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Reviewed By: x_rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 18:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! plz hurry up and update. this is my all time favorite story out there. its the best!
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Reviewed By: x_rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 20:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! plz hurry up and update. this is my all time favorite story out there. its the best!
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Reviewed By: Telfie On: February 02, 2005 16:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to update??? /__\ Please update...this is one of the most comprehensible (yes I do mean that) and well written B/V's I've had the fortune to come across. They're in character, a really rare thing for A/U's. If you discontinue it or something, I might cry...j/k. But really, please hurry and update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SluggyWhoIsTooLazyToSignIn On: February 01, 2005 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gimme a U! gimme a P! gimme a D-A-T! ...uh... E! what's that spell? UPDATE! louder- UPDATE! one more time- UPDATE!! :D
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Reviewed By: amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 20:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu so write the best stories keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Nicolett Archer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 19:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read very few authors such imagination or skill ; you Ms. T are gifted with both of these talents . The fic. is very enjoyable and I have never read anything where the author makes lust a palpable thing that lies just beneath the surface as it dose in real life . I hope you will complete this soon , for there are few others I would go to check on everyday but your work has infected me and I must say it is quite pleasant .
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Title: ARGH
Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 13:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is it that everything you write is so wonderful?? I love it!! I can't even remember if I have already reviewed this one, but I don't really care!! Amazing, Original, Wonderful!! Please update before I end up tearing out any more of my hair!! Btw, one more review and you get 100!!!
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Reviewed By: 3oclock_Tangerine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 00:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I really loved this chapter. Actually, I love the entire fic because you develope your version of ther characters personalities while still staying true to their characters and develope the situaion around the emotions they would feel. Or maybe I'm just way to overanalytical. You capture the Vegeta and Bulma essence very well! But I especially liked this chapter partially because of what it was, andpartially because of what the other chapters were. The other chapters made me feel and worry and think and wonder, which I like, but this chapter made me laugh, which throws it into a balance that I really like a lot. I also want to say congrats becuase I don't usually give a ten in creativity, but Your Vegeta-in-a-cage part was really different and it really set this fic apart. I've been reading your fanfic for weeks now, and I finally decided to get off my lazy arse and review. Also, for the love of Kami, thank you for spelling everyone's names right. I get really sick of people who cant consistantly spell the character's names and call themselves fans, so yokudekimashita, yatta and all that fun, keep updating, as I'm sure you will since obviously people are reading it. *eyes your 97 reviews jealously* *plots to send Vegeta here to steal them for me* Anyway, good luck and keep smiling. oo I forgot there was more I wanted to say! I like your sentence fluency. It is very nice to read fics that flow, and you are very talented at this so thank you. Bye now!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 13:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I bet the Vegeta in this story would be furious to hear himself being talked about in a erotically ass-pounding manner. Lol. That was a great chapter. The sexual angst between them is killing me. Please hurry with the next chappy!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Excellent. Damn, woman. You weren't kidding about the cattle prod!! And I cracked up every time I read the word "transconfublator" or whatever it was. Loved it when the ship lurched and he caught her with his tail. I was like, wow, I'm in a B/V A/U. I wish more women knew of this sort of delight--there's no one like Vegeta and nothing like being threatened with death and caught by a tail. Sigh. I love this story.
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Reviewed By: Rain-chan(Rain) On: December 09, 2004 14:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was EXCELLENT! I'm enjoying this fanfic so much, and I truly hope that you continue.
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Title: GAH!
Reviewed By: Sluggy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 23:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the 3rd cliffie I've read tonight. I'm going nuts here! My brain is thinking of the worst possible scenarios of what Veggie is going to do for this job thing. Especially when you implied such dastardly deeds. ACK! UPDATE and SAVE MY SANITY!!!
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Reviewed By: starbrella (not signed on) On: December 08, 2004 15:46 PST
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DAMN! Another great chapter from yoU! though it took you long enough to update!! :glare:: But great chapter, and worth every minute of the wait ::smiles brightly:: So who is this guy that's offering bulma a job? and what kind of job is it? how much does it pay? lol so many questions that will only be answered if you UPDAT SOON!!!! #1 fan Starbrella
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: December 08, 2004 14:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: December 08, 2004 14:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! I'm telling you, when those two get together they are gonna need more that a fire hose to calm things down. These teasers are killin' me. Anyway, keep up the great writing. :)
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