| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 23, 2004 21:08 CST
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yes vegeta will look sexy with an eye patch but still better with both. very deep chapter with the interaction between vegeta and trunks. update soon.
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 23, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know that we all have our demons to deal with just like vegeta but he has a valid point about why he feels this way.he killed alot of people and now he's living on earth and doing what he destroyed...but there has to be a way to put all his demons to rest without drugs..thats just me i guess.and i wish tha the had a better realationship with his son..maybe someday he will..i'm glad for bulma we woman nkow what to stay at the right time don't we...anyway great chapter update soon...maria
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Title: Finding Peace up to chapter 5 and loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad i followed the suggestion from Tempestt's forum to read this fic because it is brilliant. The way you portray how Vegetas past is still effecting him allows me to be transported with vegeta to his flashbacks experiencing the pain and the hurt with him. I felt like i'd been hit with a sledge hammer after vegetas first flashback where he was taken back to his first rape victim, the last female saiyan! The way you portray the relationships within his family is very captivating, i was filled with laughter when Bra kept mimicking everything Vegeta was saying like a typical 4yr old. I am especially entranced by the relationship between Bulma and Vegeta and how well you've depicted Bulmas frustration and helplessness at not being able to do more to destroy the demons of Vegetas past. And the beautiful way she tries to comfort him humming a melodious tune while caressing vegetas skin hoping that her lullabye will soothe the agonising screams that echo throughout his tormented soul. Oh my gosh and the extract from the lyrics to Crawling by Linkin Park fits very well with the story i've listened to it about two times whilst reading this.
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 20, 2004 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sweet...claps to trunks and his mom...ans a BIG HAPPY BIRTHDAY to you...but don't ever think your free because your not...lol update soon..maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 19, 2004 01:42 CST
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well first off... happy birthday! yes the chapter was short and no vegeta *pouts* but it was still good. at least you got rid of that slut. to bad vegeta didnt' get to meet her haha. update soon!
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Reviewed By: cLaRyRoX On: November 18, 2004 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loving this story sooo much, plz update soon. Poor Bulma, my mum had breast cancer and i know what Trunks is feeling. I luv Vegeta sooo much too. Please update
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Title: reali good
Reviewed By: Daughter of the Forest [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 21:46 CST
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hey i realli like your story. its so kool to see vegeta as such a vunerable character to such things as going to a therapist and having nightmares that cause him pain. i like the way you write this story so please update soon..thanxs
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Title: reali good
Reviewed By: Daughter of the Forest [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 21:45 CST
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hey i realli like your story. its so kool to see vegeta as such a vunerable character to such things as going to a therapist and having nightmares that cause him pain. i like the way you write this tory so please update soon..thanxs
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 11, 2004 21:34 CST
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awww... poor vegeta can't even enjoy some lovin'. what will happen with trunks and his ex? update soon!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 09, 2004 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was lmao when they where in the doctors office.i feel so sorry for trunks .i really hope that something is done about that..and yes medication can effect your sex life.(not that i take them just know).i really am falling more in love with this story.and can wait for more...maria
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: November 09, 2004 19:18 CST
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Poor Vegeta, maybe they can find a med combo that doesn't leave him so blah. I thought it was hilarious when he went with Bulma to her pre-op. I could just picture the facial expressions he was making while she explained things to him. How is he going to react to her surgery? Bulma's gonna crash and burn soon if she doesn't accept any help. I love the story, thanks for the updates.
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: November 03, 2004 22:05 CST
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that bitch, dont worry trunks i'll kill her for you!!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 03, 2004 21:08 CST
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so glad that u skipped the trial and everything about that so no lagging on with the story. poor trunks hes really taking this hard and who wouldn't! please update soon want to know more.
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 01, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter is on of the best i've read so far..i talk to my son all the time like that and when he hurts i feel it and want to beat the crap out of the girls but i know that he has to handle his problems and grow up..wonderfully writen,,,claps to you...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: October 28, 2004 22:24 CDT
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yay at least we know now that bulma will be okay she won't die or anything. grr... damn why couldn't trunks just raise his ki a little more, she deserves to get her ass beaten but a little shattered hand would also be good. damn.... vegeta's past getting darker and darker now. update soon!!
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