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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: August 22, 2004 16:03 PDT
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bravo!! wonderful story =D
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Reviewed By: Catmann On: August 22, 2004 15:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I prefer the Epilogue chapter to the Alternate Ending because like the fic is titled, it all started with an ad placement. It kind of connected everything. Great job on this. I started reading this on ff.net until they decided to be a-holes and delete it. Both chapters were great but I think the epilogue was a bit better.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 22, 2004 15:26 PDT
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Excellent chapter! A marvelous epilogue to and excallent story. Good luck with both the votes and work. Look forwards to reading it when you have the time. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Squishy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 15:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you're story is just wonderful and i'm so sad to see it done. I loved both the alternate ending and the epilogue and the rest of the story! still sad that it was taken off of FF.net it had so many reviews there... I can't wait for the next story! I'll be patient =) --Irene
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Reviewed By: Queen LuvBunny On: August 20, 2004 21:55 PDT
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aww!! you just HAVE to update soon!! i cant take it anymore!!! i HAVE to know wats going to happen next!!! im gonna die if you dont!! you dont want me to die do you? plz plz plz plz!! update! bye!
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Title: YOU ARE CORDIALLY INVITED...
Reviewed By: Dragons_Dream_of_Desolation On: August 20, 2004 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are cordially invited to the GRAND REOPENING of the best fanfiction site on the net! The site 'I Dare You' at Xanga will provide a challenge to all fanfiction writers and aspiring authors. I Dare You provides one 'dare' per month. That is to say, one situation that you must write about. Freedom is of course given and changes may be made according to each person's abilities. Since you were invited you are a special guest, please use this User Name if you reply. Being invited means that the judges thought you were good enough to get a high score and provide top notch entertainment. This is a great honor. The site is http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=Dragons_Dream_of_Desolation
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Reviewed By: lilcraziazngurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the GREATEST stori ever!! I dunno how i can handle u finishin this stori up!! i mean its like THE GREATEST!! ITS THE GREATEST OF ALL GREATS!!! its just totally awesome!! im sooo HAPPY that fluffy and kagura, inu and kag, and miroku and sango made up!! YAY FOR YAL!! u know wut...this stori makes me want a bf!! i wonder why i dont have a bf.... *CraziAznGurl walks into a white room and beings to mumble to herself* lol! i cant wait to read more, but im gonna be SOOOO UPSET when its done!! oh well...ull have to start another totally awesome stori (which we all know u will!) keep on updatin! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AM On: August 15, 2004 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Only read up to chapter 26, I'll read the next one after this.) gasp Kagome's pregnant? Can't be. But then again, Kag being pregnant isn't an uncommon factor in stories. And I don't think I--or anyone else for that matter--can say this enough, but Kag and Inu can be so fricken stubborn. Can't wait to see what Inuyasha does to get Kagome to stay, if she does stay. NEWayz, very well written. Keep it up.
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Title: Yowza!
Reviewed By: Meggie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 01:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I managed to find this story again. I had a terrible time searching for it on MediaMiner, and I couldn't find out if you had it posted anywhere else. I love the story in general and they way you used the characters. They fit so well into this world you've created for them. I'm look forward to the epilogue and alt. chapter. Heh, I kinda rated this fic like the Olympics. I couldn't find anything to take off points for! Great job! I loved it. =D
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Reviewed By: Kiyoshiko On: August 14, 2004 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absotively posilutely love your stories. I loved Through the Rose colored lenses and The Ad is so good. You are one of my favorite authors. I can't wait till you update.
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Reviewed By: Obsessed714 On: August 13, 2004 21:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm SO in love with this story!! you're a fricken amazing writer, i was highly impressed, as you can tell by the rating... any who, you did an excellent job, i'm a little torn with having the epilogue for the next chappie, for some reason i thought there would be more upcoming chapters *shrugs* oh well, that's why you're the author :). you also have a wonderful style which i admire greatly, seeing as i'm a writer of sorts myself. Rest assured you can be confident on the amzing quality of your fanfic, it is truly a masterpiece... thank you for writing it...
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Reviewed By: HoLyLiMe92290 On: August 10, 2004 17:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story, but the resolution seemed a lot shorter. However, I am comparing this to your entire story. Your story is one of the few very long fanfics that I still read while you were updating. I hope I read more of your stories in the future. P.S. I am so voting for you!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 08:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While reading this fanfic, I felt my stomach tighten and churn with the love and heartfelt misery I read........it takes a great writer to get their readers' to contain those feelings while reading a fanfic. You did an amazing job capturing emotions and the love that everyone shares. I now see hope in all love........thnx to ur marvelous writing and fanfic Way 2 Go!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: hosi-ni-onegai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 10:13 PDT
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I love you story! One of the best I've ever read (and trust me, I've read more than my fair share of fanfics). I have a question for you that has been nagging at me for the longest time... are you a Spaniard? The comment about the Pricipe de Asturias and Leticia. The Pesetas cufflinks... I dunno... I'm Spaniard, and it would be nice to have found another one that writes fanfic. Oh well, keep up the good work.
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Title: Eee!
Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: August 08, 2004 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Fantastic story. It was great how you managed to change the sex-craved Inuyasha in the beginning to this respectable guy so seamlessly throughtout the fic. Great job...I loved it lots and I'll be sure to check out more of your work. :)
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