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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 01:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm just glad that they were able to get to Kagome in time. Kagome is more into Inuyasha than she is willing to admit, even to herself. And the same is true vice versa. I'm really enjoying how you're taking the time to SLOWLY get them together, rather than having them fall completely too quickly. This is much better.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun, dun, duuun... hes back! And with a vengeance it would seem. Damn, Yash'll be feelin that in the morning, lol. Great chap BTW. Love the complexities of the different OCs, as well as you're being able to keep em all straight, lol. And I almost missed this chap too, damned full email. Anyways, wonder what will Sess do/say first time he lays eyes on Kags. Oh that should be interesting and fun! Lol. Awesome, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: future author On: October 29, 2007 15:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter as always. I wonder what will happen next. Until the next update, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 14:17 PDT
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omg, please continue this story! i've been checking this every single day and i get so agitated when it's not updated...please update soon!!! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 19:12 PDT
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i really like your story =) only thing i'd say is to watch ur tenses (i screw them up all the time lol) and spelling. thanks for posting this!
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter! The depth of Sesshamoru's character that was shown in this chapter was excellent. Even though you said that the characters may not be exactly like the Manga/TV Show ones, they come extremely close! The original characters are very well done too. I feel like I can really relate to Rukiya. And your take on Kagome being an average, albeit not ugly girl is refreshing. I am excited to meet the villain of the tale. The plot thickens! Kudos & Hugs!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 17:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know you should warn people about drinking and reading your fanfiction, I almost laughed out loud at "Oh poo! And one of these day's I'm going to pull your ears so hard they're going to as long as a rabbits." I also find it creepy that you have Claire, my own name, as a character. I agree with her music choice (My dad listens to that stuff so I know the song. I love the oldies as well). More InuYasha scenes would be cool!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 15:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!! haven't even read the last chapter yet but i will still vote 10's for it... I know it will be good.
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 14:37 PDT
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OMG KEEEEP GOING. AND WHAT WILL LILIANA DO THE POOR SOUL I FEEL BAD FOR HER. Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 14:31 PDT
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Oh goodness, I'm so happy that Sesshoumaru and Kagura are together in this fic. I've read quite a few good fanfictions where Sesshoumaru and Rin's relationship ruined it for me, so I'm really glad that you chose Kagura *does a little gleeful dance*. Excellent chapter, you kept the suspense while slipping some answers... not enough to make the reader feel overwhelmed, but enough to keep us hooked, the answers dangling and deliciously tantalizing. Also, you have managed to keep a list of OCs, but unlike other fics, the reader is intrigued rather than annoyed. Wonderful character development, the dynamics, the rules, and the intricacies of the family/pack. I am anxiously looking forward to an update.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome[Not logged in] On: October 27, 2007 10:50 PDT
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Well YAY to another chapter!! And damn Sesshomaru whooped Inu's ass. hmm.. this story is one of my favorites yet i don t know how but there seems to be something missing. Well good chapter. And HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!![too]
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 08:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I knew Sessh was going to be pissed, But I was still sorry to see Yash get his butt kicked. He's a real jerk.....but a likeable one. And, honestly, considering what Sesshoumaru COULD have done to him, Inuyasha got off pretty easy, LOL. I look forward to reading the next one.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 15:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep Going i love this story = ) Please udate soon
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 00:03 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007.html Check these out to find out what you were nominated for! And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after November 1st. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association Note: If you get this notification more than once, it means you have been nominated for more than 1 award.
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