| "Always A First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 259 ] |
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Title: amazed yet again
Reviewed By: Starbrella (not signed on) On: June 20, 2005 21:29 EDT
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Damn right bulma gets all the men ^_~ hehe. Great job! I like the short pov about her thoughts on veggie coming back. And then that little short scene with yamcha...but then again, i guess he's not completely over the fact that the baby is Vegeta and not his. I'm loving this story lots as always and forever!!! Keep it rollllllinnggggggg go go go!!!
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Reviewed By: miaka16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 16:21 EDT
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"That woman gets ALL the men!" u_u...too true...too true.....*huffs* Nice one dchan! The labor should be VERY interesting....
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Reviewed By: rose of vegetasei On: June 20, 2005 11:21 EDT
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Bulma's lucky...she made it through the whole pregnancy in a few weeks (LOL...gotta love fanfics). I remember what it was like for my water to break...pop is right. I love Bulma and how she thinks. I understand why she wants to do away with Dr. Gero and why the others want to fight. It's nice to see her inner conflict to resist the temptation to do it herself. I'm still very curious about Vegeta...how will he find out? Come back to Earth and spy on her a bit and find out? Can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: TT On: June 20, 2005 02:32 EDT
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I love your bulma, shes strong.
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Title: Heylo New reader
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: June 19, 2005 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heylo! I am a some-what new reader. I read your story last week but I never got around to reviewing 'cause I didn't have any time, it was late and I had school the next morning but I'm leaving a quick review behind before I go to bed. This is a great story so far, I don't read to many DBZ stories but I am a sucker for VegetaxBulma stories and this is the best story that has them in it, I read another one later after I started reading this one but it just doesn't add up to yours, I never finished reading it 'cause I didn't like it that much. So anyways, just coming by to tell you that your story is really good and I was really glad to come on here tonight and see you had a new chapter posted. I love this story and hope to see another chpater added soon, so until then, Ja Ne! fujinakaheero!
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in!!!) On: June 19, 2005 19:59 EDT
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Waah, I missed a couple of updates here...and yet I still have nothing constructive to say! Deb, I'm bad at this. Or maybe you're just too good at this. A little bit of column A, a little bit of column B. Anywho, this was yet another great chapter, though I'm worried about the blood in the amniotic fluid...I hope everything ends up okay. I'm really looking forward to when Vegeta comes back, and to seeing how he reacts when he finds out he has a baby.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: June 19, 2005 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, poor Bulma. I can't wait to see what you have to write about her giving birth...I know that you know all about that kind of stuff, d-chan! Can't wait for the next update! Don't let it be as long this time!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 15:13 EDT
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Wow Miaka is beginning to make the rounds. Must agree with the Yamcha hair thing. I liked the way Bulma reacted over the phone with Yamcha. Bulma missed something when she was unable to answer that beep didn't she. It almost sounded like she had managed to find one of the androids already. Looking forward to more. -El-
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Reviewed By: Jess... On: June 19, 2005 14:03 EDT
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woohoo... great stuff... I like the story... and what is this love triangle... wolfie-miaka-yamacha... interesting... Bulma's having the baby... yay!!! little trunks
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: June 16, 2005 20:18 EDT
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Well, well, well... I knew you were writing this, but I had no idea you were up to 21 chapters. You know, you've been such a fixture in the B/V universe for so long, it seems almost impossible that you haven't written one of these 3 year things before. But of course, once you did, you did it RIGHT. Very well done, Deb, and I'll be sure to check for updates!
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy On: June 13, 2005 07:51 EDT
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I am soo loving Wolfgang an intriguing scientist looking for revenge, I wonder what else you have planned for him in this story, his role seems bigger than i first imagined. It seems as if Vegeta's desire for one last look, granted him a sight which he did not want to see, oh how he has misconstrued everything!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy On: June 13, 2005 06:00 EDT
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Noooooooooo Vegeta's gonna leave! although I don't want it to happen I can see why Vegeta would feel the need to. Whatever he does he always gives it 110% and more, intensely submerging his soul into whatever goal he desires until there is not a drop of sweat left to sacrifice. So when he finds not one, but two seemingly conflicting goals (Bulma and becoming a super saiyan) compromise does not come into the equation, it is either one or the other. I felt that this was magnificently expressed when Vegeta said: 'She is nothing. Becoming Super Saiyan is everything.' Although short and concise this statement is full of a multitude of meaning, it leads me to reflect on his reasons for not saving Bulma and baby trunks when they were blasted out of the sky by Dr Gero.
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think i've mentioned this before but the touching gentle intamacy between Bulma and Vegeta is so beautiful especially in this chapter, the way you portray the subtle gestures makes me feel as if I am getting a birds eye view of the entire scenario, yet I don't feel removed from it at all in fact I feel pleasurably immersed in the romantic atmosphere.
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Reviewed By: Caralin Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 12:44 EDT
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For fun I went back and started at the beginning rereading all the way to the point where Vegeta turns Super Saiyan...it's an amazing little tale you've created. I was impressed by the flow of the chapters as well as the anticipated build up between love scenes...which I long for! My favorite remains to be the seduction scene in the garden. I love Bulma making the first move, not knowing how Vegeta will respond. I love Vegeta containing all his emotions until Bulma begs him to touch her...simply one of the most true to character and erotically written sexual scenarios I have ever read. Now back to your most recent posting...I cannot even say how emotional I felt after reading your interpretation of Vegeta's past. You captured Vegeta's confusion and guilt over his sexually abusive past perfectly. I identified with Vegeta's shame and the question of his own culpability in regards to the perversive mistreatment by Frieza. Sexual abuse is not an easy subject to write about. The scars left behind are never healed, the nightmares never go away...you handled a very difficult subject with class and respect. As a reader I appreciate and admire you even more. Caralin Fury
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Title: amazed
Reviewed By: starbrella (not signed on) On: June 10, 2005 12:11 EDT
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OMG! Vegeta finally turned SSJ! I'm soooo happy! This chapter was beatifully written at his pov and what he went through. All the angery and fusteration that he's been through in his childhood and everything that shaped him in to the way that he his. I love it! It's so very heart touching. I really hope u would update soon cuz i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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