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Reviewed By: pretty_in_punk On: July 28, 2004 18:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my friend told me about this fic and said it was one of the best she has ever read!! and i agree...the whole idea is just so original and ah! i just love it...my friend was like wouldnt it be so cool if inuyasha maybe placed an ad in a paper to get her back somehow...i was like that would be so cool and romantic but i'm sure whatever you do to finish this story up is gonna be way better than anything we could ever come up with!! keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: lilcraziazngurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 18:43 PDT
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hey....omg...when i found i out u were kicked off I WAS FURIOUS!! i was like wut in the bloody hell happened! all my reviews were gone, u werent on my fav authors or fav stories!! i was soo upset! but thank GOODNESS ur still on mediaminer! thanx kami-sama! awesome chappie....but extremely heartbreakin!! i wish kagome would just make up w/ everione. i know shes hurtin and everithin, but inuyasha doesnt want the money now...he wants kagome. and jiji-chan was just tryin to get the best for kagome. and miroku....he was just helpin...ahh...kagome..just forgive...plz!! welll, its gettin awesome and i CANT WAIT to read more!! so u know wut to do now! update update update!
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Reviewed By: Daedreamer On: July 28, 2004 18:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job! for a while there I thought you would stop writing! phew! so happy you continued! so... kagome's pregnant, no? anywhoo, this story rocks!
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Title: Darckinu
Reviewed By: darckinu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 14:08 PDT
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Hey love your story you got my atention since the first chap never wrotte a review but i think it's time for me to loet you knwo that you're doing great, well that's what a think!!! poor Kag and porr Inu hope you update soon, I like the way you writte you're a great author bye bye
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Reviewed By: dragonflyhuntress On: July 28, 2004 11:25 PDT
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I almost cried!!!! It was so sad!!!! Please tell me they're going to solve this??? Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. i HATE FF.NET
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Title: wow another fic just as good as all the others!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (not loged in yet) On: July 27, 2004 23:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a finnal chapter nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! this can't be this fic is tooooooo good to end!!!!! ^_^ kee up the good work update when u can!!! X_x i hope InuYasha and Kagome make it all up!!
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohhhh...good sotry can't wait to read when you update!
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Title: oh the drama...
Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter, actually the whole story. This is so exciting and suspensefull, I bet she's pregnant. is she? I can't believe there is just 1 more chapter left... I'm really going to miss this story when you finish it. I'm so mad at ff.net for erased it... this story is really good, the feelings, the anguish, the love, the betrayal, the passion... wow... it's just amazing. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint ( ) On: July 27, 2004 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what ~did~ he do to her?? is she gonna have a kid? or is it just bonding stuff? wiggy but a great chapter, the story just keeps getting deeper and deeper!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 27, 2004 16:14 PDT
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That seems to be happening a lot lately, I think that ff.net really need to work on their rating definitions. Excellent chapter. I think I have an idea about the final twist but I will say nothin g about it, have to wait till next time to find out if I'm right. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: July 27, 2004 13:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o i forgot to ask if you were going to sign back on ff.net but i don't think it'll really matter. (just checking) i can see that'd be using a bit of time... anyways i also forgot to mention in my review earlier that i'm guessing that kagome's pregnant? since her periods late, she's been meeting her breakfast, stressed out more then usual, and can't go to NY because of a 'health condition.' maybe inu was being too rough? lol i wonder what sessh and kagu are going to do to inu if kag tells them. dun dun dun! as long as they'll be back together, i'm going to be a very happy camper! i really can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 11:44 PDT
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Wow. Poor Kagome. She is pregnant isn't she? Why won't she just listen to Inu? I know she is hurt but she just keeps running away and won't give him the time of the day. Poor Inu. He was right to fear telling her the truth, she just won't listen. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze On: July 27, 2004 09:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fanfic; as a matter of fact, I've loved it ever since I read the first chapter! Could you please try reposting on ff.net? It's a pain never knowing when you update another chapter with Author Alerts and I've a limited time to spend online.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 09:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter...Excellent story! I wonder though, is Kagome pregnant????? Keep up with the good work and please update soon... I have to know what happens....I can't beieve it is almost over! :(
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: July 27, 2004 09:07 PDT
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i was just thinkin bout this story the other nite and uvwe updated! i must have special powers lol i love this story to death. i'm so sad bout kagome!! shes pregnant isnt she? yep she has to be. oh n they must get together. i will jump into the story n kick her ass if she doesnt lol im so violent =P excuse my madness.
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