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Title: AHA!
Reviewed By: Molly (Gothic_Smurfette) On: July 15, 2005 22:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this fic on fanfiction, and it disappeared! so i found it tonight and browsed through to where i left off and i love it still!! great story. keep up the awesome writing!
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Title: Awesomness
Reviewed By: Anngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 17:36 PDT
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I loved your story, it kept me awake till twelve and then I finally finished it after being disrupted about 7 hundred times, I liked the first ending more to tell the truth, i liked how the discussion held more intimacy ^^, truly a fantastic read I am catchng up on all ur other stories, rereading Through the Rose Colored Lense and anticipating more great stuff from you~!! LoVe and PeAcE, Anngel
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 25, 2005 12:29 PDT
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Excellent story. I loved your version of the Shikon no Tama- basically how things SHOULD have happened had the two truly trusted eachother at the time. I liked the second ending better because Kagome figured out for herself that Inu really loved her, and there was also the little speach about trust. One thing I was kind of disappointed by was that Seshy didn't learn his lesson about taking advantage of the situation. A commitment like that isn't something that should be done without being fully sure of your relationship with the person, and so it felt ... wrong. But I guess that is just one of the major differences between SXKagura vs IXKagome. And the bash about how setting people up only works in convoluted fanfictions had me cracking up for a good couple of minutes :) Anyway.. excellent beautiful story. Had lots of fun reading it. Continue the good work. Oh yeah- and Rin was the cutest!
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Reviewed By: Litaa On: June 24, 2005 20:14 PDT
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I enjoyed this story, very long and well done. I loved the descriptions and how well you took time to develop their relationships with both Sesshoumaru/Kagura and Inu/Kagome. A story well done, too bad it had to end. I enjoyed the Epilouge & Alternative Ending also. I have a few suggestions: To go through and put thoughts in '..' those instead of quotation marks. It makes it look like they are thinking aloud, if you could? Maybe put the Alternative Ending in front of the Epilouge? Just a few suggestions. Overall I loved the story to death, I enjoyed coming home and reading it each night after a long day. Now, after I am done reading that I shall have to find another fanfic to dive into. So, I am going to venture off to see if you have anymore!
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Reviewed By: soulwriterchick On: April 14, 2005 03:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooohoooo! I just finished reading the whole thing. That was amazing! Personally, as a die-hard Sesshoumaru fangirl, Kag/Sess was my fave pairing in the whole story. I think you handled it really well. Not to say the Inu/Kag and Mir/Sango wasn't bad. I am just rambling... too sleepy I guess. Well. Thank you for this lovely tale. It brought joy to my heart. Sniff sniff. I will miss it.
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Reviewed By: soulwriterchick On: April 08, 2005 03:08 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh! I am loving this fic! But I had to stop to give you a review. I shall continue reading now!
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Reviewed By: Rawben(notsignedin) On: March 26, 2005 13:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeee!!!! so freakin good! i loved this fic! and you could totally do another fic based solely on rin/souta. oh! and i was all "man wouldnt it be great if hojo turned out to be gay?" and i was right! i love it when i'm right! lol, and when kag saw mirokus ass, that was hilarious!!! yey for you! i'm gonna check out your other fics... oh, and i like the first ending better.
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Title: Hoshiko
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 23:06 PST
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Oh!I forgot to tell you I liked both of the endings but thought the second was a bit better simply because it caused the two less heartache. I'm such a sucker. Oh and I loved the epilogue too. Keep up the good work.
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Title: GREAT JOB
Reviewed By: Hoshiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 23:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW CHICA! You did it again, this story was just as good as your others! IT was beautifully written and I didn't find not one mistake, your creativity astounds me. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Great!!
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 18:26 PST
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Just finished reading this story and I must say it was wonderful!! I loved every minute of it. Good work!!
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Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: October 20, 2004 16:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already reviewed this story, but I felt the need to review it again because of how wonderful it is. This fic, out of all the fics I've read (and I've read tons) was one of the most entertaining and well-written ones I've ever had the chance to read. :) The characterization of Kagome and Inuyasha, although not too on the dot (but then again, this is better) is very interesting to read. You are such a wonderful writer and I can only hope you continue to write such great fics. A huge fan, Sorena
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Reviewed By: ps On: October 14, 2004 15:31 PDT
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ok, the pregnancy was a cop out, i mean come on! everyone always ends it that way. It should have made things worse not better, I lived through a relationship which fractured almost exactly like this one, and the pregnancy too, it only made it so much worse. It was a great story, but the love conquers all bit was way to happy endingish in the end. It would have been perfect if she wasnt pregnant.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 18:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story! It amazing and awesome but sad and heartfelt. I like your relationship with Sesh and Kagura more than any onther Seshy relationship ever! just enough lemon and lime to keep me satisfied too!
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 22:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. You did an incredible job. I think I liked the first ending better though. I am glad that you wrote both because both endings were enjoyable to read. I am definitely going to have to read more of your stories. Not only did you have a great original idea but you also wrote it beautifully. I hope you continue to write because you are truly talented.
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 20:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally I liked the alternate ending best. I loved the story. You did a great job.
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