| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: thistiredgirl On: December 07, 2006 16:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say thank you for writing more of this story! I squealed like a little girl when I saw you had updated. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: future author On: December 06, 2006 08:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. Now that they are back on earth I wonder what's going to happen. I wonder how Vegeta will act around Mr. & Mrs.Briefs considering both their personalities. I can't wait to read what happens next. So update soon and keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: Laurenh On: December 05, 2006 17:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I'm so glad you updated! And I love that you added in the Badman T-shirt!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: December 05, 2006 13:30 PST
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AN UPDATE!!!!! Hahahahaha The badman shirt! I always thought that there was no way in hell Vegeta would wear a pink shirt that said badman, but hey...Maybe he didn't know what it meant in the show as well! Highly original again! Thanks for updating and Merry Christmassssss!!!!
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy On: December 05, 2006 08:25 PST
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Well that was a surprise, for me anyway I didn't expect them to return to Earth, I wonder what Vegeta plans on doing it should be interesting to see how their relationship alters (or maybe it won't alter) since they are in a different environment as so far they have always had to interact with each other amidst the backdrop of turmoil and instability. lol way to go Bulma with writing Badman on his shirt ha ha ha
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Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 22:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Santa must have heard my prayers...All I wanted for Christmas was a new chapter of Lab Monkey!!! Loved the non-spoken interaction between Bulma and Vegeta, and can't wait to see how he'll punish her for the "Badman" shirt. I hope life doesn't keep you too busy to enjoy the holidays. Have a Merry Christmas. DW
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Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: December 04, 2006 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA! Of all the things she could have written on his shirt. This is going to be endlessly entertaining! UPDATESSSSSSS!!!!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: December 04, 2006 20:42 PST
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cute
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: December 04, 2006 18:35 PST
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Awesome, can't wait for more.
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 17:22 PST
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Well amazing they finally made it back, now plies the question my romantic side always wants to know.....will he forgive her? Will they have their own twisted happily ever after? I can't wait to find out
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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: December 04, 2006 17:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was so excited to see that you updated! I like this chapter, a very nice tie in to the 'current' universe in regards to DBZ. I wonder if that 'glow' is more than just love Bulma is displaying-- hint hint. I suppose Trunks is soon on the way! I love this story!!! -kinoko
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! On: December 04, 2006 14:53 PST
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Oh wow! That was a great chapter. I really thank you for updating. I thought you gave up this story. Anyways I hope that Vegeta starts socializing with Bulma again. You know having a conversation. Incredible chapter and cant wait for the next one! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 14:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yippee you updated, just love this story, keep up the good work
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Title: so good!
Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 19:44 PST
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i love your story! i love the romance (kind of, i guess, lol) and i love the andst, everything is blended really well together. you have me really pulling for them. you writing is also very good. refreshing when you read so many bad fanfics. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 15:03 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Dear god! This story evokes so many emotions from the reader that it is almost as if one can actually FEEL what the character's are experiencing. Amazing. You have much talent and you can bet that I will definately be around for the next installment of this story. Your writing is simply awe inspireing, very good work! I'm absolutely in love with this story :) -kinoko
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