| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: MF(maccam) On: September 10, 2005 08:16 CDT
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I'm glad your writing again. i've missed this story. wow Trunks is going to NYC my hometown. he'll do fine there. I just hope the same for his parents, whats going to happen with Bra and her memory? and vegeta will he finally talk to Bra? can't wait to read more and your other story..please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 02:19 CDT
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Argh! Don't stop there! Write more! I really love this story. Like I haven'y said that like 500 times before. Keep it up, and write more, as quickly as you can. You have many fans..! :P Oh, and btw, you seriously can't make Nesa and Trunks end up together... It just doesn't fit... She's been too big of a bitch, and I mean, she has a child with another man.. Maybe Trunks will meet someone new in America?
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 09, 2005 22:58 CDT
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finally trunks got the divorce papers signed. these 2 chapters i guess delt with trunks growing up and accepting what he did, as well as vegeta and bulmas relationship yet again going through another bump on the road. Hope to see more of bra in the upcoming chapters.... update sooner!!!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 04:54 CDT
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Damn i'm pissed cause we don't get updates no more and i missed two chapters, i was confuse at first with them, about the car accident it's like something is missing. I hope Bra gets her memory back and Trunks come home, and i hope that there will be a why for Vegeta to get that device out of his head..update soon. ^_^
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Title: luve it!
Reviewed By: free-sprit, to lazy to log in. On: August 23, 2005 12:30 CDT
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OMG! I just looove this story! It's my absolut favorite story. But everytime a problem is solved, there is a new one! And wow, we did not see that coming. That Bra thingy. I kinda figured out that is was a chip, that metalpiece in his head. Buut anyway, please just update!!!!! I love it keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Dark ki not login in On: August 23, 2005 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i guess there was something to thatg chip after all.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: August 23, 2005 00:35 CDT
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hope vegeta and bra will make up in the next chapter, i love their relationship. finally we know what that metal piece in his head is and it gets even more interesting. please update sooner!
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Title: Wonderful, pls update
Reviewed By: JE On: August 14, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i didnt see that one coming thats for sure. i wanna know where you're taking this, so update ASAP!!! lol PS: about time Bulma kicked that sorry biatch's ass. (ok so im talking about the last chapter, haha. i read both chapters today)
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Reviewed By: MajinRyoko On: August 13, 2005 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this fic, I do. I stayed up till like 4:30 in the morning to read it >.< I certainly hope theirs more :D
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 11:16 CDT
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Oh, yeah! Loved the altercation with Epeon but especially Vegeta's reaction to Bulma kicking *ss. LOL! On to next chapter... what a shocker!! Was not expecting that at all! What else can happen to the poor little family? Interested to see where this is going. :)
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Reviewed By: Dark ki(not longin in because too lazy On: August 03, 2005 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are more evil to vegeta than i am. (i didn't know that what possiable.) poor bra-waly.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: August 03, 2005 02:06 CDT
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sooo not expecting that!!! vegeta is taking this harder than i would have thought, his little princess is now gone from him, how much more drama will this family go through? i actually expected vegeta to do more damage to trunks than just throwing to a wall, but i guess that was enough for him at that time. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: woah
Reviewed By: Frozenrabbit On: August 02, 2005 07:15 CDT
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Real gud :P. Youi going to wind it up soon? its huuuuuge. Really awesome tho
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Reviewed By: C-Jay Johnson On: August 01, 2005 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, I just wannna say how good I think your fanfic is and could you PPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE update sometime before thursday cause I'm going on vacation and I can't get hold of the internet wile I'm on vacation. So could you please update before then... pretty please!
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Reviewed By: megan1202 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have spent the past two days reading this fic nonstop and it's by far the best I've ever read. I've gotten so drawn into it, I'm almost going through withdrawls now that there are no more chapters to read through. I honestly cannot wait for you to update. Do you have a schedule? Are you planning to update soon? I was so taken with the fic I almost forgot it has to come to an end. :) Anyway, amazing story! Really really amazing!
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