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 Reviewed By: Valea  On: February 05, 2004 09:00 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Maybe Ryou could get on welfare? Heh heh? Aku's back...and he's nto black, but hes got white hair man! Someone detect him! gahhhrahhhhh!!!!!!*makes Ryou win the lotto*YAY!
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl... HUGGER!  On: February 05, 2004 07:47 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like that one better.... * grabs a HUGE bag of sugar* Hikari's on sugar high!.... anyway........ just when I decide I like Joey... ya' go and kill him of... *grins evily* That's not very friendly! * pushes Anzu towards you with a stick* Anzu: Bakurasgirl IS LIKE FRIEEEEEEEENDSHIP!* hugs you tightly and pushes a plushie towards you* Anzu plushie! IT has batteries! Watch! *she screams in a terrified way and the doll starts singing " I love you!" * And it has Energizer batteries! So It'll keep going and going and going and going and going. :) Great chapter though! Thanks for updating Sweet Release TWICE!!!
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher  On: February 04, 2004 22:00 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! Sorry I had to run earlier... Anyway... here! * pokes a tired, confused Seto towards you* Seto:.... Who are you?..... What is this place? Are you the one that gave me that * gulp* spider? * Malik lover and Anzu basher nudges him again* Seto: Here? * pushes a(nother) plushie towards you. It's a Seto Plushie! With interchangeable clothes! :) Great chapter! Also.... I think my Username may be.... Bakurasgirl fan and Malik lover.... what do you think?
 Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess  On: February 04, 2004 19:19 CST
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Awwwwww, how cute :)
 Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2004 02:58 CST
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*wallows on the ground* Argh...I can just imagine how Aria feels. *gags* I hate being sick like that. x_x Poor baby. I like how Ryou´s taking care of her, he´s such a good mother. ^_^ *sighs* I really felt for him when everything was becoming too much and he was beyond tired. *pets her Ryou plushie* And when Bakura took over Ryou´s body and held Aria! *squealcoughsniffle* So touching! ;_; *blinks* Robbie+Aten fluff! *dances* Feel the luuuurve... ~_~ Aww, and Umi had a...Umi card...for Aria. ^___^ *rolls around laughing* I loved how Ryou fell alseep while talking to Joey on the phone. XD *stares* Aten...the artist. o_o *snickers at sudden thought* Makes me wonder what Aria would be good at. Professional theft? All around known terrorist? *grins* Yes...make daddy Bakura proud...
 Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox  On: February 03, 2004 18:57 CST
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poor lil sick chibi, poor lil cold bakura...poor bakura..*instals a heater in his soul room* poor bakura...so sad...i hope he's free soon clever_autheress_bakurasgirl
 Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 03, 2004 15:39 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my lord Aten is freaking cute. Great chappie, can't wait till thursday, CHAU! Emily
 Reviewed By: Valea  On: February 03, 2004 10:17 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awe! *hugs Aten to pieces* SQUISH!!! That shows them muwhahaha...anywho (im at school so if i dont review pelase dont kill me my comp got a virus again!) yeah anywho...poor family *brings Bakura and aria hot chicken noodle soup* Yay! be better! im so happy that aten was able to not be SO shy...yay a little artists in the making...reminds me of myself ha ha ha ha! anyways hopefully i can read as much as i can but yeah it was a good chappie...i wonder where aku went off too...? *hugs bakurasgirl* love much! i am happy! *does happy punakfied yet gehttofied dance* KICK ASS! whoot whoot!!!! And I have to say Aten is the cutest things since i came up with my walrus Bunny. Aria will feel better! *throws her a M's Parade!*
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher  On: February 03, 2004 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Evil update though! Gotta run....NOW! Bye
 Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 03, 2004 02:08 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*tils head* At first I -almost- didn´t like Hayden, simply because I´m bias to Aria and her feelings. ^_^;; Go figure. He´s a nice, timid little boy though. *ponders* Will he and Aria -ever- get along? Even a bit? o_o;; *blinks* I can see why he was so worried about Aten sleeping next to Joey. ~_~ And he even came to "save" his little friend. *squeals* TOO CUTE!!! *cough* That wasn´t me. >_> *jaw drops* I´ve completely forgotten to worry about Seto! o_O *slaps forehead* I guess, I think he can take care of himself even in the Shadow Realm. XD He´s so...cool, calm and collected. ~_~ *eyes widen* And I just rememebered Steven´s (*stabs with a bloody fork* -.-) plans for Aten! *twitches* I HATE HIM! Aku may be bad, but Steven used to be human! Evil aho. *whines* I want Aria to protect her little brother! ...which reminds me...I absolutely freakin adore her kickass dragon! ^___^ *bounces around hyperly* I can´t wait for the next chapter...
 Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 03, 2004 01:52 CST
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Holy cocoa, you´re fast! o_o Not that I don´t love having so many chapters to read...mind you, I spend a great deal of my day just -thinking- about the next chapters. Well, actually I go around dreaming up little side storys with Aria and Aten, just to make the waiting shorter. *cough* I´m not obsessed. >_>;;; *blinks* ARIA´s sick! O_O *sobs* Ebil Yami! *stomps foot* Even Yugi was all nice about it when Ryou talked to him... *sulks* Yami´s being a first class ass. -.- Can I just pleeeaaase dig out his spleen with a spoon? *grins* Oh! I feel so sorry that Bakura is all naked and cold inside that soulroom...even is he -does- have that blanket from Ryou. >_< *squeaks* Onto ze next chappie! *scampers off*
 Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 02, 2004 21:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww, kawaii!! Hayden is making progress! I'm so happy! Poor guys... *castrates Aku to death* I hope Seto and Malik are ok. Aria and Ryou and everyone else, too! Whatever happened to the creepy sub and the real teacher? Is the first guy still alive? I hope so... he was cool. Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Valea  On: February 02, 2004 20:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! its sooo CUTE!!!!That is progres...some good things going on..hopefully not gone to waste..? dun dun dun! theyre all so cute all a family and in bed..nto even arare of the evil plots going around while they sleep...but thats ok...GOO PUPPPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox  On: February 02, 2004 18:57 CST
Comment/Review:
aww kawaii!!! that was so cute,i hope some one realizes seto is missing. Feel free to use the key idea if you like. *kicks yami and says: come on stupid you still have to beg for forgivness from bakura and maybe you'll keep both your (ehem) orbs*
 Reviewed By: Valea  On: February 02, 2004 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I will nto miss anymore review optitiuities....man did i spell that wrong! lol anywho...bakura *weeps* stay strong! and there was a light come back with aten's drawings...i know that is so gonna be priceless..i hope yugi can use those loveable puppydog eyes on yami! ^-^
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