| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 12:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You're right high school is very much like court intrigue. Nice chapter. Still love your descriptions
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Reviewed By: alySON On: May 13, 2006 09:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank god you updated!!!! i love this story and i was just thinking how much i wanted to read another chapter! thank you so much for updating!! i love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 06:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: May 13, 2006 03:49 PDT
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I'm so happy you updated! I love the b/v interaction and think that you capture them and their situation so perfectly. The conversations betwwen them flowed really well and their thoughts fitted exactly to the situation. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next and see Bulma and Vegeta really act as a team. I can't help but love Zarbon and the arrival of Freeza will be great! Keep it up and hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 02:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, an excellent chapter, I love how you described Vegeta and Bulma's relationship. To write a chapter like this one under so much pressure is a real achievement. You should take a well deserved rest Tempest.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (nsi) On: May 12, 2006 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAAA!!! The top Bitch of DBZ fanfiction has returned. *bows* I'm not worthy!! But seriously though, its great to see you writing again. I know you must have either had something going on in real life, or just a case of writers-block. Anywho, this was a great chappy. And with all of the things Vegeta must have done in the past I'm pretty sure he is just; if not more well off that Bulmas family. Can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: ilex9 not logged On: May 12, 2006 16:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job with this one. Interesting the way you are able to have these characters flip-flop in roles in such a subtle way, yet still keep them IC and believable. I guess there's oonly trouble for Vegeta ahead since everyone knows he has something he values now.
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Title: ~Breathtaking
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely fantastic, and they are absolutely the hottest couple in the world. I love your story!!!!! sooooooo much!!!! I'm eagerly awaiting the next update! ~Aaralyn~
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Title: "Lab Monkey"
Reviewed By: (MACCAM)M On: May 12, 2006 15:10 PDT
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My my my my isn't vegeta full of surprises. I hate the fact that Zarbon is playing sides, and using his info over vegeta's head. I only hope that when Frieza and Cooler finds out he gets his. I fear for Bulma now, but yet somehow i have hope for them both. Thank you for updating. I know your very busy with work and your family. it was a great chapter. PS. THANK YOU BARB!!!!!!
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Title: Outstanding!
Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 14:58 PDT
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As always, every single word of this fic is excellent. I do believe it will be my favorite story forever. I love the complexities that you have written into Vegeta, in his eyes and in his posture. I have a bad feeling that the two cannot enjoy a party and slip off unoticed...can't wait for the next chapter, but every chapter has been worth the wait. Great Job, Tempest. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: loussi On: May 09, 2006 10:15 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your fic, it's the first time i read an incomplete fic.Bulma and Vegeta are so IC in the story, it's really nice.And the insincts torture*shiver*, that was a nice touch especially the following Lemon.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 10:26 PST
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Good chapter. Really introspective for both B and V. I think this is probably the big turning point we've been waiting for . . . the acceptance that the other is probably there to stay. :D
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 22:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEW Finally done with the chapter and I cannot wait to read some more of it. SO GOOD! I am shell-shocked because its been so effing long since I read such a kick-ass Bulma/Vegeta story and me? PFFT Hardcore fan! But I hadn't really been addicted to the pairing as much as I use to. BUT your story has made me obsessed...again...:D I
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 24, 2006 07:51 PST
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I feel bad that I have not left any reviews but for some reason or another my comp wouldnt let me, and now the issue is fixed, so I say this whole story has been amazing.
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Reviewed By: Pisq On: March 17, 2006 09:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really hot! The thing I love about your stories is that the characters stay true and that Vegeta isn't a stupid lovey dovey man, who at the minute he sees Bulma instantly falls in love...I run from stories like that! Fortunately I found yours! Oh bless that sacred day!
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