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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: mlf On: December 08, 2004 13:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say that the sexual tension is getting to me and and i want to read more then just petting each other...what a great chapter and i'm glad that they are grtting close to each other...please lets read so more of this game that there playing ...maria
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Reviewed By: Kethry(not loged in darn it) On: December 08, 2004 11:22 PST
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anouther get chap!! I swear when I get te notice that this story hasa been updated I put up my busy sign on my messager and stop everything I am doing to read!! The tension is almost unbareable! Who is this guy that has approced Bulma.... WAAAAAA more please please!
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Reviewed By: Frances On: December 05, 2004 17:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I love this! I love this! You are a fatastic writer. I mean it's like reading a novel you spent $50 on. Please, more, more, more! All the love I can give! Frances
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Title: Dear God!!!!
Reviewed By: Deaths Obsession! On: November 25, 2004 18:40 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god this is absolutely the best B/V fic that I have ever read. I love it soooo much and I insist that you continue with it!!! *sigh* I love it so much.... ~Deaths Obsession
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo!! Now that was a kiss...and a gory beheading. All Bulma needed was some chapstick, chapped lips are no fun. Anyway, please hurry with the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 14:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some mysterious reason the day that I had a novel's worth of comments to make on that last wonderful chapter, mm.org wouldn't let me read or write on the Lab Monkey review page. That last chapter, Vegeta fighting for the cure and cursing himself and all the imperfections of the universe, was arguably the best written chapter I've seen from you yet--it was wildly entertaining but just crisp as all get out, not a word wasted, and so much characterization in every detail. I always love it when Vegeta starting inching towards self-realization in the B/V, and I so appreciate your Bulma being so strong, so capable, yet so feminine. Their exchange was great romance, classic B/V--you do dark and you do sexy and you do angsty death but you do the old I think I love you romance thingie like no one else. This is a super A/U. You need to stop making fall in love with Vegeta so much--I going on my third year of being in love with him, and your stories are helping turn an obsession into something--I dunno--like a g-ddamn marriage to the idea of a cartoon man. Oh, I was going to say something else but I forgot what--being in love with Vegeta and all. GREAT CHAPTER. Please don't stop being great when you have that baby. You make me want to get pg again myself if I could just be as creative as this!
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Title: this fic can't have words 2 desribe how good it is
Reviewed By: dbz maniac On: November 25, 2004 01:13 PST
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this fanfic is amazin 1 of the best fics i have read it feels real jst like ur in the fic ur an outstanding writer and u r plsin a number of ppl pls dont let ur talent go 2 waste the way u write is so inspiring
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Reviewed By: Stars Light (starbrella...not sighed on) On: November 24, 2004 17:58 PST
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OMG! I love this story! FInally! An update from you I've waited forever!! EKKK!!!! It's so sweet that finally Vegeta got the cure, and what's with Bulma not remembering anything b4 Vegeta? I want more i want more!! I LOVE THIS@!!!!
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Reviewed By: trina monkey On: November 24, 2004 10:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are an amazing author. you are very talented and your perceptions of vegeta and bulma adds a sense of uniqueness to the story. your writing is excellent and the way you tell the stories is brilliant and rivals some of the best authors out there.
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 24, 2004 05:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so happy that he killed that THING and that he did it for her no matter what he says...i'm loving this story more and more eveytime i read it...and how they kissed oh i can't wait for more please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: kethry(not logged in) On: November 24, 2004 04:57 PST
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GOOD he killed the bug! right on. I love this fic. I am so hooked. Seeing the update notice in my mail box is a major highlight for me. Keep up the wonderful work! Thanks for sharing you world with us. Wind to Your Wings, Kethry MoonDragon
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Reviewed By: Aikathaw On: November 23, 2004 22:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, and I thought i'd seen the best..>.> this is truly amazing ^.^ I hope you update sooner, though you probably have lots of other things to do. Really great though!
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Reviewed By: uchiha-chan On: November 12, 2004 05:33 PST
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wow great story!!! i love it! im not good in the Review part -__-' hehehee...soo agine great story-up date soon... ooo and dont let burma die-k? - uchiha-chan
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 19:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another perfect and compelling chapter. I mean, wow. Please hurry with your next one, I can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Icyness On: November 02, 2004 09:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You are wonderful! WOW! Where did you get so much talent. Your word usage and decriptions are precise you need a medal or soemthing for this story! But please let Bulma and vegeta get it on sometime soon, i've never read a story so long withought a lemon. Wonderful hob though you had me on my heels
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