| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 18, 2006 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I can't beleive you updated so quickly. Nice job with the chapter though. I can honestly say I was not expecting that. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
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Reviewed By: crazed_reviewer On: July 18, 2006 20:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh NOOOOOOOO! WHY BULMA?, WHYYYYYY! I luv this story, by the way. oh dear, can't wait for the trouble that will undoubtedly come from her actions.. ahhhh, the things u do for love.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: July 18, 2006 19:10 PDT
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oh evil... but so awesome... this is going to be very long isn't it... ^_^ good times...
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Reviewed By: aly87 On: July 18, 2006 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damnit!! a plot twist!!! god i hate it when that stuff happens...how is bulma gonna get out of this? how can she possibly convince vegeta that she was lying!! :( ahhh!!! lol anyway cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Miss. Anonymous On: July 16, 2006 22:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God no! I can't take it, I just can't. I never believed a few days ago I would care about Bulma this much. Oh can't take it, I just Can't! Damnit, why do you have to be such a talented writer. You got me hooked to Vegeta and Bloomers romance.
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Title: Update Update Update
Reviewed By: whit On: July 11, 2006 09:00 PDT
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I just read this story and i have to say that it was so good. Uh oh.. I thik Bulma is in trouble. And whats going to happen to Vegeta? Anyways Bulma totally owns Zarbon. HeHe. I hope you decide to update very soon.
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods no! How did I know that was going to happen! Damn its so unfair! But Bulma totally owned! YES!
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Title: oh....problem!
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: July 10, 2006 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god.. she is so screwed unless she can think of a way to take him down because i have a feeling that Zarbon can be very creative if he's insulted properly. Think bulma!! Please update soon; the anxiety is killing me! ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 10, 2006 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooo! I hate cliffies! Anywho, great chapter. I hope Bulma will be alright though...
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Reviewed By: EnvyxMyxPain On: July 10, 2006 09:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I enjoyed this verry much, I hope you plan to update soon because it's a good storie, I've been following it sense the begining so please update.
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Reviewed By: loveroftheflame On: July 10, 2006 04:50 PDT
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This is so good! I am dying to see what happens next!!! Poor Vegeta. And Bulma, I think she may have bitten off more than she can chew...
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Reviewed By: being drifted On: July 03, 2006 06:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so hot, i can't handle it
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Reviewed By: my envious self On: June 29, 2006 14:03 PDT
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i do not really know what to say about this other than this: it is probably one of the best fanfics i have ever read (and no i do NOT give a compliment easily since im writing myself and ive got a very envious dark and evil spirit living inside my keyboard) and it is the fic that actually got me interested in dragonball fanfics (i cant stand the anime but found your fic by accident and your characterization fascinated me. so even though im still not into the manga or anime i actually started reading a bit of BV fiction cause their relationship is so interesting) i only found it a couple of days ago and quite basically read it in one night (work was pretty tough the next morning and i blame it all on YOU!) its only a bit sad that you seem to update it rather sporadically but hey i guess true genius is worth waiting for it ;-) i know that i WILL be waiting!
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Reviewed By: tsuyamono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 22:26 PDT
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I've been reading this fic since you first started writing it, and I don't believe I have ever reviewed. I love your writing style and I think it has improved greatly since Against all Odds, which incidently is one of my very favorite B/V stories. You've gotten very close to mastering the art of similies and metaphors; in fact, this sets your work apart from that of other DBZ fanfic authors in that you manage to vividly render events and emotions. Additional kudos on plot and continuity. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another chapter. I'm glad to get more insight into your story. It's so well written and passionate. I can't wait 'til the next chapter.
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