| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 03:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I really love the stories you are putting behind your OCs. Rukiya's story was really good. And, you're right, Narek is great. Gorgeous.....but evil as all get out. And, after Lilliana's reaction to Kagome's revelation, I find myself likeing her a little more. I still thinks she's arrogant and prejudiced.....but a bit more likable. And Inuyasha and Kagome.......sinking like stones, both of them. The growth of their relationship is slow.....but that makes it more believeable. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not log in) On: November 04, 2007 02:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
really spelling mistakes... i dont notice a thing XD and omg im loving Narek!!! he sounds like a fricking hottie!!! i hope you can draw, so you can draw me Narek XD and im quite suprised how Sesshy react towards Kagome ^^ or maybe next time he will cracked it ^^ and im proud of Kagome for not spilling everything to Sango, Miroku and Richard....
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 01:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ESPECIAL since the other stuff works properly.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 01:39 PDT
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why wont <p> work or <br />?????? SO ANNOYING
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 01:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry, your story is Great. The WORST things in stories is: Poor spelling (Every 5 words or spelled so wrong you don't understand what they are talking about), Short Hand, Wanna be Film Directors (eg people who try writing like a film script but have never seen one in there life), Bad Grammer, Bad or no Use of the following ' ; : " , . ? ( ) & $ ! and so on or oveer use of them, Lack of Breaks, and No new lines, A mixture of that will basically make me stop reading (unless its only a few and the plot is really great); The following are Plot/Story Line: Out of Character Overload (especially with out reason), Good-start-ok-middle-and-Quick-Bad-Ending, Mary-Sues (aka the perfect, can do anything person, or the other meaning putting you in as a Character), Bad Summary's (if I was going to do a summary for your story all I need is InuYasha/Kagome, Nightwalkers, romance, Comedy, nominated at the Feudal Association, & at war against the False Night King and not some rather blank statement with not a lot of meaning at all (I know I have done this to one of my stories on Quizilla, should re-do it) (OR a better on would be: Kagome finds herself 'tied' with InuYasha, Nightwalker, a blood sucker of the good kind, and finds herself trapped in a war with the False Nightwalker King. Can InuYasha, Sesshomaru and the rest of the Nightwalkers keep Kagome alive and in-turn InuYasha?(How was that???)), Bad Titles, Making Kagome live in Japan but put in American References... Culture references mostly(just not knowing any thing about how the Japanese live and stuff), Japanese Words or others with out any explanation to what they mean, and or an old or weird pop-cultural reference, or history reference, with out any explanation especially if the story hangs on it(a wikipedia link would be great in some cases) Some of the above will make me stop reading.(or not even start). Most wont even get me to vote or review(kinda like with customer service if the product fails or the custermer service was crap the customer is likely to never return(wow I'm learning stuff in Class)).
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 09:43 PDT
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YES!! 100th review right here!! YAY! WEll at least I should be unless someone beat me Which would suck. Well I have to say I loved this chapter. FOr some reason it just captivated me. It was a very nice HAlloween gift! 'Thanks! =D
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Reviewed By: future author On: November 02, 2007 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. I wonder what Kag will say to inu about the venom and what the others will say to her once they make it back to the house. Also, what they will do to prevent what happened between Narek and Kag. Even though Narek is the enemy I find myself liking his character. I can't wait to find out what happens next, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 16:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems like the enemy & the nightwalker hunters now know about kagome... wonder what will happen next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 19:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! Good update, and good luck with the test!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: October 30, 2007 17:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so I'm very grateful for the quick updates. Anyway could we get some more either lemony or limey moments between kag and inu. Or maybe just some fluff would be good. By the way I love this story and Kagura and Sess do sort of end up having a semi relationship and I like Rukiya she reminds me of Yuroishi from bleach. We'll update some time soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune (im not loged in) On: October 30, 2007 16:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVES IT!! cant wait for the next chappy! Inu and kags do end up likeing eachother right? not that this current situation isnt amusing to say the least. lol. I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to seeing more in the future. -Dessy-chan
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 13:09 PDT
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phew, that was a close shave! A very appropriate Halloween post, with shivers included in the package. Thanks for that; I'm also a little bit curious to see what's going on with this supposed poison... you add more goodies with every chapter, and to think it started off as a one-shot!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 09:16 PDT
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wow, this is getting more and more intense. thx for the early update though! greatly appreciated! good luck on ur test!!! and please update soon!!! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 30, 2007 07:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow another great chapter. I can't believe she got captured by Narek so easily. Now that she is back I don't think he will let her out of his site anymore. And, what effects will the anti-venom have on her or the nightwalker if she is bitten again? So many questions, can't wait for your next update. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 03:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!! (All Giddy) (bounce, bounce, bounce) More InuYasha Time please!!!! he barely gets and "screen time." (finds the InuYasha scenes great!!!) Astronomy... weird... (I like Astronomy though, just think that is a weird school subject.) Have a Happy Halloween!
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