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Reviewed By: sweetcactus On: March 13, 2006 10:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most excellent! This slow, but inevitable, process of Vegeta and Bulma knowing, trusting, and giving themselves over to each other is very well done! It is interesting to see how their perceptions of one another have changed during the course of the story. I look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Evil_Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 10:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl....how I love you :P! I wish I could read things like this every day!! I love you, I love you, I love you!!! :D! Please give us more!! more and more!! lovies Evil-Vegeta
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Reviewed By: aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 23:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray,a new chapter! I am relieved that Bulma hasn't been raped as in much fanfics. I adore their relationship, how she finally understand why he is a killer and I adore the secret desire of Vegeta of having someone who understand and love him in spite of his life; she isn't the same Bulma since the beginning of the story, she is a real survivor now.
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Title: Awesome, again.
Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 23:36 PST
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I'm so glad that he saved her! I'm afraid of what will happen to him when those guards are found dead, though. This story is so fantasitc, every word is well worth the wait. Excellent job. I only wish it were longer!
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 12, 2006 22:32 PST
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Oh, how I love this story. Now that their together, I can't wait to really get into the politics of Namek and Cold and all that stuff. Vegeta's so masculine, Bulma's so feminine I just adore it all! Thanks
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Title: yes!
Reviewed By: DarkSaiyan (not logged in) On: March 12, 2006 22:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yeeesss!! an update! It's quite funny though because two days ago I just finished re-reading this fic and I wanted so much to read more of it! And oh oh! surprise! There's another chapter! Yipee! And now, I'm going to read Against all odds for the fifth time I think lol I hope you will update more often... though I understand that you have other things to do than write lol You have incredible talent, which is why you should not stop writing. :)
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: March 12, 2006 21:27 PST
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as usual your chapter took my breath away... that was amazing... I love the development you've given these characters... fantastic job with this chapter
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Reviewed By: (MeTre) On: March 12, 2006 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very, very excited to see this updated. Like Maccam, I'm also surprised by the fact that they didn't seem to do as much to her as expected. This was coupled by major relief as I wasn't sure if I were mentally ready to read another Bulma-is-raped fic right now. You are incredibly adept at characterization. None of the cliche rush to make Vegeta fall in love and vague references to Bulma understanding him better than anyone. Here, you actually provide reasonings: Vegeta is slowly being humanized through his experience with Bulma (as well as the rest of the universe--love that one where he witnesses a beggar woman being wronged while Bulma fights off the arachnoid in the background) and Bulma also grows from witnessing and experience some of the things Vegeta has gone through. This method has so much more substance than, say, having Vegeta give frame-by-frame commentary on his oh-so-horrible life. This way, he does not have to say anything to make her understand. But you already know this, so why am I telling you...Bah. Just wanted to show my appreciation. Also, you seem to have grown much as a writer. I notice your penchant for slave-style fics or male domination. This one is more subtle than your older ones though, which I also appreciate. Wish other authors would take note. Keep up the good work. Eagerly awaiting updates.
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Title: I love this story
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: March 12, 2006 20:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit, although i absolutely adore all of your work, this is truly my favorite piece. It is just so beautiful, and i feel like the characters are so true to themselves, and it's just such a joy to read. I love them as a couple! They are just so amazing and i love ur stories!!!! I can't wait for the next update!! ~Aaralyn~
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was intense. Eww the bugs! Just like in Indiana Jone's Temple Doom! Vegeta and Bulma's feelings are very complexy written to make them mysterious cutoes on that.
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Reviewed By: vegetachik7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 19:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I've read this story on other sites and got so excited when I saw that there was a new chapter. Your grammar and writing style are quite amazing. I love how you write Bulma and Vegeta's characters. It's a perfect representation of both of them. And I loved the line when Bulma says that she'll be there if Vegeta ever needs saving. I can tell things are about to get even more action packed now that Frieza has been defeated. I can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 17:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a great writer
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Reviewed By: Karen in CT On: March 12, 2006 14:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is well writ. I like that she reminds him that he's alive.
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: (Maccam) On: March 12, 2006 14:51 PST
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I'm surprised they didn't do more to her then they did, then again it's an on going story. I loved the fact that he got there when he did and saved her so to speak. To read how they are saving each other is a treat. I can't wait for more of thos wonderful story!!! update soon.
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Reviewed By: Brkeback On: January 09, 2006 13:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh!!! a cliffhanger!!! nooooooo!!!!! *even though i already new that, this is my,like, 5th time reading this story!!!* its so awesome!!!! you must update! this story is too good to not continue!!! i keep finding myself wishish that they could make an anime out of your story...its so great.
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