| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: July 07, 2005 20:22 CDT
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bra sooooo cute... i wish there was more of her in this story *pouts* but its a vegeta story. liked how you ended the chapter with a cliff hanger making us think of who it is. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: July 07, 2005 19:53 CDT
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Evil, what a cliff-hanger. Who the hell is getting off the elevator?
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 19:40 CDT
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Please delate the first two that i wrote ok Love you story and can't wait to find out who's at the elevator!!!!!
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Title: maccam
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 19:34 CDT
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UUUUURRRRGGGGG..... cliffhangers pulls hair..you like to do that don't you >.
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Title: maccam
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 19:33 CDT
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UUUUURRRRGGGGG..... cliffhangers pulls hair..you like to do that don't you >.
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Reviewed By: Trisha_ On: July 07, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!! im gonna die!!!!!! damn i hate cliffhangers! hmm but anyway i'm glad bulma's not gonna die or anything. i seriously thought she had the cancer back. being depressed isn't a good thing either but atleast she'll be okay...or will she? i don't know. its up to you! lol. but that was an enjoyable chapter. it was really good.
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Reviewed By: Mallie 3 (not logged in) On: July 07, 2005 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I can't wait to see what happens next! I am so excited...aww I feel bad for Bulma!! I hope everything goes alright with it!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: July 01, 2005 02:05 CDT
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hey its has taken me sooo long to read this but i loved every minit..wow 56 chaps..well now that i'm up to date i can't wait for the next chap..the story so far is really great..i just love Rad. he was great..^__^..Update Soon PLZ!!
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Title: omg..
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 06:16 CDT
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omg.... is it the cancer? nonononono...! Can you make one chapter without a new problem? yeh, you probably could, but that would be boring... so don't. or at least wait for teh last hapter, and make it a happy endning, would yu just please make it a happy endning, otherwise this story will haunt me forever!
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Title: whaaaaat is it!!!!??!!
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 06:13 CDT
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whaaaaaatttt??!! tell me what has happen! I mean, when I don't know it, I get the craziest ideas! She's been raped! She's pregnant again! Bra has been taken by aliens and taken to a cold and dark planet! Come oooone! please please please, neeeext chapter.. *cries*
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 04:42 CDT
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well i did write more but i'm not sure what happened. Love the story and the way you write...please update soon ok...
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 04:40 CDT
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Pain thats all they have is pain. *cries* what's wrong with bulma o please don't let it be her cancer >.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: June 30, 2005 03:08 CDT
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is this family gonna get away from pain and anxiety. it seems when one problem is resolved another one pops right up, and that makes great reading. UPDATE SOON!!
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: Dark ki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what's with Bulma. she missed him sure but, i don't t hink that's it. i sooo love this story.
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Title: Intriguing
Reviewed By: Trisha_ On: June 29, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome chapter. I wonder what is up with Bulma..is the cancer back? Did she cheat on him or something? Ill be waiting for an update! Later.
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