| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: jessibele On: May 01, 2005 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear I'm trying to be patient, but I'm DYING to see what happens please post another chapter soon. Your writing always has me on the edge of my seat and wanting more.
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Reviewed By: PurrfectMissM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 09:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED it!!! amazing amazing amazing!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!! oooo wow, i could just feel the passion!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 08:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to cry that was so beautiful. Lol, crap, now I am crying. I loved this chapter, it was so good that I just can't take it, damn it. You write excellent lemons, and I just love how you managed to chip away at Vegeta's heart until he "maybe" had some happiness. I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: starbrella (not signed on) On: March 30, 2005 10:44 PST
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YAy, finally the v/b. It was great and so was the emotional level. I thought Bulma would have asked for somthing esle, i guess her demand only made Vegeta soften even more...so what's going to happen now? I can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry and update soon!
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed reading this story!!! you have really made this story come to life for me. you are a great writer and have a way for telling a story!!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I hope the the end has a happy ending, cause if any bodly needs a happy ending its vegeta!!! thanks a so far for a great chapter and like I said can't wait for the next one!!!
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Reviewed By: theshakeyone On: March 29, 2005 17:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I just wanted to tell you that of all the stories I'm keeping up with, I look forward to yours the most. You are a fantastic writer. I can't wait for the next one! Second, YAY! the lemon!!! terrific, stupendous! whoo-hoo!!!
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 19:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you updated! Finally got the lemon! Yeah and it was so well done too. ^_^
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Reviewed By: leelo_77 On: March 28, 2005 17:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm....i read this on ff.net, but the stupid ratings which don't go high enough stunted the incredible impact of this fic! i mean i thought it was amazing there, but if i compare it to the one on this site...well it wins hands down!!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 15:09 PST
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I'M CURED! Praise the Almighty, I am healed! I thought I was over my Vegeta fixation this weekend. I was also feeling blah over a retarded UTI and then I read this! *does cartwheel* *LOVES Vegeta again* *loves Tempest too*
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Title: GetaGirl 247
Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 14:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl, this chapter was off the chain. I am sooo glad that he didn't go through with the murder. I like how he "made love" to her; not just mindless f*cking. Also, the song Em More, is on fire. Ever since I have downloaded it, I just can't stop listening. Waiting for another chapter....:)
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Reviewed By: devinyx On: March 28, 2005 09:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely beautiful and the last chapter was just great. One of the best "sex" scenes i've read.
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 28, 2005 09:39 PST
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I am so so so happy! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 01:50 PST
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*Twitches* IloveBardockIloveBardockIloveBardockIloveBardockIloveBardock. Sometimes you make that hard to remember. (Well, actually, that's a downright lie - no one could make me forget my Bardock worship - but you come pretty darned close) That was... was... so... very.. 'Hot' seems such a lame word - but it's your fault. You're the one who took my words away with this chapter. Hmmm - gonna have to make Bardock read this, and act it out for me. That way, I will either get my words back, or I'll be reduced to even more of a quivering wreck than I am now. Either result is fine by me - it's the getting there that counts :D Thumbs up on yet another excellent chapter and another wonderful Tempest lemon. Thank youuuuuuu.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 23:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww that was hot u go gurl
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 27, 2005 20:08 PST
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aww how cute, ehem if you can call a lemon cute.
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