| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbz-fan-jess (not signed in) On: October 31, 2004 12:59 PST
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I fucking loved it... that was so freaking awesome it is ridiculous.... I can't wait for more....
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Reviewed By: angry monkey On: October 30, 2004 13:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I urge you to continue! :)
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Reviewed By: angry monkey On: October 30, 2004 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is easily good enough to deserve a crap load of reviews. This is awesome. The story and it's presentation is superb, as well as the cliffhangers you seem to be so good at.
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Title: lab monkey
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 29, 2004 18:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao...update..
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 18:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*weeps* OMG, that was great. I am incoherent with delight. I just love your Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: October 29, 2004 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Reviewed By: Lady Lotus On: October 20, 2004 20:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is awesome! Please, update quick! Don't wait a wekk, or a month....UPDATE NOW! Email me when you update! *~ Lady Lotus ~*
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Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 01:59 PDT
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Oh Tempest! I have no idea why I haven't read this story before, but I'm so glad I have now. I can't wait to see where you are taking this. Wonderful vivid descriptions as usual, and the sexual tention is tangible.
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Title: lab monkey
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter..i'm glad that she realizes that there are other monsers out then vegeta..please update soon.maria
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: October 16, 2004 06:13 PDT
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It's about damn time! I have been waiting for you to update forever, thank you. I am in love with this fic (as well as all your others) so please try to update faster. You've got me on the edge of my seat with every chapter. You truly are gifted.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 08:24 PDT
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OMG. You've got a gift for this dark stuff. I've been following this one too on your site so I thought it was time to stop by here and give a comment. This last chapter was profoundly moving. I'm awed. I got that swell in my chest that makes me want to get off the computer and go distract myself with my happy, mundane life! Oh, I can't wait for more. Your monstrously maginificent Vegeta just makes my ff reading time so worthwhile. I don't know quite how to say it--but he helps me understand those assholes called men better? AH, anyway, keep up the great work!
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Title: Please continue
Reviewed By: thoughts On: October 05, 2004 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying this story. I hope that you will continue with it. The premise is wonderful and I like how you have skillfully manipulated the events so that Bulma was the only one left on the planet to defend it. IN this story, your Bulma is a strong character and your Vegeta is believably callous. I do hope you will contine to update this story.
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: intelXx On: October 05, 2004 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't Stop! It looks like its getting really interesting. What happens next to poor foolish Bulma?
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Reviewed By: KanSol On: September 25, 2004 22:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I've only seen 1 typo and that is damned good. this story even taught me some new words. I LOVE this story, and you must definitely finish it. This is the freshest idea for a VB get together that I have read in a LONG time. Please finish this story, it's just too awesome not to finish. I love it.
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Title: Shame, Shame
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: September 25, 2004 05:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am ashamed of myself. I only just realized I have been reading this all along but I haven't reviewed. Let me just say, I love the way you have written these characters. From pure, driving hatred to dependance on one another. I can't wait to read more.
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