| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: animelovera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 19:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 19:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was completely worth the wait. It was amazing; the way that you captured both sides of the encounter was fantastic. I can't wait to read your next chapter. The rest of your story is just as amazing as that lemon.
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Title: the song...
Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: March 12, 2005 17:36 PST
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i was kinda wondering... do u think u could tell us where to find the song??? please??? i wanna hear it!!! thanx!!! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 14:33 PST
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Hmmm - is Vegeta actually going to go through with the assasination? I honestly have no idea. Half of me thinks that Bulma's words may have got through to him, the other half is keeping a clear eye on the Saiya-jin disregard for death. (Bless 'em!) Hmmm, I suppose I'm going to have to wait until you're ready to update until I find out... :D VERY good chapter - and VERY good to see you back and posting :D
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 14:41 PST
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very powerful and touching..the spirit of this chapter is very rear and i touches us because we see how much they see in one another and how much we root for them and their happiness...
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 08, 2005 08:25 PST
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good! but this cant be the last chapter right? why does the intro says it is completed? i need a happy ending! btw i think "a stranger's kiss", a one shot of yours, has a good starting and potential to develope into a touching full story.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 16:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Temp, I just wanted to tell you that the formatting for this chapter is really messed up. I went and read it on your website, so it's all good (lol). But anyhow, you have to format it a special way before you post it. If you have Microsoft Word (it's what I use, and I figured out how to fix the formatting problem), then you have to hit enter/return in between every paragraph and also have a space like you have in between words. That way mm.org registers that there are paragraphs and spaces in between them. I don't know why it's doing this, but I have to edit everything I put on here now because of it. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 15:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah. This chaper is all messed up. The paragraphs aren't seperated and there's no spacing between sentences. It was fantastic, just a little hard to read.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 13:33 PST
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good chapter u just need to fix the layout
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 15:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooooow, that was deep. You left us hanging, though, so that we don't really know whether he killed the man or not. Poor Bulma, her efforts aren't in vain, to us.~Manda
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Title: ...Tear
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was moving. I really felt the drama, the emotion. Good job! Keep writing
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Title: Stupendous!
Reviewed By: Evanscentistoolazytologin On: February 24, 2005 15:39 PST
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I really do love this story. You have a grasp on your characters that is uncanny! You do such good work. I'm so glad to have you back! And welcome to the little one! Best wishes to you, Tempest!
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Title: lab monkey
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 15:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW great charter T. very touching and stronge..i feel really bas for the both of them right now. just when you think that they are on the same page then this happens.. really great work.. and can't wait for more of this great story..maria
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Reviewed By: jbloom018 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 11:33 PST
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I love this fanfiction and I couldn't wait until you updated. But it left me wanting more... oh I hope there is a sequel in the works. So good, please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 08:10 PST
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ah, it feels weird to be able to review on this site again. That was damn wonderful. Your writing just gets better and better. I think it's amazing how you can make Vegeta so baaaaad and yet so vulnerable. Makes me want to rape HIM.
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