| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: April 10, 2005 14:18 CDT
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trunks is messed up. wonder how hes going to deal with it especially that hes still only 17. vegeta's problems have arised again and its good to see that, but hopefully you clear up things between nessa and trunks (to stay together or to not stay together). update soon!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 11:39 CDT
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It's good to read your work and know that your back on track. I really feel bad for trunk and for nesa. What's going on with Vegeta and why can't he get a hold of his emotions...please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! all your chapters are great.. I can't wait to see how ever thing works out!!! and please a happy ending for all.
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Reviewed By: J On: April 03, 2005 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was awesome keep it up. although u misspelled some words and u didnt elaborate some parts and sort of just rushed things up like how Trunks got back with Nesa and how Vegeta did with the shrinks and how Bulma and Vegeta made up, things like those. try not to rush the story but all in all it was very entertaining and a good story. so i gotta say UPGRADE!
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Reviewed By: the batman On: April 03, 2005 18:11 CDT
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i took 2 weeks for that? lol in just kidding keep em coming
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Title: NESSA YOU BITCH!!!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, another wonderful chapter! A little short, but no matter, my eyes gobbled it up anyway. Man, I feel sorry for poor Trunks - to be played twice and in such a way. I hope he drops that evil wench like a hot rock and find him someone else to love. Update soon! ~Kenya
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Reviewed By: Yeah! On: April 03, 2005 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i fell in love with this story from the very beginning. theres so much going on, and all the drama..wow. i just dont know how to describe this fic. its frickin ..pssh i dont even know what word to use. all i have to say is that you are an excellent author. your are...man...just continue writing ok? YOU ROCk ...youre the best. i rest my case.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: April 02, 2005 20:40 CST
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the truth is finally out! what a bitch using the family and trunks like that. i hope vegeta teaches her a lesson or even better trunks! update soon!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:24 CST
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I'm going to offer constructive criticism... I like the story and found it to be quite good... I'm a little concerned with your habit of getting off track with your stories... you try to make your stories to complicated and it causes your stories to be harder to follow... you are very talented but you are trying to do to much too soon... try to keep it simple and develop your skill that way... bc you are losing the flow of your stories by having too much going on around the central story and losing what's happening to your main characters in the process... you are very talented and have a lot of potential but take a step back and try to simplify things that way your writing can flourish more... it is a good story and you have a lot of potential
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 19:06 CST
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I'm shocked, floored and upset. wow i didn't see that coming at all. Sad very sad for Trunks and nesa..It's a great chapter really and i love Vegeta in this..i really can't wait for an update...maria
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Reviewed By: stryderf On: April 02, 2005 12:49 CST
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this fic rocks update soon
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Reviewed By: sekzijen On: March 30, 2005 21:53 CST
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i really enjoy your story. i like the story line you've come up with and i hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Yuemi On: March 30, 2005 02:41 CST
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Nesa....that bitch! i can't believe it! i didn't really like her when she was first introduced, now the baby incident adds to the hatred....and trunks, hope he shapes up and stand up to nesa.... i thought the whole vege/bulma reunited part was a bit scatched...i thought bulma should b more sorry.....but all in all...MORE!!! keep the chapts rollin!
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Reviewed By: sryderf0 On: March 25, 2005 00:44 CST
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my eyes are bleeding from reading this long ass story. it rocks keep the chapters coming.
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Title: well that sux
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 24, 2005 08:38 CST
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um, remind how there was love in nesa's beedy little eyes?!?!?!?!??!!??!!?!?!?!?
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