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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 11:03 PST
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I hope you didn't think I had abandoned this fic. Life has been difficult lately, and reading has gone to the bottom of my list, but I finally found some time to catch up. 'ness, that's beautiful stuff. I admit to being somewhat disappointed by the cliche of having Bulma (or any heroine) have to feign hatred to save her love, but as usual, you always manage to make the "cliche" your own, adding your own wonderful words and plot twists. You'd think I'd have learned by now that you are better than any cliche. You are really so talented, and it pisses me off when people talke about the "old days of the great writers" because as far as I'm concerned, there's still great B/V fiction being written and you're doing it. And now for the quick spork: Update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 00:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot as ever
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Reviewed By: snowbird7939 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agaibn as you said it was short but interesting, you know we are so looking forward to more. I commend you for being so determined to write more on this story, it's excellent, and I always get so excited when I see that you have posted more up. Please write more soon, looking forward to more of this wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: October 14, 2006 06:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh! That was so mean! But Bulma should've known better than to mess with a man's pride...Especially when said man is Vegeta. I will forgive you for the lack of smut, because I know how shitty our lives can be when we're working. But I warn you...next time...I will come to collect!
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Title: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
Reviewed By: UPDATE SOON! On: October 13, 2006 13:23 PDT
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That was a very good chapter. I hope that Vegeata will forgive Bulma someday. For some reason I have the feeling that Bulma is going to leave Vegeta when he doesnt realize it OR she is going to be badly injured to the point of death that Vegeta will leave her or for give her. But then again who knows? Great chapter and I hope that you update SOON!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: zonkiethegreat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 06:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been working on my B/V Fanfic for as long as you have been writing this fic! I have been reading it since the very beginning, loved the beginning, but must admit once they were on Frieza's ship and all i got a little bored! I was like oh no...now a whole battle with vegeta and frieza that will last 10 chapters...but then you twisted it all up and made it AWESOME. Finally someone made Bulma more then a damsel in distress. And checked into her psyche! I LOVE IT! You have quite the imagination! Where do you come up come up with this stuff!??
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: October 12, 2006 21:20 PDT
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nice chapter... the development of their relationship at this point is amazing
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: October 10, 2006 20:00 PDT
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Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Evil CLiffy On: October 09, 2006 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! That chapter was off the hook yo!
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Title: UPDATE UPDATE!
Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! On: October 07, 2006 09:35 PDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON! You left us at a cliffhanger! Ahhh! Anyways I hope you update ASAP. I really want to see what happens next. Till later!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: October 04, 2006 18:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now it all culmonates. You've put a window in Bulma and Vegeta's souls and I see clearly what the whole set up was for. Excellent work. Bulma finally sees what Vegeta has gone through having faced it. And the way in which he 'snapped her out' of her funk was 100 percent Vegeta. Always terrific to read. Masterpiece.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: October 04, 2006 10:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap!!!!!! That was so totally hot!!! Deep, raw, angry..wow!! You're the best! Keep on going! I ought to try that with my boyfriend!
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Title: chap 29
Reviewed By: venus legacy( not logged) On: October 03, 2006 12:44 PDT
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Your showing me the different tones of love, Vegeta's dark way of loving, how closely it veers on the edge of hate. Yet it is always intense, always extreme. I wonder if Vegeta will really kill Bulma in the end, before I said to my self he won't for the amount of times he saved her. But now I am not so sure, the nature and circumstances of their relationship seems to rule out a happy ending. It started dark and deadly will it end this way too? Wow, this story is good, I always look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: Nice Chapter On: October 03, 2006 08:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really out did yourself this time. Very nice
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 06:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, no fair. Bulma has more backbone than this. Even if she loves the guy she should be very offended of his treatment. I hope Vegeta will lose her (temporarily of course) so he'll be forced to acknowledge his feelings the stubborn bastard. Beautiful chapter as always. You're the Queen of DBZ.
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