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Reviewed By: Okibi Usagi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 18:45 PDT
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i read this on ff.net but i never read the eppologe or alternate ending, i like the original one best tho. this story rocks so do you other ones! ^_^
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Reviewed By: booferret On: September 14, 2004 17:37 PDT
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I think I liked the concept of the second ending better but I think the first one was written better. Great story I really enjoyed it keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 07:18 PDT
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omg! my lover recommended this story to me and i am so glad that she did! this story was beautiful and real. you did a wonderful job of making the characters follow their set personality from the anime, and yet making it real enough to survive in modern times. it was a beautiful story, one that i will have to read more than once. i love the fluff, the angst, and the great little spurts of humor that liven this story up! i'll be reading more of your work before too long. and as for my favorite ending, the alternate ending. it's more romantic, ne? although both endings were beautiful and wonderful. you did a wonderful job on this story. and i love it!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:47 PDT
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omg i love both endings!! hehehe theyre both so great!!! awww i wish i cud write as well as you!!!! thakns again for a really great story :D and keepwriting and keep up the great work :D
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Title: awww!!
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:42 PDT
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lol i love it!! 4 boys?! holy!! poor kagome lol inu must be the equivilant of 4 on his own...lol heheheh too cute!!1 ur a great writer and i'm SOOO impressed by this story. i love it with a passion, thanks for a great read and keep up the great work!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:36 PDT
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YAY i love it!!! yay hehehe awww shes pregnant?! theyr'e tooo cute!!! yay *double claps* great job!
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Title: awww :(
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:30 PDT
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sad aww this time....wow ur such a great writer!!! i feel so bad for kagome, and i'm mad at but sympathize with inu!! heheh awww its all to cute tho :P
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Title: heheh
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:20 PDT
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:'( noooo almost over?! but i heart this story, i heart it with a passion!!! lol heheh they're sooo busted, i love it!
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Title: awww!!
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:14 PDT
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hehehe i love couples getting together...heheh rin ish a tricky one! lol *claps* yay ! :D
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Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:07 PDT
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awww!! inu ish too cute, hehehe no little cake man cud show inu's greatness :P hehehe good job :P keep it up
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Title: AWWWWw!!1
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:01 PDT
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yay!! they're married!! tooo cute!! lol hehehe i heart it with a passion i love inu kag stories :D and this one has a great take on the whole thing :P
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Title: jdls
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heheh sorry that i scared you, i used to review chur fanfiction one but they took down your story didnt they :'( that was a sad day...lol yeah i love your story tho SOOO much hehehe your such a great writer keep at it :P sry for the decline in my reviews but i'll make up for it starting...now! :) hehehe -jdls (i think i have a mm account, i just cant remember what it is :S hehehe ^^")
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Title: yay! go me :P
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 17:48 PDT
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heheh sorry that i scared you, i used to review chur fanfiction one but they took down your story didnt they :'( that was a sad day...lol yeah i love your story tho SOOO much hehehe your such a great writer keep at it :P sry for the decline in my reviews but i'll make up for it starting...now! :) hehehe -jdls (i think i have a mm account, i just cant remember what it is :S hehehe ^^")
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Title: The Best Of The Best
Reviewed By: humble-bumble On: September 04, 2004 04:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg!i'm totally in love with this fic.After being recommended by so many authors, i HAD to find the famous,well talk about story 'The AD'.It took me like forever to find this story though i was a bit frustrated b/c of the hassel in finding this fic but in the end it was all worth it!I never read anything this magnificient and sensational.You are by far one of the most talented writer i know.Your style is complex yet simple.You dont overdo with details and try to balance things out.You have very few grammer mistakes and keep the pace going smoothly in this fic.i love the fact the the pace was absouletly perfect.The story itself should was so enticing that it left me at time being so caught up with the story.The limes,seductions,lemons makes the quality of the fic very life like.i love it. inuyasha's god like attitude*drools* he can seduce me anytime. I love the whole sex thing.Even though some People think this is all about sex, i knew you had a cunning plan to all of those delicious limes.Its just makes thisstory's originality and creativity an absolute wonder to readers like me. I love this story far too much for words.I really enjoy this story that you have giving us and have to thank you for writing it.Its absolutely wonderful.It left me stunned with awe and even speeshless at time.There is absouletely no words for me to tell you that comes even close to what i really think of this fic.WOW!A brilliant piece of Work.Stuperb.Stupendous. Marvelous.Amazing!I LOVE THIS STORY!!! |
Reviewed By: Roane On: August 31, 2004 10:56 PDT
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Oh, very good! Man, I need to check this site more often! I had tons of reading to do when I came back! But, I kind've liked both endings. I'm not sure. I'd have to say...the second one. I thought the characters were being smarter in that one, so I think I prefer it. I love how good you are at Inuyasha AUs, and I really enjoy that you pair Kagura with Sesshoumaru! Ah, such the perfect couple, yet so much angst involved! I think you should do another, hey? ^^ You're really very good!
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