| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: August 05, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very good. all your chapters give the readers a suspense ending which makes everyone come back for the next one. also you also update quickly so readers don't have to wait long to see what new and creative lit you are writing. keep going!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 04, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter.how you got vegeta to talk to those doctor's and the feeling that he's going though well written..can't wait to read more so update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:46 CDT
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aH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so good!! omg im like tottaly n competaly in love w/ this fic... sry i cant spell ne more 2 excited n hyper!! please please please please write more soon ah its so good i cant wait to here bout vegets torture n evehthing god i love this fic sry im rabmlin now buit write more soon!!!!!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 03, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter.such detail.now i really can't wait for the next chapter...i really feel for vegeta.in our lives we all go though stuff.so why should this be any different..very good job with this so far...can't wait for more...maria
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 03, 2004 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great story.i just started to read it i love it..i feel sorry for the hole family.but i know at least he's going to get so help.please update soon..maria
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 15:59 CDT
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oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Ah its great im in love! such a great fic lol... write more soon im gona go nuts till da next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Sophe On: July 23, 2004 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story alot. Please continue the story. I have to, need to find out what happens to Trunks and what Vegeta does to stop the memories. Please finish the story Thanx
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 20, 2004 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh how sad.i know you loss it sometimes but damn.why his only son...poor vegeta please help him...maria
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 05, 2004 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sweet...update soon.maria
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Reviewed By: sk8boi587 On: June 12, 2004 00:38 CDT
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Nice story. I really can't wait to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: lou-lou4729 On: June 12, 2004 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleive I haven't read this story when it was first posted! I thought it was another story I read so I skipped over it all the time. Finally today I just started reading to make sure and WHAM!! I'm hit with this amazing fanfic. I really like it. I like Vegeta's personality as well. Very realistic. Nice job. This is definitly going in my favorites list :)
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Title: dangety...
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 16:29 CDT
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That was dark. I like the intensity bwtn B&V. Think B shouldn've known better than to suggest a shrink, ne? (lol, I used to scream that at the t.v. when watching dbz--GET THAT MAN A PSYCHIATRIST!) Interested in how you're going to develop the family dynamic. And exactly how *does* our ouji fix himself of his awful past? debbiechan
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: June 08, 2004 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Vegeta and Bra should spend the whole day training.
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Reviewed By: Sageling On: June 03, 2004 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool start. Something out of the ordinary and very engaging. Can't wait for an update ^_~
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Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 12:49 CDT
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Well, this fic is really very dark. It disgusted me, which I bet was your intention. Which means it was good! I really like it, and I hope that you venture more into Vegeta's dark past. Please continue, and I wish you luck!
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