| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 21, 2004 17:38 CST
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First you make Seto sad, then you don't update! Unless someone died, ( in which case I'm very sorry) or you have writers block ( in which case I'm sorry, BUT GET OVER IT!!!!) Then Update!!!! You're torturing me!!! :( You wouldn't want to make a girl with a Giant Purple Monkey ( I Borrowed it from Aten) cry... would you?
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 20, 2004 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This...is getting...sooooooooooooooooo...GOOD! My GOD!! Poor Aten, at least Marik was snapped out of his BIG daze/coma-thingy. Now Ryou has someone in THIS plane of reality that can help him at home. Otogi and Tristan have been really sweet helping Ryou, and Yami IS STILL BEING AN ASS! I think that tablet they found was RIGHT!!!! Something MUST be going on with him, he's being really cruel to EVERYONE! I like the cards, very good choices. Where's Malik/Aku anyways?
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 07:10 CST
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*cringe* I sooo don´t like reading about Aten being in pain like that. x_x *thumps up* But you´re doing a great job! *wants Yugi to slap Yami* MY GODDESS!!! That Pharao Ass pisses me off! *fumes* .. *rolls eyes* And he´s gonna force Seto to help him destroy the cute pie twins? *snorts* Oh pu~lease...gimme a break. -.-;; Delusional much? *gets way to worked up about these things* XD *squeals and huggleglomps bakurasgirl* Those cards are genius! The Loving Servant kicks ass (even the Dark Magician´s if she wants XDXD) and The Helpless Child makes all of my protective urges kick in. ~_~ Although...Aten´s card doesn´t seem to be good for much. o_o I still like it though! And the way they both protected Seth/Seto against Yami was amazing! *nodnodnod* ... *rereads the last review responses* Yeeeeeees, Aria RULES and Yami...DROOLS! ^___^ *cough* Once again you´ve created an amazing chapter, thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: Dark Sapphire On: February 18, 2004 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cool fic! Thank you for writing it! I've been reading your other fics & I finally caught up to the new bits!! Yay for me! Will Joey & Hayden ever forgive Seto??? OH I hope they do, he doesn't deserve this!!! & You guys make Yami seem so evil, it's good to read something different for once! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I want to say I loved it when Ryou went off on Marik (gotta love that anger) Second...NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Joey! Come back to earth! Where's Aku...let me at him! For a second I got kidna confused on the whole girl and the boy, but im sure youll come back with some much alter....THEY CANT BE APART THEY JUST CANT!!!! *jumps and down crying* wahhhhh!!!! its so sad! And he doesnt know..help...soul being destroyed on Seto's part...! *whines* YAMI AND AKU! I COME TO GET YOU! *throws cookies filled with sharp objects in them at them*GRR! Anyway nice anrgy emotions, looking forward to the update, would you like fires, i mean fries with that? *_*
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: February 17, 2004 22:45 CST
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noooo! seto and jou were made for each other..nononononono... this can't happen, and poor bakura, and poor aten...so sad...its my job as dark thief guardian to support bakura, and his son, so sorry if i do go on, but i'm really loyal to my fav. spirit. i hope bakura gets the key out of there soon, think i'll go deliver it my self...hm...thinky...keep up the good work bakurasgirl
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 17, 2004 07:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!!! * starts chucking rabid monkeys ( Rabid Monkeys are like Friendly-Death!) at Yami and Steven* Bakegeta jiji!!!! ( Foolish Old Man!!!! WHOOOOO!!!) Yeah Yugi! No more Meat or Balls for Yami!!!!! :) .... Poor Seto!!!!.....:( And updates on Friday?!?!?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Oh... and... *sigh*.... Aten.... y-you can have my Monkey....:)
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 16, 2004 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yami deserved that! He's being SUCH AN ASS! I've said it a million TIMES BUT IT'S true!! aT least rYOU AND bAKURA GOT TO BE TOGETHER A BIT. Sorry, stupid cap lock key. Try to make sense of that. Been checking up multiple times everyday. Keep up the good work and GET MARIK OF HIS LAZY ASS!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 16, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry Im late! My comp hw was going to drive me insane and im sttill not done but anyway NOOOOOO!!!!! Yami you cruel bastard! I bite you! *bites him* I sick my puppy on you! *baku the puppy growls and runs after Yami* Your SO MEAN! *cries* *sings* no body want to be lonely, no body wants to cry!!!!!!!! Yami dont turn into a cruel bastard again! Please!...*runs around* NOOOO!!! WHYY!!!!! Yugi, you can do better than that meanie poo head!!!! *_* anywho...
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 16:13 CST
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God, Yami is freaking pissing my off! He's such a meanie-head!*mumbles* Stupid, compassionless bastard. He can't hold a grudge that long, can he?
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: February 16, 2004 15:01 CST
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poor bakura-kun...nooooooooo! not even a good bye! cruel fate, *grabs yami by the neck and says: u evil creature. sends yami to anzu's mind. that'll teach him to trap bakura* ...poor aten, he'd need the strength of aria's nightmare dragon to ever be strong...poor crying chibi.... and if its not seto, hayden, or aten i give up... i guess the_great_bakurasgirl will have to write it in
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 10:45 CST
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o_o ...Yami´s no better than the villains. *twitches* Why is Yugi with him again? Because of the sex? Because they´re two halves of a whole? *wallows on the ground* Damn him. -.- *blinks* I knew that the kids were Darkness and Light, sorry for...seeming stupid. *cough* English is my third language, so I don´t always come across the way I want to. ^_^;; *merfs* I still think that Yugi should dump Yami...and throw him out of the house....which of course then could lead to Yami sending -Yugi- and the entire gang to the Shadow Realm and...well yeah. >_> Damn it all! *shakes fist* Oh! Beautiful lemon! *huggles it close* XD Can´t wait to see what happens next. ^___^
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 16, 2004 06:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ryou... let's seal Yugi in the Puzzle and see how Yami likes it! * pounces on the trembling Hikari* Guess what I got for Valentines Day? A giant, purple..... MONKEY!!!!!!!!!! * hugs it tightly* I hope you had a good one too!.. :)
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Reviewed By: Maruke On: February 14, 2004 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's cute, that's just too cute. Bakura's little outburst was HILARIOUS, for some reason or other. Most little kids think babies are pets, it's pretty funny.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 13, 2004 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well valtentines isnt here yet but for whenever you update bleh...HAPPY VDAY! Aten my boy! Im so sorrry! (my puppy is back safe and sound now if only aten could be!) I love you robbie! THe cource of makig everything better! *content sigh* That was the cuteest thing..he high light in eveything...theyre so cute and chibilike it makes me get all giggly! The love is in the air! *_* hehe!!!!!!
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