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Title: AWSUM FIC
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 18:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ I loved your story! I'm kinda sorry to see it ending! lol by the way... great lemons! ^-^ Oh yeah! I said it lol. You made Inuyasha just so sexy ~_^ *sigh* Anyways I really wanna see more of your work! Ok? so! I'll be lookin! ^_~ ¤§ §¤§ Silver Moon Dragon §¤§
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Title: I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Reviewed By: KrystalJade (from ff.net) On: August 30, 2004 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I had been reading this fic for awhile, and then it just suddenly up and disappeared from ff.net! I was sooo mad until someone told me that it was here! Great job on it by the way! I've already recommended it to others!
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Reviewed By: DiveneRiRi On: August 27, 2004 11:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow never read a story as completing as this one!! It was a pleasure to read such a thing and I bow down before you for creating it. I really hope you win and I know you will since the others dont stand a chance against you. Well I must leave you now. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked best the alternate ending, it was richer in details and excitement. I loved the whole story a lot, you are an awesome writer! The way you portraited each character was wondrous. I hope you write more Inu/Kag fics in the near future.
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: August 23, 2004 23:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must say this is a good ending too! it explains more about what will happen and more clearly. but reading your alternate ending after the original one, it seems a little rushed (alt version). or maybe i read it too late at night=P... but i must admit i'm feelin more from the alternate version. I'M SO HAPPY I READ THIS STORY! well i proved that point in my earlier review =D I can't wait for your Lady of the Crimson Land!!
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: August 23, 2004 22:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! >cries< I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE THIS STORY IS OVER!! hahahah ANYways.... i must say kagome is lucky to have a husband that can still go comando! lol! this story has been AWSOME to read! I've had a ton of fun reading this. i can't wait to see when your next story's out. ooo and i must say Kagome has one big happy family! it's fun to read how kagome is a mother in fanfics cuz i always see her as a child, teenager, or just in love with inuyasha and yadda... well YOU'RE THE BEST! This story is a total classic! which means i 100% voted for you in the contest!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 20:44 PDT
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cools beans. great ending.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 07:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. First, I found it in FF.net and I always was very happy when you updated it every time. But I wondered for a while why FF didn't remind me anymore. Oh! I just know that you were kicked out off that web site. (why?) Today I found it here again and read it until the end. Wow! you are a talented author and this fic is really really great!! ^_^ I look forward to reading your next story! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: August 22, 2004 23:58 PDT
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I really liked the epilgoue. Bah, pardon the spelling. I think I liked the first ending better, but I'm not sure. They were both good. Anyway, hope you start a new story soon, I'll be looking forward to it. :D This one was great and you deserve being nominated for it--and winning, because I know this will win.
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: August 22, 2004 22:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I prefer the alternate chapter best. That's the Kagome we know who will face Inuyasha face on & shout "BAKA" at him. The Kagome who knows she loves & understands Inuyasha no matter what. Like the epilogue too. WOW !! 4 boys!! too bad they all have black hair instead of white (should of one of them that is the splitting image of our loveable hanyou, fangs, ears & "keh" . But whatever I love yr story. Can't wait when U start on a new one.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! I'm really sad to know that it's over now! It was a real slice reading over the summer, it took my mind off of summer reading assignments for college...i don't wanna go...I personally enjoyed the alternate ending more so than the original; however, there were a few parts in the original that I enjoyed also. I can't wait for your next story to come out! You truly have a talent and I hope it takes you far! Corinthia
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: August 22, 2004 19:37 PDT
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that was a GREAT story!!!! i like both endings!!!! the first because its sweet and Kagome has 4 children with a girl on the way. and the second because it explains how Kagome was wronge to doubt Inuyasha too. ppl need to show how Kagome can be wronge too sometimes and its not all Inuyasha's falt!!! i'm sad this stories over and i loved it!!! plz make another story soon!!
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Reviewed By: ktakn_yeni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made me search for this ending for nearly a month! ^^but it was worth it. i keep this story since its begginngs and i'm very sad that it has ended. i must say CONGRATS!! it was an awesome fic. very original and very good. i liked more the second ending. and i just loved the epilogue it has been one of the best i've ever read. i hope you create new fics as awesome as this one. so i can be behind that fic reading it. congrats again. you've made a wonderful job. i cant wait to see another work from you ^^ see ya ktakn
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 17:19 PDT
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I know I preferred the alternate ending. Too many writers fail to mention that Kagome has made some mistakes, and then pin all the blame on Inuyasha. I thought it was very good that you made Kagome realize that she did share some of the blame for the argument. Great story. I loved it.
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Title: like the second best
Reviewed By: Laina On: August 22, 2004 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your whole story. It was the reason I started reading fanfics. I'm glad I could see it all the way to the end. I liked the second ending the best it just felt more right. Thank you for being such a great writer and I hope you keep doing more stories for all of us!!!
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