| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 05, 2005 18:57 CDT
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Another great chapter. Ryo is really trying to figure his way through this. Way to go! I'm rooting for him. Thanks for sharing your work!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 18:26 CDT
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So, now Baka Ryo finally finds out about his youkai blood...bet he feels stupid now. I wonder, will Nez ever how Ryo the contents in the box? Probably not lol. One thing I love about anime...get's your mind off of reality.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Firetrixs [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I mentioned this before. thank you i really needed this after today. i had a feeling that you would update today
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 18:19 CDT
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Well following up is not something I had really thought about other than the way you have with Purity, I always thought one would follow along the journal aspect of the story, also I thought that if a sequal was made, you (and your betas) have great enough minds to create a world out of it, as you have with the Purity series. Anyway, whatever you decision is on that matter I would repsect it, the only thing I would actually try to 'change your mind' about would be to stop writing and posting altogether, I (and countless others) enjoy your stories, and no matter what kind of shit you get from those bakas that don't understand you work and effort put into these, we will always support you, Sue. Thanks for the writing you have done. Ja ne, Chris
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 17:55 CDT
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*lip quivers and eyes water* Wow...even a little edit goes a long way. *wipes eyes* That last line was just. *Glomps Ryo* The baka has learned so much in this chapter. Quite the emotional overload for him. I just can't wait to see how he's going to break down that wall around her heart...only to find that he's been in there this whole time...the wall was just there to protect herself. *sigh* You have the most indepth characterizations...how can anyone not fall in love with these characters you have created. You have the ability to bring them to life with written word...and I so admire you for that.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 05, 2005 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sueric, I have a question; in the paragraph mentioning "the night that changed everything," in which Ryomaru is thinking to himself, while looking at Nezumi sleeping, is he contemplating the night they made love, or, the night when Nezumi tried to be the date for her dad's friend, or, the night she wore the dress to meet Ryo for dinner? I think that I have had just a little too much allergy medicine and my thinking is just muddled. (Is that a real word?) Love the story. Also, just want to tell you that I understand if you need a break from the stress and "nutcases" of fanfic stardom, but I will be devistated/devastated (which is it?!?!) if you disappear on us forever. Oh woe, to those of us who will have to read teenage hormonic wailings (sounds scientific), because all the good authors are chased off by "nutcases"! Sighhhhh . . I too, have become a Sueric, spoiled rotten with dailey/weekly updates of quality writing, fan. Thank you for what you have or will share with us. Signed your loyal "nutcase", Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Crazy Fan S.S. On: May 05, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, Ryomaru realizes he chose Nezumi as his mate when he was a pup! It's about time! lol I've been really bad about reviewing for Purity 3, so I feel really bad. I love this segment of the Purity saga (I'm not quite sure what you'd call it) because the conflict's so great. I mean, what could be more angsty than best friends finding out they want to be more than friends? Anyway, I thought I'd drop a line to say that I'm not dead and that I'm really enjoying following Nezumi's and Ryomaru's character development. Thanks for the laughs and smiles!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 17:23 CDT
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Hey, Sue! Random fact of the day: Roman soldiers pierced their nipples to show off their manliness. I'm doing a paper linking body modification to infectious disease. I think I may have found the link between guys and the fascination with nipple piercings. And I leave you with that joke/word of advice: If a guy has his nipples pierced, he should never get into a fight with his girlfriend/wife while shirtless. I don't know about you or the betas, but I've got a Scotch-Irish temper and probably wouldn't hesitate to yank. Good thing my boyfriend is afraid of needles, huh? Love you and the betas! Just thought I'd ramble on before I have to get back to the paper. XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Title: ^_~
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya!! Thank you for updating. I think this would have to be one of your best chapters. I really loved the way that you styled it and the ay you made Ryo actually think. . . . . for once. I was also glad that he didn;t look in the box, I think it really shows that-even though he may not know it-he loves Nezumi to death-literally. Update when you can!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story sue, i've missed reading your story (life hasn't allowed me to lately) love how you are progressing ryo and nez's relationship. so what happened to the youkai who were after ryo and his family? i'm sure you will hit us with that when we least expect it. so loved the exchange between nez's father and ryo. wonderful work as always.
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: May 05, 2005 17:01 CDT
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*sniffle* Must...not...cry...at work... That last line of Ryo's (not the final thought - the bit about keeping Nez from being lonely) just hit me like a ton of bricks. First he didn't take the chance and look in the box because he knew it would hurt her, and now wanting to take her to help her say goodbye to her mother. Wow. He's really done a lot of growing up. I'm so impressed! And thanks for the great chapters recently. I've been horrifically busy with work and now I'm sick as a dog, so I haven't had the time to review. But I've been reading all along and each chapter has been a nice bright spot to my days. :)
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:47 CDT
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"ello, and i resent that though i know you didn't mean to upset me but my name is not girly.... or at least i'm not girly, *sigh* never mind i'm not really upset, loved the chapter too much to get mad at you, well update asap please till then, Zirra
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:40 CDT
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i like how ryo went to speak to nez's father I didnt no that much about him really...i didnt think that nez's past would come back since ryo is now probably take her to her mothers grave...which is really sweet...i really like the update...but i still wonder whats in that box...!!!
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Title: Twins >-
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus On: May 05, 2005 16:35 CDT
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Alright, for the first time ever, I have a question. That I'm not afraid to ask and wouldn't be rude, and I won't give examples of the rudes ones because that would be...you get the idea. Does InuYasha hear his youkai blood, or just Kich and Ryo 'cause their twins? I feel like you already answered this, but I'm an idiot. Please answer the question of this lowly reviewer o' Mighty Queen of Angst.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 05, 2005 16:31 CDT
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:) I was so happy to see an update today. I've had a crummy week and it's not getting better, I so needed this wonderful distraction!
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