| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: March 23, 2005 14:00 CST
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more drama!! i wiched u would have gone through in more detail what happened between bulma and vegeta for theat 2 months that they did not speak. ooo... thats not trunks' baby, i wonder who's it is and is trunks going to confront nessa in the next chapter? update soon!
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde - not logged in On: March 23, 2005 12:07 CST
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Whoa...that was a twist I didn't see! At first, I thought the saga was going to end then THIS!!! Wow...keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: March 20, 2005 01:03 CST
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im back! haha sorry that i haven't reviewed like the last 8 chapters but ever since they put up that users can only review i stopped but i kept reading, well i just checked to see if u could review so here i am! i loved the ups and downs that vegeta went through with both bulma and trunks, they way you portrayed the way vegeta delt with how trunks preceived vegeta after finding out about vegeta's past was good. the fights between vegeta and bulma were excellent especially when we saw how vegeta really felt about his mate being human and bulma's husband being sayain. it was good to see that bulma actually got her freedom by dating that kid but the regret and guilt she felt afterwards and the way she responded to radditz's questions were indepth and not at all to mushy. i can't wait for the next chapter to come up and once again very sorry that i haven't reviewed in a long time. i feel so guilty that i've been reading without writing a review. update soon! haha sorry the review is so long i had to get this all out in one review instead of writing 8 separate ones.
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 23:28 CST
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damn i can't beleive that i forgat about this chapter..oh how i feel vegeta's pain..so much sorrow. and bulma's right they both are to blame in this mess that they have made for themselves. great chapter i loved it and i really can't wait for the next chapter..maria
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 17, 2005 20:51 CST
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damn!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 16, 2005 16:43 CST
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Cool update. Nice to see Bulma ADMIT she's a spoiled brat. If Vegeta was one, he'd be the king of a planet by now, but all he got instead was a life as Frieza's slave. All Bulma would have to do is flash her tits or credit card to get what she wants. Glad someone told her that she's expecting far too much from Vegeta, and common sense should've told her that too especially after hearing his therapy sessions with the doctor, and she has the hide to think that Vegeta's imprisoning her from fun.
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde--not logged in On: March 16, 2005 03:55 CST
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Wow...I love it. Especially when "Raditz" says "If I am called upon again female--". That part made me break down. Just the fact that he is so broken that he had to call upon his first protector for help...even if it's only in his mind. Wow...thats all I can say. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mallie On: March 15, 2005 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT KEEP IT UP!!!! THANKS A BUNCH!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sk8turgurl On: March 15, 2005 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOH! I liked this chapter VERY much!! Damn it! Now I can't wait until the next one!! HURRY PLEASE!!!!!
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Title: there is something wrong!?
Reviewed By: Mallie On: March 14, 2005 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm i am alittle confused...you see this seems like the one of the chapters from your story 'Only One' ....and this chapter has nothing to do with ..Bulma spending time with another man...maybe you made a mistake just fix it and let us see the real chappie!! :)
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Reviewed By: theshakeyone On: March 14, 2005 20:49 CST
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::blinks:: ::rechecks to make sure she's in the right story:: i'll write that one off as a dream sequence until the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: um ok On: March 14, 2005 20:01 CST
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thinking maybe you posted the wrong chapter...
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Reviewed By: Sk8turgurl On: March 14, 2005 19:59 CST
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Okay, I am officially confused. Your chapter summary and the story don't match. Did I miss something? Up until now, I have been breathlessly waiting for each chapter to be posted.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 14, 2005 19:51 CST
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Wow, what a chapter although I am a little confused. Was this a dream or what? What happened to Bulma, how did she die? Where was Nesa. Is this kind of like a what-could-have-been type thing? As violent as Trunks was in this chpater, I have to say that I think it was the most expressive and caring Vegeta has ever been towards his son. I really liked it, please update soon so we can find out what's going on
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Reviewed By: Mallie On: March 14, 2005 19:12 CST
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Ummm i am alittle confused...you see this seems like the one of the chapters from your story 'Only One' ....and this chapter has nothing to do with ..Bulma spending time with another man...maybe you made a mistake just fix it and let us see the real chappie!! :)
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