| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark ki A.K.A. Lee On: May 17, 2005 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't stand this! Please! Stop Vegeta's pain! heal him soon! it's making me cry! . . . . well, not really. but, still. is it the circle piece of metal. some kind of mental mapaultion from some outside force? hm? or is it a red hairing? (false clue.) only you know . . .or will know. I like the story write itself. i never know whats happens until o start writing the story. but, that's me. well, i'll leave it at that.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: May 17, 2005 23:06 CDT
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your back! i liked the chapter especially with the dispute between bulma and vegeta. eh.. the whoel nesa thing is getting a bit tire-some since its a BV fic. hopefully we'll see what that metal thing in vegeta's head is. update soon, missed this story so much!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: May 17, 2005 21:15 CDT
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ouch. those were some powerful words bulma!
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Reviewed By: Fergie On: May 09, 2005 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD THIS FANFIC IS AMAZING! i love it i love it i love it. You have to update soon, not just for my sake but for everyone else's too. i mean i've never read anything like this...ever! you've taken a simple story line and completely transformed it. i can't wait to read the next chapter, so don't leave me hangin to long! well gotta go The paul o'grady show is about to start!
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Title: oi
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 03:39 CDT
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Okay, I just have ine more thing to say, thta metal thingy in Vegeta's head... Is it a chip..?? Come on!! Tell me! I'm going crazy here!!! It's probably a chip, And and, freeza wasthe one who out it there, and and now soemthing is happening with that chip, and and..* Keeps on babbleling* .... I love this story!! Get it done..! No, don't get it done! That would be... like sad. hehe.. I'm crazy, I seriusly need to get a life. Naaah, what am I supposed to use a life for..? hehe... get the next chapter up! please!!! *Puppy eyes*
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Title: oi
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 10:34 CDT
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This must be like the longest fic I've ever read. And I love every minute if it..! I simply love this fic! Keep it up, write 400 chapters. hehe.. well, mayby noy 400, but 350 then. :p
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 18:47 CDT
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I just found this story and it is excellent!! I really enjoy your writing style. I've read all the way through in a couple of days. I wish I would have stopped to write a couple of reviews so I could remember to tell you some specific parts that were especially good. But I generally print off the chapters to read at night and then my 2yo keeps me hopping all day long :) Anyway.... it is a great story and I am looking forward to reading more. Now that I'm caught up I will leave more reviews. Oh, just to comment on these last couple of chapters -- I was SO p*ssed when we found out that Nesa's child isn't Trunks'. I thought exactly what you had Bulma say. B*tch! It was a good twist, I wasn't expecting it. Oh, and yes I am waiting patiently for Epeon to get hers. She's another one. The whole thing with the MRI was amusing; most people don't like those things and I totally believe that if anyone had the power that Vegeta has not to mention claustrophobia, they would have blasted the thing to high heavens too. Ha ha.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: April 17, 2005 22:20 CDT
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that was a good chapter... its nice to see you get back to where you started again... It is a good story but it is also a very involved story... good job with that chapter
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: April 17, 2005 18:41 CDT
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ooo... thats interesting, the circle metal thing in his brain. hopefully thats what is triguring those flashes. hope trunks leaves nesa grr... and vegeta gets better. update soon!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: April 17, 2005 18:31 CDT
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why do i feel like i am watchin X-files, this chappy ended with a scary high pitched noise, ans the theme music to x-files, seriously it was in my head.
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Title: Finding peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 16:27 CDT
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you keep Surprising me with every chapter. sad to read them suffer but i know that they hopefully will come out of it soon...please update soon ...maria
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Title: Geeze, from Bad to Worse for our favorite Tough Guy...
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, Vegeta can never catch a break huh? From the moment I read up on that piece of metal in his head, I started thinking "there is no way he'd opt for surgery." Glad to see I have some insight. Bulma will have to talk herself blue in the face to get him unconscious - at the mercy of drugs and human doctors he don't trust, much less can stand, and on an operating table to remove that metal. I can't wait to see how you accomplish that one. As far as Trunks and Nessa…well I hope it's over. There's too much to forgive. Well, I think there's too much. Maybe a heart like Trunks can forgive it all, but I'm doubtful. I guess we'll just have to wait and see this thing out. And last, but not least my little comment: You know - you continue to make my day. Not only are each chapter better and more interesting then the other, you also tend to update with gratifying quickness and I thank you. ~Kenya
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Reviewed By: Dark KI A.K.A. Lee On: April 12, 2005 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. once i started reading i couldn't stop. I started at three o'clock in the moring. i fell asleep at eight. got up at 3:30 and now it's 10:30. i finally got through all of it. I love the way you write. you should have more reviews than what you have but, no this site people don't seem to take the time to write one. that's the reason why to like writing on FF.net people seem to write them more. Oh. well people are reviewing and it not how many you get but, the value they hold. keep on writing how and how much you wish.
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Reviewed By: K On: April 11, 2005 20:14 CDT
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well what the eff just happened to Vegeta? well i hope you explain it in the next chapter. I can understand why Trunks is acting like that. I mean, i'm sure hes still hurting and in denial cuz of that biatch nesa screwed him up but oh well i dont know if theyre gonna get back together but i hope nesa does a lot of begging cuz that ho is just ugh! whatever just pls update soon.
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Reviewed By: aredhel On: April 11, 2005 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love this story!! you are a very good writer, i like the way you describe bulma and vegeta's relation ship and their life! keep writing , coz i can't wait the next chapter! I'm French and i read a lot of english fanfictions and this one is surely one of the best i read, i don't know when you are goind to finish it but if you could let it last a 'little' bit more that will be cool!!! (lol) KEEP WRITING!!! ;)
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