| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: loveroftheflame On: September 07, 2006 08:38 PDT
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Once again you amaze me with your talent. This chapter is the absolute best one yet! So full of anguish and emotion... I am waiting with baited breath for the next chapter... Bravo!
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Title: Chapter 28
Reviewed By: jamielove00 On: September 06, 2006 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god! I never review unless this is a truly amazing story. And this one is. I'm so excited that you wrote a new chapter! The suspense in this one is killing me! The cliffhanger is terrible lol. I want to know! I hope you post the next chapter soon. I love your style and also the fact that there are hardly any spelling errors. You're a great author! Keep up the good work, love.
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Title: Chapter 28 Condemn my Soul
Reviewed By: venuslegacy not logged On: September 06, 2006 14:57 PDT
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Tempest this chapter is mind blowing, my nerves felt like they were pulled tight in frozen anticipation for what was going to happen next as i read this chapter. It's unbelievable, you are such an amazing writer. I felt an urge to cry, scream andclutch my chest at the moment when Bulma kissed Zarbon, the death of an angel that would kill for her demon Prince. That was so tragically beautiful, what also made this poignant was Vegeta's reaction when he realised what Bulma had done, and the way you described Bulma's metamorphosis into an outwards manifestation of Death, the paleness, the black rings under her eyes, helped highlight the effect of her dying soul.
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Title: Yess!
Reviewed By: DarkSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 14:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yesssssss!!! A new chapter! So now we know what Bulma was planning all along... God this chapter was good lol You really made my day when I have seen that you added a new chapter! Yess I love it, can't wait to see what happens next..
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 04:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another excellent chapter, you just get better and better, cant wait for next installment...
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Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 18:34 PDT
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Yes i'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy. damn that was an awesome chapter. Ye si would kill for vegeta in a heart beat!!!!!! Damn Girl you out did yourself, and i know theres more to come.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: September 04, 2006 17:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo Hoo! An update. You rock girl. I had a funny feeling he was gonna "punish her" instead of a quick death. Anywho, great chapter...can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 16:03 PDT
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Another Excellent Chapter... I can't wait to see what happens when they are locked in a ship again... ^_^
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Title: Now it makes sense!
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: September 04, 2006 10:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truely stunning. After the last roller coaster ride I finally see her plans come to fruition. Now it all makes sense what was building up to. I'm glad that I kept on reading. Bravo. Sheer Brilliance :D
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Title: That was intense
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 09:57 PDT
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Wow. That was an awesome chapter. The emotion was amazing. Description twice as good. It's all very vivid. Keep writing
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Reviewed By: claire_ff On: September 04, 2006 03:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again!I was soooo happy to find another chapter this morning!!The plot is awesome, it's getting better and better!At least Bulma had a chance to explain herself...I wasn't expecting her to kill Zarbon,and with salt!Amazing!And Vegeta's reaction was better than what I thought!You exceeded my expectations (again), really really well done!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 01:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 26 and 27 were heartstoppers! I couldnt believe the story took a turn like that! It feels like they are never going to be like they use to be.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: August 18, 2006 11:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That makes me want to CRY. Please update as soon as possible, I AM DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 15:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noooo! i've been reading this fic for 2 evenings and i am beyond speechless. why? why did bulma do it? i know there's a reason, but i hurt for vegeta too much to see reason right now. arrggggh. i have to see the next chap soon or i'll have enough 'what if' and 'now what' questions to fill up the rest of my life! i am in love with this story. beautiful and intense! i need more... please.
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Reviewed By: loveroftheflame On: August 16, 2006 07:42 PDT
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Oh my gosh, she is really gonna do it!!! W,ll she realy has no choice, but he may never forgive her for this... *sniff* Brilliant update, simply brilliant!
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