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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 23:03 EDT Comment/Review: YIPPEE!!! love the story - I know you'll get there so no worries about the rest of the crap - I'll just wait around for the next one!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 24, 2007 20:05 EDT Comment/Review: Another awesome chapter. I can not get enough of this story. I can not wait to read what will happen in the next chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Alisha_L On: April 24, 2007 16:42 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awe, Inuyasha finally stopped being an idiot. Yay!! Anyway, awesome, I love it, and if you're busy, than take a little break, you deserve it. You don't need to update fast (even though everyone's probably going to kill me for saying that) so don't worry. :) Anyway... hope you get some down time, and awesome chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 16:27 EDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Poor Inuyasha, he needs Kagome so much!!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 15:47 EDT Comment/Review: great chapter. lifes like a box of chocolates, eh? i hope moving and your new job goes well for you though.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 07:46 EDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Was wondering when you'll show and here you are... I have to say you did a hell of a job on this chapter, damn its really good. Almost want to make you cry (sniff). I hope the moving goes well and congrats on your new job(gives thumbs up). Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 07:02 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome chatper!! I really love this fic and the emotions are just... *wow* ^_^ I was so shock to find an updation of yours that i jus had to read it bfore school =D Yyou really are an awesome writer! I just love the whole inuyasha and kagome part, along with sesshy too ofcourse! I thought there would of been some sort of love triangle thing going on there...! So kagome really is out of the band, but the ending changed that hopefully! I jus cant wait til kags n inu get more "serious" in the physical part..lol, hentai me! *_* ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jen (nsi) On: April 24, 2007 06:30 EDT Comment/Review: Great update! The wait is definitely worth it (although it does suck- I completely understand real life). The thought of Sesshomaru dealing with giggling eight year olds is pretty funny (that's a scene I'd like to see). Now Sango and Kohaku are getting some kind of closure yet at the same time they're starting all over again- vrey cool. But of course, the biggie is Kagome and Inuyasha. I'd ask if this is finally a breakthrough for him but I get the feeling he'll go back to his old ways the next time he gets hurt or upset. Those song lyrics were perfect (now I must go and download that song). Another great update; I'll be waiting (patiently) for the next one!
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Title: Keep it up Reviewed By: Sorrows Angel Light [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 06:16 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Somehow, the more i read it, the more it gets better and better. I love it. this chapter was so good. I can't wait for the next chapter! -l o v e
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Title: silver moon dragon (not signed in) Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 06:05 EDT Comment/Review: Yay! you were right, big change :D im so happy lol great chapter :D
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 03:13 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This chapter was SO awesome, girl, I loved it. My condolences on all that has happened, heh. I hope everything works out int the end. But can I say, I love your writing? Seriously, your perception of life in the story, through the character's eyes is so amzing, it's universal. I really like this story. I loved the ending. The song did match perfectly with the part it was used it, heh, I listened to it as I read. lol. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update whenever you have a spare moment, or day. ;-)
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 00:44 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG that was romantic...is something bad going to happen soon...cant wait for things to unfold more...update as soon as you can..thanks
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 23:59 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another great chapter. Maybe....just maybe Inuyasha is ready to truly let Kagome help him. Because he really wants to change himself. I can't wait to see how it plays out. I just hope he doesn't end up dead trying to get away from Naraku.....
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 13:25 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG No, man I hope this doesn't turn out how it seems like it will. I hope you are able to get the next chapter out fast, the suspense is quite intense on this one. By the way I had a suggestion for a song, Hate Me by Blue October, I thought it sounded perfect for Inuysha. Blue October also has a song called Into the Ocean that is good too but I don't know how well it would work for this fic so you may not want to use it. Just wanted to tell you that. Hope your doing well. From the one and only strangeness, Emily.
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 01:14 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I very rarely review a story but I felt that I just had to let you know what a wonderful story this is. Not only the plot and story line, but the style of writing. This is up there as one of my 'favorite ever', up there equal to the stories by Sueric. I would say that you should update more often; but if you did that, I'm sure the quality of work would be affected. So please don't update more. Keep up the good work, and I hope that you pursue your writing outside of the fan fiction realm.
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