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Title: Chap 24
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy (not logged) On: June 15, 2006 04:00 PDT
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wow, that was so beautiful. The lovemaking scene between Bulma and Vegeta seemed amazingly precious, yet painfully poignant at the same time, it was very moving in a good way, however the twinge of poignancy leads me to dread what will happen at Frieza's victory party. Speaking of Freiza, I loved your interpretation of how he viewed his defeat by Kakarrot, I never really thought of how Frieza took the defeat by Kakarrot, I always imagined how Vegeta felt. The idea of Frieza desperately trying to cling on to his past image of the strongest warrior in the universe; patching together his former greatness, and his anxiety at a failiure to do so is well written. You give an intriguing insight into the psyche of this chilling dictator. I look forward to your next installment.
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Reviewed By: angel of shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 02:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you some sort of famous authour in desguise, who is sating their urge to write Dragon BallZ fics before going back to their usual million pound day job of authouring books? Are you? I really want to know, because that was the best piece of writing I have ever read, When I say that it really means a lot because I have read hundreds of stories and know what I'm talking about. It really is amazing how you can write so well, conveying the mood of the characters as if you were really there. Fantastic, brilliant, amazing, what else is there to say? I can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE update soon!!
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Reviewed By: angel of shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 02:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you some sort of famous authour in desguise, who is sating their urge to write Dragon BallZ fics before going back to their usual million pound day job of authouring books? Are you? I really want to know, because that was the best piece of writing I have ever read, When I say that it really means a lot because I have read hundreds of stories and know what I'm talking about. It really is amazing how you can write so well, conveying the mood of the characters as if you were really there. Fantastic, brilliant, amazing, what else is there to say? I can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE update soon!!
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Title: Nice symbolism!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. Very romantic, passionate, symbolic and angsty for that part with Frieza. Ha he's paranoid. Love it keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: June 13, 2006 12:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was simply gorgeous. I can't even describe what a fantastic chapter that was, it was just amazing and perfect. I am now speechless, and i can't wait until the next chapter comes. ~Aaralyn~
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Title: stunning
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: June 13, 2006 10:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Vegeta's non armor dressware. You did a great job describing the jewlry and an equally killer job describing his feelings conflicted for Bulma. This is a dark yet fascinating portrait, very realistic and cannon of Vegeta.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 06:08 PDT
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I'm worries for the both of them. I love how you give us some insight into their love for each other without saying it. thanks for the update, can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (nsi) On: June 12, 2006 20:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOO-HOO! Thanks for the update. I love the way Bulma is breaking down his walls. He's still gruff with everyone else but he now holds a soft spot for her. I also like that your not making him too sappy though. Please keep up the great work. Your fics are one of the only ones that I read now with DBZ. The rest of the quality ones have seemed to disappear. I know alot of people have moved on from this fandom, but it gives me great joy that your sticking to your fics and not letting them go. I really have so much respect for you as a writer. Please keep the great work coming :)
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Reviewed By: loveroftheflame On: June 12, 2006 18:06 PDT
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I've been reading this from the first chapter and I never reviewed. I'm so sorry. This is an incredible fic. I look foward to every bit of it. I want to say more but I can't find the words. I'm not logged in so I can't leave my proper name.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 10:48 PDT
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Good chapter, if a bit long to me, but as usual you just continue to find ways to make the story jump in unexpected ways. Not the command performance of the ball (that's typical) but the Zarbon bit is good and keeps me guessing. The B/V is wonderful. I love how their relationship exists in a vacuum almost. The intense attraction demands they ignore their other instincts.
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy(not logged) On: May 26, 2006 12:08 PDT
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I am really enjoying this story, it is fantastic. I read it all over again from the beginning to savour the beauty of it even more. Oh my gosh I love your characterisations and the way you portray the interactions between them, you're superb! The twist was unexpected for throughout the story the destination of Namek has been firmly placed in my mind, and to be confronted with the disintegration of Namek was a true shock, but then again this story has been filled with exciting twists and surprises. However this one really topped it. It's even more exciting as I haven't a clue as to what is goin to happen next, it makes me anticipate the next chapter even more. Will Bulma and Vegeta escape Cold's ship, will they be separated, will Vegeta ever face Goku, what will happen to Earth and what exactly is Zarbon up to? he scares me in this story. You know one of the richest things in this story is the progression of Bulma and Vegeta's relationship, I can't even find words to describe it, its so weird so unique when I think of how they were in the beginning and then look at them now, its amazing... I mean what is it? It's.. just beyond words. Even though their relationship sprung from dark circumstances you somehow manage to convey it with a rich purity that... I'm trying to describe it but I can't, forgive me lol
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: Pisq On: May 18, 2006 07:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant as ever, just a few errors, but nothing that couldn't be overlooked. And YAY! A party! That should be interesting!
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Title: !
Reviewed By: Friggin Awesome On: May 17, 2006 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so scared that this story had been left to wither away..but you came back! I'm so happy. Please update more often, this story is so amazingly well-written. I love the plot that it follows too.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 13:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you ever chose to write an original book, you'd make a killer author. Wow is all I can say. Its...Its perfect.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: May 13, 2006 21:37 PDT
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that was fucking amazing... ^_^
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