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Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving your story. I love the way you are infusing the relationships or everyone. I especially love the relationship of Kirara and Sango. I know that there is a dark situation coming up for her dealing with her brother. And Miroku is going to have a serious challenge with Sango. I can't wait for the next chapter! Peace!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 22:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It was definitely funny with Kagome and Sango getting plastered and Kagome flashing everyone when Sango decided to leave initially, lol. And a bit spicy with the little quickie Inuyasha and Kagome shared. But, my favorite part of this chapter was the....friendship. This is really the first time Sango fully let her guard down in front of her new friends. True, she fought it really hard (trying to run off). But, when she decided to stay she crossed a milestone. Up to then, she kept herself a bit detatched from them, mostly because she was hiding her scar and her partial amnesia. But, when she realized that they already knew the secrets she's been so afraid of and DIDN'T CARE, it freed her to be herself. I'm so glad that you're taking so much time to develop these characters and their relationships. The best stories always do this, and you are definitely doing it well.
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 19:49 EST
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Woohoo update! And another wonderful chapter at that! I absolutely love this story...one of my top favorites. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 18:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful chapter!!! Love their interaction and that they were able to clear up -a bit- how Sango got her scar. She is starting to realize that she has friends to count on. Nothing is going to be easy, but it's the first step to begin the healing phase. Wonderful the way you mixed angst, sadness, a bit of comedy and love in this chapter. Really an excellent chapter! Thank you so much for the update and for sharing it with us!!!
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Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: January 25, 2008 11:45 EST
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Poor Miroku, knocking out the drunk guy - all I could think was ..... "Where is the man in black? Fezzik, jog his memory." "Sorry, Inigo. I didn't mean to jog him so hard." Still enjoying the story & looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 00:44 EST
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I was waiting this chapter with such a big expectation. I could not wait to know how Sango would get out of all that mess. Oh! She is such a nice girl; I hope everything works out for her (both in your story and the manga!). I really enjoyed imagining InuYasha speaking Chinese. So cute! Well, nice writing. I drank it up, without breathing. Just as usual.
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Title: Minuoe
Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 01:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always enjoyed your style of writing. There is something about this style that makes it impossible to stop reading. You simply have to know what is going to happen to the characters. I loved the way Inuyasha intervened in the Chinese translation of Sesshoumaru's gallery to save what could have been a terrible situation. The way that you drew the characters one wanted to see them succeed. You felt for Sango when all the progress to date is set back because of scar on her back and how it affected her fragile psyche. You cheered Miroku's efforts to find Sango and admired the way that Kagome supported her friend. It is amazing how you can turn something as boring as a gallary talk into exciting fanfiction. Way to go
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Reviewed By: Xagzan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 21:49 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, since this is my first review so late in the game, it looks like most of what I would say has been said. But anyway, I think it's great that you put actual Japanese culture into your stories. I know it helps me learn more about it, and it's actually a learning that's fun. As for the latest chapter, very nice that you took the original concept of Sango being self-conscious about her scar and transitioned it perfectly into modern times, being out with Miroku.
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 19:35 EST
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Once again, an amazing chapter! I love this story and look forward to every update! I really love what you've done with the characters, and how you're spending plenty of time developing them and their relationships. Keep it up, and update soon, please!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Such angst. I love how Miroku picked he up. Very galant of him. Keep up the wonderful work! Thanks for update even though you were out of town. You rock!
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Reviewed By: ravenreux, NLI On: January 21, 2008 20:04 EST
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Wow...so much has happened since I last read this fic. I must I missed an update b/c I was totally lost when I read the newest chapter. After going back and catching myself up, I was so upset for Sango. First for having the worst luck with that major asshole and then for being afraid of losing her friend just b/c of some misfortune. I'm glad she realized how much she was able to trust Kagome and can't wait to see what happens when she trusts Miroku like that. And Kagome being the voice of reason...she is definitely wise beyond her few years. I sometimes wonder how Inuyasha could have made it this far without her...haha. Another beautifully written chapter...thanks for sharing!!~Reux
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Reviewed By: Pluto ^_^ On: January 21, 2008 10:44 EST
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This is an amazing story. I just wanted to say that I respect the fact that you update regularly and don't leave us all hanging. I really couldn't find a better story on this site even if I tried. Please continue to write. I'm secretly hoping for some more lemony action with Inu Kag in the next few chappies :) Anyway. I can't wait for the next update :)
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 04:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh. Miroku to the rescue!!! It's so easy to see him as the Knight in Shinning Armour!!! It suits him perfectly!! Poor Sango, she was so shine and beautiful at the beginning. Maybe now that she showed Kagome her back and scar will be able to talk about that with her. Wonderful Kagome here, been a true friend -what would you expect from her!. Great Inuyasha, showing who he really is and putting that guy in his place. Now, we must find out why the translator did what he did. Who's paying him to damage Sesshomaru. Of course, our cold king is going to find out... merciless. Great chapter Cathy!!! Was shorter? LOL Don't know, maybe I want to read more so... just wanted more! Must go to the office but wanted to live a little review!. Great job beautiful! Keep going and thank you so much not only for this wonderful chapter but for the entire story!!! It's a great piece you have here and you are doing an amazing job!!! :hug: Mage
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 23:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I'm just glad that Sango is okay....and that she may finally be opening herself up to being friends with Miroku and the others. I loved Kagome's reaction when Sango told her what they guy did "What a frickin idiot..". That was funny. And, boy is her real personality starting to show. Not that the sweetness and light isn't her, too; it is. But so is the fiery, fiesty side of her. So, it's a lot of fun seeing her come out of her shell. As for Inuyasha and the translator.....he did that brilliantly. That's the problem with bigots; most of them are irrevocably STUPID. Their lack of mental capacity just doesn't allow them to see rational truth; the fact that Inuyasha may be the one who was smart enough to bust him never even occurred to that moron. And that's what made it so sweet. Yes, it would have been nice if Inuyasha had beat the heck of the guy, but, sadly, that would have done more harm than good. Inuyasha's intelligence and charm undoing the translator's damage was more of a punishment than Inuyasha's fists would have been. And besides, we already know that Inuyasha could have pummeled that guy in his sleep....and Inuyasha knows that, too. He didn't have to prove it. Good one. And I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 23:01 EST
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That was an awesome chapter! The blossoming Miroku/Sango romance is what I've personally been waiting for!!!!! It's my absolute favorite pairing of all time! I love this story! Keep writing!!! ^_^
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