| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: UPDATE PLEASE On: October 02, 2006 21:51 PDT
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OMG! That was a great chapter! I hope that Bulma and Vegeta get past their differences. And I cant wait to see what Vegeta has in mind for punishment. HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: snowbird7939 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 16:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
staright up twn that was awesome, I loved it, this is my favorite fanfiction of all time and I was completely ecstatic when I saw that you updated, I cant believe you left off there, I am going to be crazy waiting for the next part to see what happens. Seriously though are youlike a professional writer? This stuff is really really good and if not you should seriously consider turning this work in as a spin off, they have a bunch of spin offs for DBZ book-wise. But whatever please post more soon, and I mean real soon.!!!!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: October 02, 2006 13:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
that was good...
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Reviewed By: Geta's Angel On: October 02, 2006 09:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I can't wait to see what's next for the couple. Keep up the good work girl.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: October 02, 2006 09:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooo!! Why'd you stop there!!! *pouts* Oh well, I hope you give us details in the next chapter what happened. Glad to see that your writing again. I'm not into DBZ fanfiction like I use to be (I kinda moved on to Inuyasha now), but your fics...and a few others; I come back for. I still enjoy your stories very much. Please keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next one to come out :)
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 09:11 PDT
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Nice, very dark, but realistic.
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 06:48 PDT
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what can I say....MORE MORE MORE....gods I'm loving this fanfic!! Needing this fanfic...ever heard of drugs?? Gods...this fanfic is a TRUE drug and man! Am I addicted!! Ur fantastic...please please go on and I'll never stop loving you!!! Lovies!! EV
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 05:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, now thats a punishment i wouldn't mind, excellent chapter, please update soon...
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Title: Evil Women!!!
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 01:57 PDT
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ARG!!!!!! I wake up hope, wishing, wanting a LEMON, but that was the best damn chapter!!!!! Thank you!
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Title: Aaah! Update Please!
Reviewed By: Amarie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 21:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. please update a couple more chapters, i'm dying here! lol *begs*
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Title: *tear tear*
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 21:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an emotional rollercoaster!! i love this story sooo much. please don't kill her Vegeta! I love them as a couple, and i will cry if one of them dies. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: UPDATE PLEASE On: September 15, 2006 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! That was a awesome chapter and I cant wait to see what happens next. I wonder what Vegeta will do for Bulmas punishment. Will he listen to her, find his tail and forgive her or will he punish her physically and mentally. Oh God... to much suspense. TERRIFIC JOB! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT BETWEEN VEGETA AND BULMA! PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 23:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter.
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Title: that was amazing!!!
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly LOVE this fic please please please update soon!!! thanks! bye
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Reviewed By: Pisq On: September 07, 2006 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Die evil cliffhanger from hell!!!! Magnificent, amazing, eyeball bulging piece of work! I loved it! again and again and again! Damn!
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