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Reviewed By: scintilla juris [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 23:35 PST
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i love it...love your story..the drama, the comedy..all of it actually.. i don't know about the others hating the lemon parts..but i mean..it's part of the story...and i absolutely adored it..hahaha.. i've actually read it the summer of last year..sorry it took me a while to write a review..i recommended it to my friends and they loved it.. this story has already been one of my favorites....
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Reviewed By: Ice_Sick_El [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 10:07 PST
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I loved it~! personal opinion I like the alternate ending more... but both were good!
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Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 23:26 PDT
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hey hun love the story but there is one thing i think you should know Polycystic Ovary Syndrome the abrivation is POS. trust me my dr thinks i have that.
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Title: LOVED IT!!!
Reviewed By: Sango 45 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORY!! I felt like I was there, sharing their feelings. Very descriptive. Few spelling/grammatical errors. Original plot too. All in all it was a great read. ^^; ps. Chapter 27 was better than the alternate ending. You made a good choice picking that version instead of the alternate ending. Kudos ~sango45
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 15:38 PST
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Chapter Nine: Unfortunately... I understand neither shoe shopping nor car shopping. Or shoes and cars in general... Anyway, your story is brilliant and awesome and brilliant and gorgeous and beautiticious and brilliant and... brilliant. I love it!
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Reviewed By: luvofanhanyouandmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 13:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this!! i think its one of my tops for mm.org!! your a great writer so please try to keep writting ill be looking for any new ones you put out and this one will definatly be favourited hehe lol bad speller....any way ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Cherrysinger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I didn't read the lemony parts, which was a lot, but this story I have to say was really good..the ending, though, lacked that certain pizaz (sp? can't spell) that I absolutely need in a story. It gave a lukewarm feeling, but not that explosive 'WOW!' feeling...not necessarily a bad thing, but I look for that feeling in a story. I mean, after all they went through together they're all of a sudden together, you need their happiness and love explode through to the stars. And I think you understood this and attempted to do so, but I think there's a difference between going through the motion of doing it then actually reaching out to the readers and grabbing them with the emotion, letting them share everything. Oh, you did that just fine the rest of the story, so I was quite surprised the ending lacked that, because you're fairly good at it. I guess you didn't know what to do with yourself now that you finally got there? Lol. Don't worry, happens to the best of the best. And what's your penname in ff.net? I'm originally from there and I haven't seen this story around, and I'm curious. That place is a much larger community than mediaminer anyway, so it makes sense you'd get more reviews...but this is an awesome story.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
unbeleivable story!! I looved it and it had such a cute ending!! Yay!! Write more stories mooooore!! Yay!
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 11:49 PDT
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ok...AWESOME STORY!!! I looooved the plot it was GREAT!!! I just started reading ur stuff. I read through rose colored lenses a while ago and I just read this one...something tells me im gonna read em all :D:D Love, IK Obsession
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 03:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was awesome! you really know how to put it. I jus loved it...good job! I really liked the whole mating ritual thing...n the wedding wuz wonderful.
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 10:14 PST
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I love it you rock you are a really good writer thank you
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Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading it for four straight days, I have to say one thing. I LOVED IT. It was very cute and very good. Keep up with your writing. You do an amazing job.
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Title: AWSOME!
Reviewed By: Lunar-moonshine [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 02:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was really good! i loved it, starting with your plot lone! it was amazing, completely original and something that people would be interested in reading, it flowed nicely and the relationships didnt happen just overnight, yea they went a little fast but that had to happen, the whole story was fast! the next thing i loved was the characters, i fell in love with your characters, each one was related yet totally different, they had their own ideas and outlooks which made them realistic yet much more exuberent, you were able to keep all the relationships going (you had to backtrack a bit but that is to be expected) and were able to balance 3 at once, pretty good job in my opinion! you also did a great job in make the story enjoyable, i mean it sounds easy but i hate to tell you that you can have the best ideas in the world but unless you present them in a way that is appealing then there is no point! by the way i love your writing style, similar to my own but more mature and constructed (you have been doing it longer and you at least re-read it)all in all you just did and outstanding job, you took and idea you like and went with it, i'm very picky with the stories i read but i dont regret picking this one out! you diserve a pat on the back! awsome work! now i know you have a bunch of great ideas in you still! and you should share them! keep on writing! i know i'm not the only one who loves your stories! Lunar ~.^
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Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan (not signed in) On: August 27, 2005 01:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's 2am now and I just finished reading and FAIHDGIOUSHODGIOH!!!!! *SQUEE OF EPIC PROPORTIONS*!!!!! Seriously, I LOVE THIS FIC!! And the two endings was a nice touch. Both are great, but I like the first one a bit better. I also like the few little "now if this were a fan fiction..."-ish things you put in there xDDD Very nice. So once more *SQUEE*!!!!!!!!!! And now I really need sleep before the rest of my brain deteriorates.
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Title: AWWWWWW!!
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: July 21, 2005 16:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really great story and I enjoyed reading it. Even though it was long the story was worth it. Thanks for the two endings. P.S. Love YA!!!!!!!!!!!!
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