| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 29, 2004 00:20 CDT
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vegeta's life is so horrible. who wouldn't be a littel parnoid and closed with that kind of past. vegeta's parents did seem to love eachother, another one of those love stuggles that ends in death. he finally told bulma a bit of his past and how he cared for his mother. maybe soon he can tell her everything. heres hoping. update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 29, 2004 00:17 CDT
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hehehe vegeta is ticklish! who would of thought that would occur. bra is still cute as ever and vegeta is still stubborn, but we know he;ll open up soon for bulma.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 29, 2004 00:15 CDT
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so thats why vegeta doesn't want anymore kids. awww.. just worrying about bulma. no way should bra and goten get together that is just wrong i totally agree with bulma. chi chi doesn't know what she's talking about. thanks for the update with 3 chapters!
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Reviewed By: neko-ch@n On: September 28, 2004 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Vegeta he had a horrible life,seeing his father killing his mother...it's just terrible. I think it would be wonderful for Bulma to get pregnant with another child.Raising a child wanted from both parents would help this couple to grow a lot.think about a mini-Vegeta:that would be just tooo cute...a little vegeta-chan free to grow happy and loved!!!And thanks to the dragonball Buma's healt would be safe.
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 27, 2004 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok my poor vegeta.i can only imagine how that must of felt to see your mother die at the hands of your father how terrible for him...and i know that bulma is trying to help him why can't he just let her.and what about her lump and the baby that she wants are this going to be answered soon...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 22, 2004 18:03 CDT
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aww.. bra is cute again in this story! too bad vegeta still can't talk about is mother. the way the doctor threatens vegeta in the room seems to be very stupid because vegeta can easily kill hime when the doctor leaves the room. update soon!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 22, 2004 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a good chapter..to see them interact with each other is a nice change...please keep it coming..maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 13, 2004 21:31 CDT
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aww.. poor vegeta, stupid yamcha look what he did got bulma and vegeta into a argument. where did the baby idea came from, does it have to do with the fact bulma is scared of that "lump" in her breast. are you gonna adress that soon and will vegeta find out what a lump means? update soon!!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 13, 2004 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm lmao heer....i loved this chapter..omg this was great.do you hear me GREAT...:).i can't stop laughing...i want more.it was a good change from what we keep reading...can't wait for more...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 08, 2004 18:35 CDT
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yow sah... that was some outfit bulma had and no wonder why vegeta bought it! aww... bra is soooo cute in those chapters and hopefully vegeta will open up more soon at his sessions. update soon!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 07, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow it's nice to know that your still around.i hope that you and your family are ok.and that there is no more hurricanes in your future..as for the story i still love it.the way he feel for her not saying it but showing it. sometimes words are not enough., but actions are. i always wondered why did they wish for there wives to live as long as they did.if they loved them so much..as the question never the answer...please stay dry...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: August 31, 2004 02:32 CDT
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these were excellent chapters. poor bra surprising vegeta liek that and getting hurt and poor vegeta for hurting bra. update soon please!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 30, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow these chapters was great.i'm glad that you didn't delate them.there wasa nothing wrong with them.your just going into detail with your syory so please keep up with it ok...i can't wait to read more of it,,what does vegeta have in store for bulma...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: August 30, 2004 03:30 CDT
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sorry that i didn't review the other chapters but one. i really enjoy this fic, its very descriptive and gets into vegeta's mind and with the twist of bulma maybe having breast cancer is very intense. keep going cause there are still a lot of unanswered questions to us readers!
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Reviewed By: ardanxela On: August 28, 2004 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great, love the phycological parts. update soon, Please!
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