| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 02, 2004 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm BACK!! I reAD ALL THE THINGS i SKIPPED.Woah, my computer keys were all messed up, sorry for that last sentence. You update A LOT! I LOVE THAT!! Nice chapter title, the black crayon, got a nice ring to it, ne? AHHH, what possesed me to go on ranting about that? Ahh never mind. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 16:53 CST
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Aw...*cuddles Aten, Hayden, and Jou plushies* They're all so cute!!!!! *notices Steven plushie* Hm.. now what can we do with this? *evil grin* VOODOO TIME!!! *runs to get pins* YEAH VODKA! Oops.. I mean VOODOO!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww Hayden. hug Hayden and Aten. just to cute. still hasn't unchain the Yami's. it's better just to keep them lock up. can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo those chibis are soooo Kawaii!!!!........................I put the rating at '10' because The chappie was great...I just dont know what to type at the moment...cripes. Well update as soon as possible! Chau Emily
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Reviewed By: setharo07 On: February 02, 2004 14:54 CST
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I just love all of your fics. ^_^ I think it's so sad that Yugi was hurt, but I know just the way to punish Yami. *Looks around quickly* I'm gonna strip him, then chain him up and torture him until he begs to be released, but I won't let him out until Bakura is out, and I think that he has been suitably punished. Poor Marik, and Malik too, Aku is just sooo evil. I love Aten, Robbie, Hayden, and even Umi and Aria. They're all just so cute, that I want to squish all of them in one giant hug. Please keep on writing, I just want to learn more about Robbie and Aten, and everybody else. Maybe we can come up with a way to punish Yami further, but not to severely, but Aku and Steven should definitely be defeated. lol, see ya soon ^____^
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: February 02, 2004 07:24 CST
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Aww.... Hayden's so cute! Good chapter! Here, take this! * shoves a very sad Yugi at you* Yugi:........ Where am I? What's this?* hands you a plushie of..... Steven! Ewwwww!* Now, your plushies can beat him up! :)
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: February 01, 2004 21:59 CST
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Sorry I didn't review, I went snow-boarding for the first time!.... It's one painful sport..... I can't really move my arms.... and my butt hurts...... :) I totally agree with bakachibi_voidfox! * grabs a handful of snow, then shoves it down Yami's pants* Take that, baka pharaoh! Could you give this to Aria for me? * holds out a bag of one of those black & white M's* Thanks! Very good chapter!
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: February 01, 2004 15:28 CST
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what happend? bad cliffy, bad boy *chapter clifhanger growls* poor aria, poor bakura....poor bakura...some one should slap the issues outta yami... can't wait to find out what happens to aten great_bakurasgirl
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 10:19 CST
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Ugh! DAMN IT YAMI! lol good chappie, I"m watching for the next one! Chau! Emily
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: February 01, 2004 01:49 CST
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noo! get up bakura! *runs over to Ryou and hugs him* dont worry we'll get your husband out! *puts a hand on the door* Damn you! *the door is blown apart* *rushes in and brings bakura out, hugs him* dont worry the_wonderul_bakurasgirl will help you out! *bakura wakesup from the dream still cold in his soul room* *bakura finds a key in his hand with a note attached, it reads: ashiteru bakura itemri I will watch over your*
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Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 00:24 CST
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Poor Marik, Bakura, and Aria. *sniffles and grabs a tissue* How dare Yami do that to Bakura, making him leave Aria alone. Aria wanting her father back. Those kinds of moments always get to me. Oh, and the Robbie and Aten thing you have here is so kawaii!!!! :D
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: January 31, 2004 18:48 CST
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OMG!! I am soooo sorry I dinin review! I went on vacation. I am soooooooo stupid>< I missed so much! So, here we go; KYAHHHH!! evil aku!! HE RAPED MARIK!!! MARIK!! NOOOOOO! so evil, aint you? YUUGI!!! NOOOOOOOOO! *whimpers and cuddles a naked Yuugi plushie* Poor Yuugi! And Yami was soooooooooo mean! Bad Yami! Bad! *smacks Yami up the side of of his head* BAD!! And Bakura and Ryou!!! Bakura got stuck ;___; POOR BAKU-CHAN!!! And Aria was making me feels so sad. Don't chibi's have that affect all the time? And Aten and Robbie! *Squishes the chibis* Chibi!!! Awwwww, so kyoot^^
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 31, 2004 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wahhhh!!!!! BAKURA!!!!!!*crys* its not fair! *gives him many warm hugs and hot soup* poor marik...wake up! i will so be here tomorrow,it may be late but i am definalltly coming here and reading! is he supposed to be naked just like back in egpyt(some symbolism thing going on?) keep rockin on! -valea
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 09:00 CST
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Ne.. poor Bakura-kun. Damn you, crazy yami. No wonder I always got freaked out evey time he showed up on the anime. *shivers* Sometimes I just wish he would shut up, fall to the ground, get poked to death (my ideal way of murdering), then explode into a bunch of happy evil pieces! YEEEEE!!!! HAPPINESS in DEATH!
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Reviewed By: Amane On: January 31, 2004 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Kari, the "new reviewer", under my usual name Amane. ^_^ ADFF.N has a habit of shortening my reviews (seriously what you read was only 1/3 of what I had written -_-;;;), so I think I´ll start reviewing here. *nodnod* o_o And wow...what a "welcome". *clears throat* Okay, I agree that Yami is an okay guy, just not when he does things like...-that-. *glares and mock stabs her Yami plushie* I was going crazy imagening what would happen to Aria now that Bakura had been sealed away and Yami was sort of threatening her and all. o_O *smiles* But Aria´s fine and Yami...not in the near vicinity! *dances around happily* I´m glad Yugi´s okay, he´s my second fave hikari. ~_~ Meh...I feel bad for Bakura, I WANT HIM OUT OF THAT FREAKIN SOUL ROOM!!! *coughcough* Yes, yes I do. *thinks a bit* Oh! Absolutely love the fluffy Aria-ness of this chapter! *wallows in it* And Robbie and Aten cuddling up to each other in their sleep...makes me want to squeal all fangirlish alike. ^_^;; *scratches head* Oh! Forgot to say, Aria´s my fave character in this fic...arc. *nodnodnod* She´s one of my fave characters ever, even though she´s an OC. I don´t usually like OCs, but her and Aten are just too darling. Really, I re-read every section that has Araia in it, 2-3 times. *cough* I´m not obsessed. >_>;; I just wish that she was a real character in YGO. You´re doing a marvellous job and I´m -more- than looking forward to upcoming chapters.
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