| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 15:03 PST
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Please hurry with the next chapter im so excited to know more
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 11:36 PST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: November 30, 2007 09:50 PST
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Loved the chapter. I like that you have some more meat to this story than just bite bite bite. The back story on Narek was interesting. I would love to hear his side of the story, but it also seems like his brood sister is hiding something. I also like Inu's inability to control himself when he is around Kagome. It brings a lot of the manga relationship into play. Things I hope to see soon include: More interaction between Inu and Kags. Even though you have told us about the 'venom' I would love to see the side effects of it on Kagome. The hentai in me would love to read the confrontation (or even the lack of one talked about) between the two when she is having her bleeding cycle and the scent of her blood is in the air. I would like for you to do another chapter focusing on Sesshoumaru and why he brought his child into the family. Thanks for sharing with us!
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Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 14:11 PST
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Read the first chapter and it was great. Now I'm hooked :) Awesome. A new favorite author to my list :D
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Reviewed By: Nikiz bad habit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 22:09 PST
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Poor Narek, he really does have a bad past. Although that doesn't really give him the right to treat people and Nightwalkers that way. I'm still a little confused by the part Lilliana still has to play with him, and their connection. I love that Inu/Kag interaction. I'm happy that Kagome was standing up for herself and a little shocked that she was saying all that to InuYasha. But I think its great that they are getting closer. Poor Inu not knowing what he feels. I am wondering more about the 100% blood compatible thing that was mentioned in earlier chapters. What does that really mean? Are Inu and Kag meant to be together? Will Kagome become something she isn't or does she have some secret past involving her blood we don't know about yet? Is she to be a Miko in this story, will that come into play? I'm dieing to find out more.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 04:01 PST
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the October 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/October2007/Best-AUAR-Fiction-3r d.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Oct2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 10:14 PST
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I am truly enjoying this fic. It's really original, I don't think I've read anything like it. All the secrets and mistery plots really leave me wanting just one more chapter. I'm glad you veered off the regular cliche of vampirism, and made something totally your own. I think it makes the story that much more intriguing. Makes want to figure out who they really are, and what their enemies are like. :D
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Title: awesome story!
Reviewed By: redevil820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 18:45 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo :O who's in richard's office?! the suspense is killing me! >_< is it narek? is it the nightwalker king? =o i have got to say that your story is very amusing and interesting, i'm quite addicted to it..very much so like inuyasha to kagome's blood :] lol will inu+sesshy's background info be revealed soon? i sure hope so! ^-^ Can't wait until your next update!
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 17:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good writing, sorry I'm not to good with comment but I do read your stories when you post them and I Love them. I think Inuyasha has more them a addiction to Kagome and he dosen't want to admid it, Kagome having the same feelings and a afraid to admid it too. I think their is something going on with Lillana and Narek and she is afraid to say something about it think she get into troble because if I remember right he wants Lillana to join him right.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 19:01 PST
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YESYES UH...idk YES Iloved it!!! haha. No for real this chapter just made me really happy,not ina sadistic way. I just was having a crappy day from work and an update was very needed. =D ANd yes I think I might know who was with Richard. But update when you can. Heyy maybe you will have good timing again.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: November 15, 2007 06:07 PST
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Ok I like this chapter, especially the kag/inu stuff towards the end. I'm really looking forward to how they are gonna interact in any of the future chapters. Anyway I think u have created a pretty interesting bad guy and now that he has this past you'll even have people who sympathize for him. Still I'm not sure I really like the idea of him being stronger than Inu, I mean Inu was born a nightwalker and he's a lot older than Narek. But I also never agree with stories that have Sess being way stronger than Inu either, the only time Sess ever truly beat Inu in the series was when Inu went full demon and could not think. And the time Sess put his hand through Inu's chest he said that if he continued to attack Inu would kill him so he left. *shrug* oh well. Update soon ok I'm dieing for more Kag/Inu action!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 18:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! Good update!! I swear this story is awesome, and I can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Hinote [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter. Loved the moment between InuYasha and Kagome. Narek is such a tortured soul. I pity him and hate him all at once lol Great characters and awesome plot and twists. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 15:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey thanks for the update!! The chapter was interesting. I dont think the chapter was as dark as you thought it would be, but I understand the warning none the less. Narek, is very angry inside. Too bad they dont have nightwalker therapy. Lol....what I really liked about this chapter is that there was more Inu/Kags interaction. There is a lot to learn of the nightwalkers and their background, but it is also nice to have more dialog where our two favorite characters become closer. Its fun watching thier relationship blossom. Thanks for the update again, and take care!!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 09:25 PST
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yay, you've updated! Awesome chapter. so now we know who the heck is Narek. I love the scene between Inu and Kags, so sweet and cute!!! ^^ Kimiko =D
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