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Reviewed By: Goodness_Gracious On: August 14, 2006 18:43 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You are amazing, and so very talented to write a story like this. IT IS AMAZING. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 17:32 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: No, I can't take it! It's all far too depressing. Poor tailless Vegeta, will he ever be able to forgive her? *Runs away sobbing*
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 16:17 PDT Comment/Review: DAMN!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 13:09 PDT Comment/Review: *sigh* I'm should upset over the direction of this plotline (poor Vegeta) but I know that it's required to not make the story bland and worthy of eyerolls, not to mention uncliched. Loving it, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: thesilentone On: August 14, 2006 08:38 PDT Comment/Review: ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I had my fists clenched from the instant Freiza started talking about his tail..... I love you Tempest......
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Reviewed By: aly1 On: August 13, 2006 21:50 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: are you kidding me? are you freaking kidding me? oh my god...what the hell has happened to this story! XD *i love it!!!* but oh my god! are you kidding me??!?!?! damn...poor poor POOR vegeta! :(
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 19:31 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Bulma kicks so much ass. She is playing the cold card nicely. I like her this way. Vegeta is being far too angsty considering their situations and past conversations. Edge of your seat chapters though.
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Reviewed By: NSB On: August 13, 2006 18:02 PDT Comment/Review: OH MY DAMN !!! SHE CUT IT@!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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Title: AAAAAHHHHH Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: August 13, 2006 17:58 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Im in shock! I can't believe she cut off his tail..... i dont even know how to react......thats horrible. omg my poor Vegeta baby. oh plzzzzzz they have to get back together. oh please let her tell him that she was kidding the whole time. ~Aaralyn~
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Title: O.oo? Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: August 13, 2006 17:43 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg. Im gonna cry. this is horrible!!!! they're not together!!!!! this is so not okay. i luv Vegeta and Bulma; if he kills her, i will cry forever!!! please put them back together!!! ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 04:00 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh no, not his tail, how could you... please update soon, im on tenderhooks here..
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: August 12, 2006 18:40 PDT Comment/Review: pardon my french buy oh my fucking gosh that was by far one of the best chapters I've read from you... I absolutely loved it... **don't worry I'm taking good care of Vin while your dealing with Veg ^_~**
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Reviewed By: Dark_Saiyan On: July 29, 2006 20:21 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh please tell me you're going to update soon... this is so much a beautiful story and so much well written... I can't wait for the next chapter !
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Reviewed By: Miss. Anonymous On: July 20, 2006 22:53 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I did not see that one coming, I was just as in much shock as Vegeta. But in the end Bulma was holding the winning hand. *snaps fingers* You go girl!
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON ! ASAP! Reviewed By: UPDATE SOON! On: July 19, 2006 21:19 PDT Comment/Review: omg! This was a good chapter! Oh no Vegeta dont believe wat Zarbon says. Bulma is only trying to save you! I hope he reconsiders his decision about Bulma and sees through Zarbons lies. Anyways awesome chapter and I cant wait till the next one comes out!
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