 26, 2004 22:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
rawrrrr that was sexy. I hope u can update soon!
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Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god..come on Kagome...just think about this...Sit and think...Stop reacting and just think girl....I CAN'T BELIEVE FF.NET GOT TO YOU TO.!...They're going to get everyone soon!!!..I know it...they are going to get every single last rated R person on ff.net.
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Reviewed By: SakuraWolf26 On: July 26, 2004 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this was really great.I wonder..Maybe she is preg...She is showing some of the signs but if she is the way she is acting towards her body will be bad for the kid..Anyway I hope you update this soon..Maybe you could make a new account on ff.net under a new name and work your way up to getting your reviews back
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Reviewed By: Squishy (Irene) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad I remembered your username on here sicne 'The Ad' doesn't come up on searches.. I'm mad about that whole FF.net thing, ppl should make a protest about that i mean it's rated R the kids should know what to expect in that expecially when a warning is put up in the chapters too. Anyway, I'm 15 now ^_^ turned it on July.24.2004 =) I really did like this chapter and I hope to see a next one soon --Irene PS If Sesshomaru, like Inuyasha, could smell wether Kagome's grandfather was dieing then will KAGome be mad at him too?
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:15 PDT
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i LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!! i'm glad u updated!!!!!!!!!! i hope u write an Epilogue, as long as its a happy one : ) plz update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great story! ^-^
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I really like your story :-D. Kagome's pregnant isn't she?? ^-^ yeah lol but I also got kicked off ff.net... cuz I had a lemon in one of my stories. If you had a lemon in your story that could be why... Unleash your imagination and free your soul my ass! *clears throat* anyways so I hope you'll update soon! ^-^ ~Silver Moon Dragon
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Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And thus all the lies and deciet have finally been revealed..yippy! Wow, another excellent chapter as always!! I really enjoyed the pacing and development in this chapter. I was especially surprisd and entertained when I found some humour admist all the gloom through the chain reaction that occurred between all the lovers. Just goes to show how females tend to rally together in the face of heartache. My pysche abilities are telling me to expect baby cribes and craddles in the future of your story. The latter thought in mind, I'm already dying for a sequel to this story where IY&K discover the joys of parenthood, but that's just my wishful thinking. Anyways, sory to read about the whole FF.net situation. That's been happening to alot of great authors lately. I really don't understand why certain people complain like that, but i'm still glad I can read you on MM.org and AFF.net. Update when you can, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: July 26, 2004 18:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello i just started reading this fic a couple days ago and to my surprise, you updated today! this story is really great and i've never read a sesshomaru - kagura story and the first is great! you started to make me think, well i wont say cuz that might end up happening, and i would hate myself for ruining it for everyone, and you probably would too. well update when you can because we all appreciate it. ficfan
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they better get back together!! update really soon. i love your story and i cant wait to see how it ends
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