| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: weee
Reviewed By: Free-sprit - to lazy to log in On: June 15, 2005 05:44 CDT
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oh nonono! Please don't stop the chapter there! Now i have to wait waaaay to long for the next chapter! I looooove it. It's the best fic I've ever read. Keep 'em commin'.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: June 15, 2005 00:50 CDT
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very good chapter... your writing can be very good; and this is an excellent example of that.
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Title: Fan
Reviewed By: animefreak03 On: June 08, 2005 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 is good right? if so then your story is amazing....i love the entire thing and how well you delved into Vegeta's psyche...he is a hard character to understand yet easy at the same time..does that make sense? Weell all in all you are a great writer and will be looking forward to the next installment...great job...you can find my stories on FF.net under the same name
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Reviewed By: Trisha (not logged in) On: June 07, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh four saiyans together for a month. sounds like it could be fun. a lot of things could happen, yah know. good job with the chapter. keep em comming!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: June 07, 2005 00:44 CDT
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i think this is the longest fic i've ever read. wow another 10 to 20 chapters left there better not be a sequal *haha*. love vegeta's commnet to nesa's parents, was very amusing. Hopefully vegeta deals with his flashbacks better than before since hes off the medications. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: kiku On: June 04, 2005 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Vegeta/Bulma fics I've ever read. Actually... maybe one of my most favorite fanfics... ever. It's romantic, funny, and has very deep emotions attached to each character and situation! And you've miraculously managed to keep them closely in character! (I especially love Bulma and Vegeta's interactions with each other. even the lemon scenes are deeply emotional and thoughtful!) Keep up the awesome work!!!
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Reviewed By: Trisha (not logged in) On: May 28, 2005 00:18 CDT
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i forgot to congratulate you. you're getting out of high school.getting out of high school was the best thing that ever happened to me. so yah congrats and good luck. did i already mention how much i love this fic?
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 06:58 CDT
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That was very funny in the end. but they do have issues that needs to be worked out and i hope soon. I'm glad to hear that your graduating from HS. wow i hope you have a great summer. and i can't wait for more of this great story..maria
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: May 26, 2005 14:23 CDT
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hahahahahahahahahhahahaha that was F'ing funny!
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Reviewed By: anja On: May 26, 2005 01:05 CDT
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That was sp embarasing! It was soo fun! I loved it! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: dark ki a.k.a lee On: May 25, 2005 23:38 CDT
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paragraphs would have made it easier but, i love it anyway.
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Reviewed By: Trisha (not logged in) On: May 25, 2005 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL well that was fun. cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: May 25, 2005 13:26 CDT
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yay... they resovled this fight! haha that girl is sucha slut hitting on vegeta knowing he came in with bulma. ooo.. cant wait for the conversation betweem the briefs and the in-laws. update soon!
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Reviewed By: anja On: May 18, 2005 09:05 CDT
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Wow, stong words! They needed to be sud though: I understand both of them... I mean, It's not very Vegeta-ish to ask for help, and settle down and stuff like that, but he has done it anyway, it's probably buggin' him.. :P
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 06:18 CDT
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Wow very strong chapter. Those words needed to be said and i'm glad that she said them. I only hope that things will start to brighten up a bit and soon...I love the way you put it all together in this chapter..please update soon...maria
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