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Reviewed By: bk On: November 14, 2007 05:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your story but I am a little confused. What exactly is a natural born nightwalker. I understand the ones created from humans. Anyway thanks for another great chapter and I will be watching for future updates.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 04:34 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Narek's history is tragic.....but that doesn't excuse what he's doing. I do wonder what the attraction to Kagome is, though, for Narek. Is it just because he knows Inuyasha wants her? Speaking of Inuyasha, I was glad to see a little progress made between him and Kagome. And I was especailly glad when Kagome stood up for herself at the end. Inuyasha will walk all over her if she doesn't stop him. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 04:12 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... at least kagome knows a bit more now... on who made who... but things are still confusing and complicated... seems that they're after kagome now... but kinda neat that inuyasha & kagome kissed... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 03:38 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U r the best writer i have ever read from I love you and please keep going
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 02:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never knew about the Armenia's (actually though.... is that a spelling error...lol) and found out a lot... I love the idea that Nightwalkers are really tight nit Families. And that Claire (me... lol) was changed by InuYasha, it has really proven that their relationship is a close one.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 22:16 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that must have been hard on Narek T-T hmmmm every1 wants Kagome in their hands! and OMG Inuyasha kissed Kagome... *squeals* he acts so high and mighty... and Lilliana i keep thinking like her and Narek are tiwns lol but i got a feeling that i want Sango to catch Kagome through the day... P.S. i jumped when i saw you have updated :P
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Reviewed By: Present to myself ^_^ On: November 13, 2007 19:09 PST
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I just like to say that I really enjoy Rukiya's character and the way you have developed her. I also appreciate how you put a lot of descriptions in your stories. It's good when the reader can picture what the author is trying to describe. I have also notest that you like to put in the theme, do not be fooled by appearances or actions but not just this story but in Bad Influences also. (Yoko) Ooo and one last thing, I don't usually do this but I think it would go well with your story. Um for the next lemon can I recommend that they be standing up in someway, I think it would go with the type of story this is and character you are portraying in it. Now if I'm and wrong then plz tell me. And you don't have to take the recommendation I well not be afendit. Have a great day
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 13:25 PST
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What has changed about Kagome? Her friends keep talking about how she has changed. While i was reading you story I kept thinking about Inuyasha with Kagome and the song "Music of the Night" by Andrew Lloyd Webber, kept running through my head. I just thought it fit so perfectly. I really am enjoying you story so far but i think you would benefit from a beat reader. It becomes difficult to read at times thats all.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: November 06, 2007 13:02 PST
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excellent couple of chapters. I liked that the whole 'family' came to get Kagome when she was at the police station. I have some questions about this whole venom thing though. I hope you go into that more or have Kagome question the nightwalkers about it all. question: are you going to tell us what happens to Inu (or better yet, show us) when he can't get some of his favorite fruit? (that is also a really fun designation - fruit) Thanks for sharing with us. I have really enjoyed this story so far.
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 13:39 PST
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Ahhh love Pink Floyd!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 17:41 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg i am now nameing you Greatest writer of all time and Leader of the Cliff Hangers please update soon
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Reviewed By: Nikiz bad habit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 09:57 PST
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This was an interesting chapter. I'm wondering if Kagome will tell Inuyasha about the "anti-venom" that was injected into her. Will it have any effect on him. When will he have to bite her again? It almost seemed he was going to in this chapter. Also I would like to know more about Kagomes looks, how men are more interested in her now that she has been bitten. Even her friends were saying she looked different. Will something come of that info? Kagome grudgingly seems to be getting closer and more feelings for Inuyasha while he has no feelings other than keeping her alive. Will they have any romantic feelings in the story? Or will he just have to wait until she dies of old age? Is Lilliana in love with Inuyasha or just really concerned? Was she in a relationship with Narek? Why is she so sick looking, is there something wrong with her?
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 08:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! you've updated!!! great chapter, i'm glad lilliana showed some emotions here. this story actually remindes of the Twilight series. xD well, please update soon!!! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: November 04, 2007 07:56 PST
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Ok I won't say I love this story, oh wait I just did!!! ^.^ lol anyway I agree that Narek is a downright cool bad guy and very very hot. Anyway I love the way u are subtly progressing the relationship between Inu and Kag. However doesn't he need to bite her sometime soon, its been a little while since the last time and we could use some lime or lemon. Well update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 06:20 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... like the part when kagome was being introduced to the rest of the family... and also the last part where lilliana actually shows concern for kagome... what is lilliana's deal anyway... maybe kagome can finally figure her out... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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