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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 21:32 PDT
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Great chapter. It's sad to see that the story is ending. I'll be interested in reading the alternate ending, seeing as I'm wondering how it will end up. Anyway, good luck with the new story. It looks really good, from what you had written about it.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 21:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i'm so sad to see this Fic ending but all good thing's dont last forever you kno? well any way!...........keep up your good work and i look forward to reading all other Fic's from you!
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Reviewed By: Zoingy On: August 04, 2004 20:22 PDT
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AW man!!! I'm crying!!! I swear!!! Your good....dead good. That chappy was so sweet!! Please keep updating! Bye Your number1 Fan: Zoingy (kaoru-chaness
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 19:20 PDT
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Awesome story. I love it. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Radhika14024 On: August 03, 2004 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pinkI cant bieleve ff.com sdeleted ur account. I was looking for this story for days... update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 07:44 PDT
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The "Tide Saga" is good. And I loved your version of the demon ceremony. Beautiful. I'm little disappointed in Kagome though. She just passed the bar and already screwing up. You can't anull (yeah I know, spelled wrong) a consimated marriage. And I think it's safe to say they have done that throughly. Good job on the lemons by the way. All very streamy/sweet. It was cute to have Miroku leave Kirara. Such a sweet gesture. I think Sango is abosolutly right. Kagome is running away just like she did with Hojo. For someone that insisted they be friends even after the break up she never talk to or about him again once finding out he was gay. And I wonder what was so bad that it kept her from flying. Not that I wanted her to leave but I doubt that InuYasha could have grounded each plane she would try to leave on. I hope Sesshomaru doesn't try to harm InuYasha seeing as it wasn't completely his fault and he did tell her long ago that he wanted something real between them and only met with the lawyers to humor her since planned on never using them. Now she has go talk to both Inuyasha and her grandfather. It will be interesting to see how this turns out. Can't wait for your next chapter.
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Title: oh biscuits!
Reviewed By: fudge On: August 01, 2004 23:05 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm begging you to update really really reallly really really soon! I just enjoy this story so much. Keep up the amazing job and I can't wait to see what happens next. :)fudge
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: manina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 21:27 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic! amazing! Can't believe I didn't find this before (found it nominated in protégé, I'm sooo voting for you) Btw, I'm majoring in biology! And I adore it! :D Pawqara
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Title: oh this is so passionate!
Reviewed By: foxy roxy On: July 31, 2004 17:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had to rate everything 10, because frankly, its purrfect. i really hope this story has a happy ending, because sad one's make me sad--obviously-- there isnt much to say though, i hope u update soon, im sorry u got booted rudely off of ff.net and i hope everything goes well for you. anyways, ciao amiga.
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Reviewed By: Kim20021990 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this chapter the day it was posted but I didn't have time to review so her it is. So bt the looks of it, I think Kagome is either pregnant or very sick but I'm thinkin' shes pregnant. Update soon,please.
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Reviewed By: tatsue-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 12:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I hope Kagome isn't with something serious, just pregnant. Can't wait to read the last chapter. Update soon!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Just read the last chapter but the funny thing was is that a read a review first and somebody said Kagome was pregnant and when I got to the part where she is sick i really thought she was. Well anyways everything I expected. Nothing less. Before I was sad that it was going to end but I think now that......well I am basically blown away at how good the whole story is and how well its all coming together. Your the best. You and Meche rock. Can't wait to see how things turn out. P.S. I think that Meche writing about who the story is not just about sex is 100% correct. If you plan on writing a book please let me Know! Your the best BYE!
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Reviewed By: moomoo On: July 29, 2004 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD awesome as always. I'll be sad to see it end v.v
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Bella =] On: July 29, 2004 17:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, girl!! I just want to say that your fanfic is really good. I don't think it was fair for you to be kicked out of FFNet. Your story didn't overdo any rating in my opinion. Actually, I think this happened because of envious authors that don't have the talent you do. I am 14 and don't think it's too much for me to read. Don't worry, because I'm sure that, even if you lost your account in FFNet, you didn't lose ANY readers. Congratulations for your great fanfic and don't let this get to you. You're SO much higher than that! ^ ^ Kisses, Bella
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Reviewed By: tuathafaerie(not logged in) On: July 29, 2004 04:24 PDT
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Wow, I haven't read this story in a while, due partly to the fact that I've been using a computer without internet for most of the time...:( But when I did come back, what a read! Very good! Your writing style never fails to impress me! I really liked the Sess/kagura moments (they're my favorite IY couple), and even though I knew it was coming, I still had a slight heart attack when Kagome found out. (Oh, the angst!) Please get your next chapter out as soon as possible! I'll make sure to keep checking! :)
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