| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 30, 2005 14:40 CDT
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man epeon doesn't giv eup does she, it was a complete surprise to see her again. bra is getting back to her cute self and i can see a conclusion slowly coming, it seems that the stories are all wrapping up soon. UPDATE SOON!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See...now you've done it! A clifthanger?!? I swear I'm going to have fits and kick and scream in the middle of the floor until the next chapter. I don't know how I'm gonna wait until its posted, but I supect that it'll be hell until you update. What a wonderfully grabbing chapter.
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Reviewed By: free-sprit not logged in On: September 30, 2005 09:38 CDT
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Gods, how I hate you. How can you stop here? that's just soo not fair! *screams* You better update soon, or I'll..... I dunno.. I'l cry? something like that I guess. Just please, come on, update
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell - not signed in On: September 30, 2005 09:22 CDT
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HOLY CRAP!!!!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: mlf (maccam) On: September 30, 2005 07:28 CDT
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Holds my breath until i read another chapter (don't wait to long) ;)
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Reviewed By: Dark KI (notloggedin On: September 30, 2005 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
evil bitch! Vegeta break her neck!
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Reviewed By: anonymous reader On: September 20, 2005 23:27 CDT
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I've really enjoyed reading what you've written on this fic because it's very different from anything I've read before. I particularly enjoyed the way you did the counseling visits because some people cannot pull it off without making it very...OOC. You did very well in that aspect. I'd love to read more of that. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 21:29 CDT
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I don't understand why you think that this chapter was bad, to me it was great. how she broke down and explain how she feels to him wow, and than how he couldn't feel the same, very powerful chapter in my book. please keep writing *HUGS*
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 19, 2005 14:24 CDT
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it never ends with the drama, when one problem is solved another one arises. i like that bra is slowly getting her memory back and that vegeta is once back to the shrink, since this is what the story is all about. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 10:28 CDT
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nice, and longer then the last one. I like the conversations between Vegeta and Dr. Nine. Niiice chapter, love the story update soon!
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Title: Aww!
Reviewed By: Mallie3(not logged in) On: September 18, 2005 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cute! Nice chapter I will be waiting here for the next please hurry! :)
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 10:10 CDT
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hmm... Short, but nice, but short. oh, and fineally, something is happening between Vegeta and Bra, it was so weird when they didn't talk... oh well, update soon!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: MLF(maccam) On: September 18, 2005 06:19 CDT
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Yes closer for her and her family, and for trunks to move on is a good thing too. BUT when i read Bra and Vegeta i had tears in my eyes. how his little child has to reach out to him instead of the other way around. The way this chapter ened was perfect. I'll miss this story when it's done..*HUGS*
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Title: Dark ki
Reviewed By: Dark ki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 03:39 CDT
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short but, sweet.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 18, 2005 03:04 CDT
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this was a very sappy chapter, hopefully we won't be seeing anymore of nessa, i just don't like that girl. bra and vegeta were very sweet in this chapter, but hope for a longer one next time, but we did get 2 chapters last time. UPDATE SOON!
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