| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 07:50 PDT
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Wow, this chapter rocks. Hey wait, did you ever notice that little thing at the bottom with the numbers. its a 1385 now. hey wait now its at 1353, but it was at 1356... whats it mean??? I'm so confused!!!! Oh well, I still say its a great story keep it up! Your Friendly Neighborhood Idiot, ~~~Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin On: September 01, 2004 20:19 PDT
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Ewwww!!!!!!! I feel sick!!*Start to braf* Xiahou Fumi:*Stare at the story* Thank you everything that good and evil in the world! Bulma didn't get eating! Komachi Ayako: Vegeta is definely(I don't think that I spell that word right, Oh Well....I guess) a dark hero. *Look up from her brafing* I will say one thing and that is Dark Hero sound a lot cooler that Anti Hero. Xiahou Fumi: Heck Yeah!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 16:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a wonderfully written chapter, but also kind of disappointing in the fact that Vegeta couldn't tell her that he'd never hurt her. I understand where he's coming from, though, and that he wants her to be able to be strong. Plus, it just wouldn't be Vegeta if he gave in that easily. Once again, great chapter and please hurry with the next one!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 13:42 PDT
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This was very nice. I really enjoyed Veg's ominous presence, the exchange btwn him and is "associates", and his conversation with Bulms (mainly their touchy-feeliness). ^_^ I'm actually glad Veg didn't make that promise; it would undermind how you have characterize him thus far. I like the edginess you give him and how their relationship -- even though it has progressed -- still is uncertain at this stage.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 07:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still can't beleive that those aliens ate that woman alive. *Shudders* Anyway, Liked the new chappy. I loved the way he answered her question with out giving a direct yes or no.
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Reviewed By: Kethry (not loged in) On: August 31, 2004 07:06 PDT
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**dances around** He came to save her, He came to save her. **stops and looks at everone staring, clearing throat** hmm yes, well I knew he would. Sooooooooooo well, one thing... more more more need more... pleaseeeee update soon!
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Title: lab mokey
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 30, 2004 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this by far is one of the best chapters that you have written.wow i can't say enough..i just can't wait to read more..please update soon..maria
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Reviewed By: Zonkie On: August 25, 2004 21:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story...but dont end it there!!! UPDATE SOON!!! with more chapters please!!!! I miss Vegeta :(
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Title: "Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 09, 2004 09:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i'm going to be sick.how stange the way this story is turning out to be...maria
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Title: rotten_future16@yahoo.es
Reviewed By: Joaquin86 On: August 08, 2004 13:23 PDT
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The turn the story's taken still surprises me. Two chapters back there was no indication things would turn that ugly...But even though the descriptions in the beginning of the chapter and the things happening to Bulma and her aquaintances were gruesome, it was the stories about Frieza that really got to me. It was more personal and therefore had more impact...
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Reviewed By: EvilSaint (not signed in) On: August 08, 2004 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gruesome, yet effective. I think this is a very realistic view of what a purge would be like. I've never really seen anyone try to accurately describe how the soldiers would behave and what it would be like from inhabitants' POV. As with all your writing, you did an excellent job ^_^ Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 21:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooooow. That was horrible... but well written and beautiful at the same time. I think this is the first time in years that I can actually say that this will give me nightmares. I hope you're happy, lol. Anyway, it was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait for your next one. Thanks for getting them out so quickly but not skimping on quality!
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Title: chapter 13
Reviewed By: yoshine On: August 07, 2004 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please write the next chapter fast I have to know about vegeta in chapter 13. This story is very good dont stop writing.I cant stop reading this story I read it like five times.Hurry and write another chapter.PLESE!
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Reviewed By: Kethry ((grrr not loged in)) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 12:52 PDT
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I am hooked on this Fic. I started reading it on the GR! I found it here and was like "oh cool I can get the update notices!!!!" I love your Vegeta. He is such a bastard and I am all over it. Muhahahahahaha... please keep rolling this out fore us junkies. One thing... he will come save her right? I mean he is a bastard but there is that little part of him that cares. SO he will save her right.. besides he is the only one that can kill her!! **paces waiting to see what happen next**
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: August 03, 2004 22:30 PDT
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oohhh... will veggie come and save her... will she be taken by veggie or become a pawn of freiza... ooooo... can't wait can't wait
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