| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: cLaRyRoX On: October 28, 2004 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GrEaT GrEaT GrEaT!!!! LoVinG It!! Plz update. Really wana see the next chappy. U write Vegeta really well. Good on u. Keep up the good work =P
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 28, 2004 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so much to say about this chapter.fist i'm glad that vegeta is dealing with his pain and his past.he needs to put it behind him so he can heal.oh and i hope that bulma will kick that B^%^*$@#@ ass and soon...and i'm glad that she told him about the breast cancer.it's good that you put a human sickness in this story for them to deal with.it's a serious subject and i applaud you for that...please updat soon...maria
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 23:23 CDT
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I have to agree with Bulma, that went better than I expected. How are the kids gonna react? Please tell me someone beats the sh*t out of this slut that keeps screwing around with them.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 19:54 CDT
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Holy crap, what a great freaking story. Please update soon. I want to see how he reacts to this
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 22, 2004 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i want to cry..all that time trunks knew but never said nothing.and now bulma with the CANCER how much more is vegeta and his family will go through to be happy and at peace..great chapter..can't wait for more..maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: October 22, 2004 00:48 CDT
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thats quite disturbing with what trunks saw when he was 9, i think anyone would seeing a parent like that especially with someone not your mother. finally we know whats wrong with bulma... dragging it out like that making us guess. damn... bulma and vegeta got it on haha and trunks was soo cute but... hes still 16, pretty old. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 21:17 CDT
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Heh, I knew Vegeta...frustrated. Guess I didn't realize how much. Anywho nice chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 19, 2004 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad the he see's his blessings in front of him..he's always been a great dad because he stayed with them unlike goku..and i can't wait to read on how that woman will try to sue bulma..please update soon..maria great chapter again!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: October 18, 2004 21:34 CDT
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once again bra is sooo cute!! damn... someones horny haha. wow vegeta has emotions now and yet its feels weird to know that. wow bulma sure did a number on that bitch, yeah right vegetawould sleep with her. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: October 12, 2004 17:41 CDT
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good that bitch got fired!!! hahah pretty interesting with the converstation vegeta and trunks had. are we gonna find out more about bulma's doctor appointments? bulma seemed to forgive vegeta toooooo quickly, hopefully there'll be a scene that will give a huge suspense about vegeta and bulma. update soon!!!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 12, 2004 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really liked this chapter so much. oh how i would do the same thing if i was bulma...and the way vegeta and trunks where together was percious.please update soon..maria
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Reviewed By: PTL On: October 11, 2004 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing, I'm always looking for good B/V fics, especially when Bulla is a little girl. It's always fun to have her there. Anyways, I just wanted to say that I'm so happy that I'm reading this story. It is extremely well written, and has never made me want to stop reading it. I accually stayed up all night, on a schoolnight, and read all of the story. I was even almost late for my bus. I cannot wait until the next story comes out. Keep up the great fiction!!! *Thumbs up* :D
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 09, 2004 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was hard to read.i'm sure it must have been hard to write.i've been married for 21 years i could easily feel the same way that bulma does.my head is shaking as i write this...i really love this story and i can't not wait untill you up date...great chapter...i want more...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: October 09, 2004 00:22 CDT
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that was sooo sad. what is bulma going through now? will she forgive vegeta or have a resentment against him for now on. what happened during her doctors appointment, is something wrong? please update soon this is getting sooooooo GOOD!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 21:53 CDT
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Awwww. Poor Bulma. She's going through so much right now. Can't wait to see the next chappy.
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